Im not very happy with myself. I haven't updated for many days, and I know how annoying that can be. So here is your update! But before we start, i have a few things to say. First off, thanks for the reviews, they keep me happy and a happy author means lots of updates! Second-

::::Special thanks to RMB!!!! You're the only one who noticed (or atleast said anything about it) my little Crouching tiger, Hidden dragon thing. I couldn't think of any good ship names, then I remembered that some authors put in little things like that, and see if anybody notices them. Im glad you noticed it!

There are a few questions i'd like to answer too.

One: This story is going to be alot longer than my last one. Im only going to do a few more chapters of her being ten, then im going to skip to her being twelve (when she starts to notice boys and becomes more womanly!) , then ill probably have her turn thirteen, then fifteen, ect. ect. What do you think?? Sound good??

Two: Jack's hair is coming up soon.....

And last but not least- I have to thank everyone who likes the way im writing this. Im actually amazed at how many of you guys say her voice 'draws you in' ! So thank you, im glad you guys like it!!

Ahh..long authors note! On with the nice story!!

Disclaimer: Pirates ain't mine baby, so sod off!!..............j/k. read my story.

Chapter Five: Yo-ho Yo-ho, Annd a Red Bandana!!

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I gots more money tha' i ever had before!! I can'ts believe how much ship boys get....I wonders how much i gets when i get promated.

Promated is when i gets older an' bigger an' the Captain pays me more. Im gonna get promated I says to Jack. He just nods and gives me a funny look.

Jack has been doin' that alot lately. Givin' me funny looks.

I wonders if its 'cause o' that kiss.

The crew is really happy. We're goin' ashore soon, Jack says to go an' get meself somethin' to put me coins in. Me eyes get wide an' i looks down at me money, all sparkly an' heavy in me skirt. I turn an' runs to the galley, an' i asks Mannie if i cans barrow a money pouch. Mannie says 'e don' have no spare, so's i go an' find Fig.

Fig has one, an' he tosses it to me. But i's don' catch it in time, and it hits me in the face. Fig chuckles (the bastard) and pats me head. He looks out to th' land and smiles.

"Tortuga, now tha's a great place for drinks an' women. But for clothes an' the like? Bloody, you'll be lucky to find a decent bit o' wood priced at its proper worth! Nope, Tortuga ain't a place for shoppin'. Well, at least no' that kind o' shoppin."

Thats what Fig says. I nod me head, pretendin' i knows exactly what 'es talkin' about.

Joe walks up, an' he an' Fig start talkin' an jokin'. I stand there for a minute, wonderin' if theys gonna talk about somethin' interestin, but theys don't. I grip th' money pouch real tight, an' look down at me coins. They clank against eachother, an i feel all proud and fine.

Im a rich lady now, I's thinks. I walk away from Fig an' Joe, thinkin all the while.

I thinks about th' clothes ill be able to get. Im walkin' into th' finest dress makers in the whole town! The woman is a nice, fat crinkly one. Kinda like Nan.

But thinkin' of Nan hurts me, an' i gets sad. So's i push good ol' Nan's face away from me mind. I gots to think of me fine dresses!

Blue, i thinks. Blue. I always look good in blue. A nice pretty blue dress. With lace. An'...An'....

A tear comes down me cheek, i rub at it real hard. I shouldn't be cryin'. Nan wanted me gone! But i knows that ain't true. Nan wanted somethin' better for me. Nan cared 'bout me. Nan prolly misses me.

I miss Nan. Me forehead gets all wrinkled, an' my bottom lip shakes.

I don' wanna cry.

"Love?"

I looks up an' see's Jack, lookin down at me all worried and concerned.

I jump into his arms, feeling all bad an' unhappy.

"I miss 'er Jack..." I sobs out.

Jack rubs me back, shushin' me an' tellin' me she misses me too. He says its better for me, to be out here an' goin' places. Ill get to fall in love 'e says.

I tells 'im about me wantin' to cry alot, but knowing i shouldn't.

