celwriter: i am absolutely spilling with joy: the number of reviews for this story has passed my expectations and i thank all of my frequent readers, even though i don't know who many of them are, anyway, here is the next chapter:
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Chapter 18
"Mister Rainey?" Shooter said. Mort, very startled, shot abruptely from his couch.
"What?" Mort looked around, "I thought I told you to scram."
"That Richard Depp kid is gonna ask Celeste out and she's agonna accept."
"So, she's a teenage girl, they go on dates," Mort replied.
"Yes, but wha da ya know about this guy? Nothin. Mister Rainey, she's gonna pick him over you.'
"You don't know that, she loves me. Besides, that Depp kid might not call."
"Why would he ask for her phone number if he wasn plannin to ask Miss Rainey out? She's agonna do the same thing that Mrs. Rainey did, leavin you all alone and not returnin your love. You might as well keep her to yourself as soon as possible, but you're agonna need a place you like more than that garden of corn."
"I absolutely will not do.." The phone rang, interrupting Mort.
"I bet that, Mister Rainey, the phone is for Miss Rainey and is that Depp fella." Mort picked it up, turning away from Shooter.
"Hello?" he asked. Mort turned to Shooter, but he was gone.
"Hello, this is Richard Depp. I'm calling for Celeste?"
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celwriter: this is still the second day, but soon it will be the third and the climax of the first story. I have an idea for the second, so keep reading.
***PS I have 4 chapters for the story that Mort is supposedly writing on www.fictionpress.com. The story is called A Corn Caper for lack of a better title and it too is under celwriter.
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Chapter 18
"Mister Rainey?" Shooter said. Mort, very startled, shot abruptely from his couch.
"What?" Mort looked around, "I thought I told you to scram."
"That Richard Depp kid is gonna ask Celeste out and she's agonna accept."
"So, she's a teenage girl, they go on dates," Mort replied.
"Yes, but wha da ya know about this guy? Nothin. Mister Rainey, she's gonna pick him over you.'
"You don't know that, she loves me. Besides, that Depp kid might not call."
"Why would he ask for her phone number if he wasn plannin to ask Miss Rainey out? She's agonna do the same thing that Mrs. Rainey did, leavin you all alone and not returnin your love. You might as well keep her to yourself as soon as possible, but you're agonna need a place you like more than that garden of corn."
"I absolutely will not do.." The phone rang, interrupting Mort.
"I bet that, Mister Rainey, the phone is for Miss Rainey and is that Depp fella." Mort picked it up, turning away from Shooter.
"Hello?" he asked. Mort turned to Shooter, but he was gone.
"Hello, this is Richard Depp. I'm calling for Celeste?"
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celwriter: this is still the second day, but soon it will be the third and the climax of the first story. I have an idea for the second, so keep reading.
***PS I have 4 chapters for the story that Mort is supposedly writing on www.fictionpress.com. The story is called A Corn Caper for lack of a better title and it too is under celwriter.
