Why is it like this?
Introduction thing
Hello. My name is Yuna. I'm 16 years old. I live here with my cousin Rikku. She's the only one who helps me. Well what I mean to say is that I have this weakness when I see Tidus. Tidus is the guy I love. He loves me too. But we've been apart because of this sudden weakness I have when I'm with him. My weakness is ... I faint and get a hard time to breathe. So here's my story.
"My god Rikku why you gotta open your big mouth?" yelled Tidus
"Sorry Tidus. My bad. I didn't mean to tell Yunie that you were here! Sorry." Said Rikku.
Yuna said nicely, "its okay Tidus no need to yell at Rikku. I just want you to get out of here! You know what ..."
Rikku and Tidus, "YUNA!!!!! ARE YOU OKAY?"
"Huh?? gets up slowly what happened?" said Yuna
"Yuna you fainted!" said Tidus
Yuna: "you know what Tidus?! if you love me then leave me alone! Never come back here to vist me! Just leave me to peace. If you care for me, leave me! You're the only one causing me all this pain!!! throws Tidus a bat and it hits him"
Tidus leaves Yuna crying on the floor
chapter 2
none of the crappy stuff Yuna said "" .... Okae jhuss tah make it simple ...
okae here it goes...
"Grrr.. I hate it when tidus is around. I know it hurts me. But if he keeps on coming back here the next time he does I might be died!"
"don't say the Yunie! Your not gonna die! Tidus will . . uhmm never mind that . . haha."
"no Rikku say it again."
"nahh its okae."
"fine rikkuh be that way. acts dead"
"Yunie!! Stop it!!"
"okae okae... gosh keep this up then I'll really die!"
chapter 3
3:00 am
at yuna's house
"heyy Yunie are you okae there? It seems like someone's with you!"
"shh Rikku!! Its tidus! Don't tell her I was here! I just wanted to take her to the hospital so she can be free from the weakness she has!"
"okae tidus lets go!"
tidus and Rikku leave yuna's house and take yuna to the hospital then there they wait for 2 ½ hours.
"Tidus and Rikku? Oh yes. I have bad news for you two. Ms. Yuna couldn't make it. She said she saw you at the window then she suddenly had a heart attack. Than she stopped breathing and she passed away. I'm very sorry. But her last words were ' tell Tidus it's his fault if I die. But then tell him I love him very much and I'll always stay by his side.' "
Then 30 years passed by. Tidus and Rikku were old and were in the hospital because they both have heart problems. They're both in the same room. Then both look ahead and see Yuna. She tells them, "Tidus and Rikku come on! It's time to go!! Come on hurry up lets go now!"
Then ... the heart meter stoped for both Tidus and Rikku.. The three of them live happily ever after together.
The end...