Jack tells me i gots to cry, whenever i feels like it. He says 'is mother used to tell 'im that it makes you strong. I sniff, takin' that in.

"Did it make you strong Jack? Did it?"

"Aye."

Jack stands up, pullin' me with 'im.

"Cryin' makes you feel better, helps you so you won't feel like your holdin' everythin' in and are gonna burst any minute."

"Splaterin' everybody with me innards?" I asks.

Jack smiles 'is crooked smile.

"Aye. So you won't splatter folks with your innards."

I wipe me face on Jack's sleeve. I gets a bit of snot on it, but i don' think Jack noticed.

"You miss anyone Jack?"

But tha' turns out to be a bad thing to ask. Jack turns away real fast, but i gets a look at 'is face. Jack looks real sad. I see 'is shoulders shake, an' i puts me hand on 'is arm.

"Jack," I says. "Jack, im real sorry..."

I stays quiet.

"I miss me mum."

I looks up at th' back o' Jack's head.

"She was th' one that took care o' me. Told me stories, an' taught me ways to live without money. My dad was a drunk, spent most everythin' we had on ale an' whiskey. She died when i was twelve."

I felt me eyes tear up, ands i hugs Jack from behind.

"I didn't know me mum. She left me...Didn't even say goodbye."

I walks around Jack, stoppin' when im right in fron't o' him. He smiles down at me, and i grabs his hands.

"Jack! Charlie! C'mon you two, move your arses!!"

We smile at eachother an' run to obey th' Captain.

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I ain't never been to a place like this. The tavernes ain't so lively as th' ones in Tortuga, but the drinks taste better.

Well, thats what Jack says.

The sun was setting whiles we left th' ship. The crew all gathered 'round and talked abou' where to sleep for th' night.

I just wants a clean warm bed.

Me feet feel like they're gonna freeze off!

The Captain thinks its all best if we's all go to a nice quiet like place. He says th' men 'ave had their fun, an' its time

we all gets some warm food in our stomachs and somes good sleep.

Im likin' this idea, an' i hope the rest o' the crew do too.

I can see some ' the crew don' wanna go to bed yet, an' Joe suggests gettin' a drink before gettin to bed.

No women. Th' Captain says.

A few o' the crew mutter darkly, an' i looks up at Jack. Jack don' look too happy 'bout this, but 'is face becomes all calm an' unwrinkled. I guess 'e don' want to seem disrespec-full.

Th' Captain turns to me.

"Charlie'll be wantin' to get some rest. Jack, you goin' to get a drink?"

Jack nods. I feels kinda like Jack is betrayin' me, but i don' say nothin' about it.

"Alright then, Charlie, how 'bout joinin' me for some hot food?"

"And me." Mannie yawns a bit.

I nod me head, not really wantin' th' food, but not havin' much else to do. I really need get meself some things ta pass th' time with. I's thinks.

Maybe learn some tunes?

Fig 'as got 'imself a wife! I remember how happy 'e was to be gettin' here. Turns out, he's gots himself a wife in this town. I was really surprised...

Fig came with th' Captain, Mannie an' me. We's walk into the Inn, ands suddenly a tiny woman flys by me and lands in Fig's arms!

Her name is Darla, an' she's real nice.

"Darla!" The Captain says. "How've you been eh? Fig here 'as been naggin' me to return 'im to his lovely wife for ages!"

"Oh! Mr. Dawns, far too long 'ave ye been keepin' me husband at sea, but as longs as you bring 'im back I ain't one to complain!"

They laughed, and Fig 'ad her meet Mannie. She was very nice, offerin' 'im somethin' to drink, makin' him comfy.

An's then,

"Oh! My goodness, honey you look so tired!"

I looks aroun' wonderin' who she was talkin' too, an' if they were part o' the crew. But then i hears the Captain tell 'er me name.

"Charlotte Conway? Ohh, such a pretty name!"

