OK, one thing; when I wrote (in chapter 2) Dylan couldn't hear what Brenda
was thinking I ment to write saying. I don't know how it got mixed up. But
I just wanted to clear that up just in case someone might think it was
weird.
And sorry I wrote your name shannen1 with an 'o' like shannon1 when that's clearly wrong, I was just in a hurry...
I have to admit, I'm not the biggest 90210 expert and I don't really know if Dylan has had a "real girlfriend" before or not and if it lasted longer or shorter than him and Brenda, but if he has, in my story he has not... he he
I guess that's it, except: Please review!! ...................................................................................................................
Brandon: Hey bro!
Steve: Brando!
Steve was just entering the peach pit. He was very hungry and in the need of the famous mega burger.
Brandon: David is over there if you wanna go take a seat?
Steve: Yeah sure, and get me a mega burger will you?
Brandon: You got it!
Steve went over to David.
Steve: David... Have you...
David cut him off.
David: No, I haven't talked to Donna about it yet.
Steve: WHAT?! Man you have got until peach pit closes today or you'll sleep outside.
David: I'm meeting Donna here now ok? She has been shopping with Kelly and Andrea.
Steve: What about Brenda?
David: Her too, but she left with Dylan.
Steve: Yeah ok... Man, it's weird seeing Dylan with a girlfriend! I mean, for so long. Before two weeks would have been a miracle, now he has been with Brenda for what, 1 year?
David: Yeah I know
Brandon: Talking about my sister?
Brandon had come over with Steve's mega burger and overheard the conversation.
Steve: Yeah, her and Dylan...
Brandon: What about them?
Steve: Just the they have been going out for a long time
Brandon: So what are you saying?
Steve: Nothing, it's just that he has changed after he met her. He hasn't ever had a girlfriend for that long before.
Brandon: Yeah I know, well, he got the best!
Brandon smiles and walks away.
Steve: Yeah I know...
Steve said in a low voice to himself.
David: what?
Steve: just forget it
David: ok
David saw Donna come in. He looked at Steve nervously and went over.
David: Hey Donna!
Donna: David! I'm so glad to see you.
David: Look, do you wanna go somewhere else? I have to talk to you...
Donna: Yeah sure
As they left Brenda and Dylan entered.
Steve: Brenda!
Brenda: Hey Steve!
Dylan: So, can I get you anything?
Brenda: Nah, just a coke?
Dylan: ok
Brenda went over and sat down next to Steve.
Brenda: So, eating alone?
Steve: Well, David was here a second ago, but he left with Donna and now you are here, so I guess that would have to be a no.
Brenda: ok
Steve: What have you done all day?
Brenda: I've been to the mall with Andrea, Kelly and Donna.
Steve: Ok, what did you buy?
Brenda: I where basically shopping for the Hawaii trip so I bought two bikinis and a red dress.
Steve: Oh really... I bet you look great in it
Brenda didn't really know what to say. Dylan had just overheard Steve's last comment and spoke for her.
Dylan: Don't you try anything there, Steve.
Steve: Hey Dylan...
Steve said without looking at him and without any expression on his face or in his voice. Dylan noticed, and thought it were weird, but quickly turned his attention back to Brenda. He kissed her on the cheek.
Dylan: Oh, here's your coke
Brenda: Thanks
Brenda said and took a sip.
Brenda: So are you guys ready for a trip to Hawaii?
Steve turned back to her and smiled at her.
Steve: Hell yeah
Dylan: absolutely
Kelly put some more whipped cream on her cocoa and went back to the living room. She was home alone. Her mom and Mel were out having dinner and David where somewhere with Donna. She had come home about 10 minutes ago. She had gone upstairs to put on some comfy clothing and went downstairs to make herself some hot cocoa. She sat down in a chair and tucked herself in a blanket and looked outside the window. It was raining outside. She was thinking about Dylan and how hard it was going to be to get his attention. First of all, to get his attention of Brenda. It was, like, he was always looking at her, looking for her, talking about her or you could see he was thinking about her. How the hell was she going to compete with that? She had told Donna and Andrea she thought he was growing sick of her, but she knew that was a lie. But that would anyways have to be her key in. His desire to be with someone else and someone new for a change. She didn't know how she possibly could manage to make him want that, but she had to do it. For herself, and to make Dylan realise he was ment to be with her, 'cause she knew. She knew they were ment to be together, they were soul mates.
Dylan was looking at Brenda while she was talking to Andrea that had just joined them; she was sitting next to Steve. It was weird how he was so sure about their relationship. He had never felt like this for anybody before. He loved her, he really loved her. Most people thought he was on the verge of dumping her, that he was getting tired of her. It was understandable; he had never been with someone for this long before. But whatever they thought, they were wrong. He didn't need someone new, he only wanted Brenda. He couldn't imagine himself with someone else. He grew more and more in love with her every day. She was his soul mate.
Brenda: Dylan, are you up for it?
Dylan: Up for what?
Dylan's mind joined the others. Brenda thought he was pretty out of it today. It was like he was lost in some other world and she now and then had to drag him out of it by saying his name a hundred times.