Darla is lookin' at me. Her smile is kind, ands i thinks about how pretty she is. She's all plump in all th' right places, an' her mouth is a bright pink.

The Captain, Mannie an' Fig all sit down at a table, an's i start sittin' down with 'em but Darla squeeks and tells me I ain't to be sittin' with th' men.

"Well where do i's sits then?"

"With the children, o' course."

Oh.

"Do i stills gets food?"

"O' course, c'mon now."

Darla pulls me into a back room, th' kitchen, turns out. She pushes me over to a table set up all nicely in a corner, out o' the way of any workin' help.

I looks closely at th' three folks sittin' there. Two boys, an' one girl.

"Ello, ma. Who's she?" The biggest one, a boy, asks Darla.

"Me names Charlie, who're you?"

I shakes off Darla's hands, knowin' if i lets them see 'er orderin' me's around, they'll thinks they get to too.

"Ello, Charlie. This heres Scat,"

"Scarlet. Not scat!" The little girl, i thinks she's abou' five, glares a bit at 'er older brother. Firey bit, i's thinks.

"Scat. An' this lil' boy here is Jon. Im Randy."

Randy sticks out 'is hand, with Jon copyin'. I lean over th' table to take 'is hand, but Darla slaps 'em both, tellin us we ain't to touch

eachother none.

I asks why not, an' Darla tells me it ain't gonna be good for us when we gets older.

"But ma, won't it be better for us? I means, a man 'as got to learn 'ow to touch a woman, else 'e ain't gonna know how to treat 'er

right."

Jon nods 'is head.

Darla huffs and boxes Randy. Now i ain't one to mix wi' family business, but i's don't like th' way Darla's turnin' out.

Randy's a clever one though.

He just kept 'is mouth shut, not cryin' out like i's bets little Jon would do. Then once Darla's got 'er back turned, Randy winks and

lightly pats th' seat next to 'im.

I plop meself down, grinnin' from ear to ear. I like this Randy bit.

"Now Charlotte, 'ave ye ever been taught to eat like a lady? Goodness knows 'ow anyone can learn to be civilized. What wi' bein' on a ship full

o' barbarians? Meanin' no harm to th' Captain ands Fig. But look at th' rags on that Mannie! Ye would thinks 'e would know such a simple thin'

as 'ow to wash! Bein' the grown man that 'e is."

I ain't liking her talk one bit.

Seems Randy ain't either.

"Come now ma, That ain't such a nice thin' to say. Who knows what 'appened out there eh? Th' ship could've gotten attacked or sumthin'

worse!"

Darla's face turned white, and she bites 'er lip.

"Goodness! Oh, what if your righ'? Mannie could have drowned! Oh, your da could have been shot!"

"Oh ma, what 'appened out there? Ma?"

It was lil' Jon. He looks all small an' scared. Scat looks over at me, an' points 'er finger.

"She knows she knows!"

I suddenly gets four pairs of eyes on me. I looks over at Randy, the corners o' his mouth go ups, an' 'e winks.

I knows what to do, i's thinks. Boy will this be fun.

"Ohh! Oh, oh, ohhh...It was so bad! Scared out o' me wits, i's was. Everythin' was dark, and wet. I swore th' sea was gonna

swallow us up!"

Scat gasps, an' Darla grips Jon's chair till 'er knuckles is white. Randy's smile gets bigger.

"Men were trippin' over themselves, an' th' Captain was shoutin' out orders, tryin' to keep th' men in line. Tryin' to keep our hopes up, 'e was.

An' Mannie, Mannie shot three men! Eah one tryin' to get to th' Captain. Mannie is a loyal one, Darla, 'e saved many men tha' night.

'cludin' me."

"And Da? what about Da?" Scat leaned forward.

"Ohh, your Da was brave too. Gave many strong men th' strength they was startin' to lack. So brave, 'e was. It was a nasty nigh' Miss Darla, bringin'

it up with any o' th' crew ain't much o' a good idea. I ain't too keen either."

Darla, lookin' grim, nods.