Brenda: Where were you?
Dylan: what? I was here, what do you mean?
Brenda turned to look at Steve and Andrea and rolled her eyes.
Brenda: ok...
Steve: You should appreciate what you got a little more
Steve said to Dylan, but not looking at him.
Dylan: exuse me?
Steve: You never pay attention to anything Brenda says
Dylan: What the hell? I do listen to her! What's all this about`?
Steve: Just forget it, I'm leaving. Bye Brenda, bye Andrea, bye Dylan
Steve said"Dylan" with disgust in his voice. He got up to walk to the door and left Brenda and Andrea sitting there not really knowing what just happened. Dylan just looked angry.
Dylan: You know I listen to you right?
Brenda: Yeah, sure
Dylan: Ok, good
Dylan kissed her on the cheek and got up to go after Steve. Dylan had to know what that scene that just happened was all about. Though he was kind of mad at Steve for saying something like that, he was obviously not ok and Dylan had to ask him what was wrong.
Dylan: Steve! Wait up!
Steve: What do you want McKay?
Steve turned and looked at Dylan. His eyes were all but friendly.
Dylan: What's going on with you?
Steve: What's that supposed to mean?
Dylan: Well, obviously something is wrong considering how you acted inside
Steve: Yeah something is wrong, but I don't think you're the one I should tell
Dylan: Go tell Brandon then!
Steve: Can't talk to him either...
Dylan: Then who!? David, Donna, Kelly, Brenda?
Steve: It's all just to weird and I don't think you would be too happy if I told Brenda.
Dylan thought about what Steve had just said. Was he hinting at something? Ok, he didn't feel he could speak to him or Brenda about it, but why not Brandon? Steve was just acting weird... And why wouldn't he be to happy if he told Brenda?
Dylan: Why not?
Steve: Just forget it ok?
Dylan: Steve, I don't get it
Steve looked like he felt troubled. Wondering if he should tell Dylan or not. How would he react? Would it be the right thing to tell him or just plain stupid? Maybe it was for the better, then Dylan would know where he stood and then whatever happened, happened. At least he would get it off his chest.
Dylan could see Steve was about to tell him so Dylan tried asking him again.
Dylan: What's the matter Steve?
Steve was silent for a moment and looked up at Dylan with the face of a kid that has done something really bad and is waiting for his punishment.
Steve: You see for the last couple of weeks...
He hesitated. Was this really a good idea?
Dylan: Come on Steve, for the last couple of weeks you have what?
Steve decided to just say it like that, no stalling, just straight forward, so he did.
Steve: I'm in love with Brenda! OK?
And sorry I wrote your name shannen1 with an 'o' like shannon1 when that's clearly wrong, I was just in a hurry...
I have to admit, I'm not the biggest 90210 expert and I don't really know if Dylan has had a "real girlfriend" before or not and if it lasted longer or shorter than him and Brenda, but if he has, in my story he has not... he he
I guess that's it, except: Please review!! ...................................................................................................................
Brandon: Hey bro!
Steve: Brando!
Steve was just entering the peach pit. He was very hungry and in the need of the famous mega burger.
Brandon: David is over there if you wanna go take a seat?
Steve: Yeah sure, and get me a mega burger will you?
Brandon: You got it!
Steve went over to David.
Steve: David... Have you...
David cut him off.
David: No, I haven't talked to Donna about it yet.
Steve: WHAT?! Man you have got until peach pit closes today or you'll sleep outside.
David: I'm meeting Donna here now ok? She has been shopping with Kelly and Andrea.
Steve: What about Brenda?
David: Her too, but she left with Dylan.
Steve: Yeah ok... Man, it's weird seeing Dylan with a girlfriend! I mean, for so long. Before two weeks would have been a miracle, now he has been with Brenda for what, 1 year?
David: Yeah I know
Brandon: Talking about my sister?
Brandon had come over with Steve's mega burger and overheard the conversation.
Steve: Yeah, her and Dylan...
Brandon: What about them?
Steve: Just the they have been going out for a long time
Brandon: So what are you saying?
Steve: Nothing, it's just that he has changed after he met her. He hasn't ever had a girlfriend for that long before.
Brandon: Yeah I know, well, he got the best!
Brandon smiles and walks away.
Steve: Yeah I know...
Steve said in a low voice to himself.
David: what?
Steve: just forget it
David: ok
David saw Donna come in. He looked at Steve nervously and went over.
David: Hey Donna!
Donna: David! I'm so glad to see you.
David: Look, do you wanna go somewhere else? I have to talk to you...
Donna: Yeah sure
As they left Brenda and Dylan entered.
Steve: Brenda!
Brenda: Hey Steve!
Dylan: So, can I get you anything?
Brenda: Nah, just a coke?
Dylan: ok
Brenda went over and sat down next to Steve.
Brenda: So, eating alone?
Steve: Well, David was here a second ago, but he left with Donna and now you are here, so I guess that would have to be a no.
Brenda: ok
Steve: What have you done all day?
Brenda: I've been to the mall with Andrea, Kelly and Donna.
Steve: Ok, what did you buy?
Brenda: I where basically shopping for the Hawaii trip so I bought two bikinis and a red dress.
Steve: Oh really... I bet you look great in it
Brenda didn't really know what to say. Dylan had just overheard Steve's last comment and spoke for her.
Dylan: Don't you try anything there, Steve.
Steve: Hey Dylan...
Steve said without looking at him and without any expression on his face or in his voice. Dylan noticed, and thought it were weird, but quickly turned his attention back to Brenda. He kissed her on the cheek.
Dylan: Oh, here's your coke
Brenda: Thanks
Brenda said and took a sip.
Brenda: So are you guys ready for a trip to Hawaii?
Steve turned back to her and smiled at her.
Steve: Hell yeah
Dylan: absolutely
Kelly put some more whipped cream on her cocoa and went back to the living room. She was home alone. Her mom and Mel were out having dinner and David where somewhere with Donna. She had come home about 10 minutes ago. She had gone upstairs to put on some comfy clothing and went downstairs to make herself some hot cocoa. She sat down in a chair and tucked herself in a blanket and looked outside the window. It was raining outside. She was thinking about Dylan and how hard it was going to be to get his attention. First of all, to get his attention of Brenda. It was, like, he was always looking at her, looking for her, talking about her or you could see he was thinking about her. How the hell was she going to compete with that? She had told Donna and Andrea she thought he was growing sick of her, but she knew that was a lie. But that would anyways have to be her key in. His desire to be with someone else and someone new for a change. She didn't know how she possibly could manage to make him want that, but she had to do it. For herself, and to make Dylan realise he was ment to be with her, 'cause she knew. She knew they were ment to be together, they were soul mates.
Dylan was looking at Brenda while she was talking to Andrea that had just joined them; she was sitting next to Steve. It was weird how he was so sure about their relationship. He had never felt like this for anybody before. He loved her, he really loved her. Most people thought he was on the verge of dumping her, that he was getting tired of her. It was understandable; he had never been with someone for this long before. But whatever they thought, they were wrong. He didn't need someone new, he only wanted Brenda. He couldn't imagine himself with someone else. He grew more and more in love with her every day. She was his soul mate.
Brenda: Dylan, are you up for it?
Dylan: Up for what?
Dylan's mind joined the others. Brenda thought he was pretty out of it today. It was like he was lost in some other world and she now and then had to drag him out of it by saying his name a hundred times.
Brenda: Where were you?
Dylan: what? I was here, what do you mean?
Brenda turned to look at Steve and Andrea and rolled her eyes.
Brenda: ok...
Steve: You should appreciate what you got a little more
Steve said to Dylan, but not looking at him.
Dylan: exuse me?
Steve: You never pay attention to anything Brenda says
Dylan: What the hell? I do listen to her! What's all this about`?
Steve: Just forget it, I'm leaving. Bye Brenda, bye Andrea, bye Dylan
Steve said"Dylan" with disgust in his voice. He got up to walk to the door and left Brenda and Andrea sitting there not really knowing what just happened. Dylan just looked angry.
Dylan: You know I listen to you right?
Brenda: Yeah, sure
Dylan: Ok, good
Dylan kissed her on the cheek and got up to go after Steve. Dylan had to know what that scene that just happened was all about. Though he was kind of mad at Steve for saying something like that, he was obviously not ok and Dylan had to ask him what was wrong.
Dylan: Steve! Wait up!
Steve: What do you want McKay?
Steve turned and looked at Dylan. His eyes were all but friendly.
Dylan: What's going on with you?
Steve: What's that supposed to mean?
Dylan: Well, obviously something is wrong considering how you acted inside
Steve: Yeah something is wrong, but I don't think you're the one I should tell
Dylan: Go tell Brandon then!
Steve: Can't talk to him either...
Dylan: Then who!? David, Donna, Kelly, Brenda?
Steve: It's all just to weird and I don't think you would be too happy if I told Brenda.
Dylan thought about what Steve had just said. Was he hinting at something? Ok, he didn't feel he could speak to him or Brenda about it, but why not Brandon? Steve was just acting weird... And why wouldn't he be to happy if he told Brenda?
Dylan: Why not?
Steve: Just forget it ok?
Dylan: Steve, I don't get it
Steve looked like he felt troubled. Wondering if he should tell Dylan or not. How would he react? Would it be the right thing to tell him or just plain stupid? Maybe it was for the better, then Dylan would know where he stood and then whatever happened, happened. At least he would get it off his chest.
Dylan could see Steve was about to tell him so Dylan tried asking him again.
Dylan: What's the matter Steve?
Steve was silent for a moment and looked up at Dylan with the face of a kid that has done something really bad and is waiting for his punishment.
Steve: You see for the last couple of weeks...
He hesitated. Was this really a good idea?
Dylan: Come on Steve, for the last couple of weeks you have what?
Steve decided to just say it like that, no stalling, just straight forward, so he did.
Steve: I'm in love with Brenda! OK?