"Yes,...I won't bring it up. 'sides, war ain't for women. Hear? no more talk o' it."

All three o' them nod.

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IT'S TORTURE!!!!

I been stuck 'ere for three 'orrible days! Damn Jack, Damn this 'ole town!

Don' slouch, don' speak like that, don' speak wi' that man, don' hitch up your skirts when ye run, don' run, blah-blah-blah!!

Thats all i 'ear all day!

I don' like Darla no more.

I don' like being a lady niether. Darla's wormed 'er way into th' Captain's mind. She got 'im to agree with 'er about me manners.

I says i gots fine manners, but Darla says that ain't true, an's i got

to learn to be a lady, else no man'll want me.

"I don' believe that. I knows women that talks worser than me." I says.

"Huh, and have they gots a man?"

"They gots many."

"Whores maybe?"

"I guess."

"I see."

Darla don' say nothin' after that. But she gets this funny lookin' look on 'er face. A look I don' like.

"I ain't gotta learn much do I?" I asks.

"You'll be taken lessons from me till ye leave."

"Can I get a day to do some shoppin??"

"Hmm..."

Time to turn on th' old charm.

"Pleeaasee?" Big round eyes, leanin' forward, me hands clasped together prayer like.

Darla's face softens, an' I knows I won.

"Okay, but ye 'ave to make sure ye learn your lessons."

I nod me head a lot.

Maybe it won' be so bad....

An' im th' Captain o' th' bloody English fleet. I's thinks.

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"Ey, Charlie, how's it goin'?"

I scowl at me stitchin' an' turn around.

"Ello, Jack."

"Woa...Love, whats wrong?"

"I been 'ere for seven days Jack, thats whats wrong!"

"Has it been seven already?...Seems like three."

"For you maybe..."

"Ain't you havin' fun with this...this lady stuff?"

"No, Sparrow, I ain't. An' you ain't helpin' any either."

"What do ye mean love?"

"Jack! Ye were suppose to take me out to go shoppin', I don' know me way aroun' none...."

Jack bites 'is lip an' plops down beside me.

"Sorry love, I didn't know ye wanted to go shoppin' so much."

"Its not just shoppin' Jack,..I ain't seen you much lately."

"Love-"

"Charlie!"

I turns to th' voice.

"Ey, Randy!"

Randy comes up to me, an' reaches over to pull me 'air.

"Who's this?"

I looks over at Jack.

"Randy."

Jack frowns, an' looks at Randy.

"Randy, this 'ere is Jack Sparrow."

"Ello, Jack. Me Da is a shipmate o' yours. Fig, know 'im?"

"Aye. I know Fig."

I looks back an' forth, not sure why they're both all quiet like.

Randy does this lil' bouncy thing on 'is feet.

"So, Charlie, you doin' anything after that stitchin'?"

Just as im about to say 'no', Jack speaks up.

"She is."

"Oh." Randy stands there for a minute. "Ok, see ya later then Charlie."

He nods to Jack.

We watch as Randy walks off. I turn back to Jack.

"I am?" I asks.

"Aye. Shoppin' remember?"

I throws meself into Jack's arms.

"Aye."

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Im starin' as we walk past shops.

"I ain't never heard o' these things.."

Jack just grunts an' pulls me along.

"Theres so many.." I says.

Jack just grunts again.

"Never seen a monkey before..."

Another grunt. This time I frown.

"Jack?" I asks.

"You like that Randy feller?"

Whats this about? I's thinks.

"A bit."

"How much is a bit?"

Jack stops walkin' an' turns to face me. I looks up at him an' shrug.

"I would lie to get 'im out o' trouble.."

Jack just stares down at me. I starts to get uncomfy. I reach up to scratch me head.

"He try anythin' with you?"

I frown an' me nose crinkles.

"....anythin' funny?"

Jack nods.

"No."

He nods again.

"Good, kick 'im real hard if he does."

This time I nods me head.

"C'mon." Jack takes me hand an' pulls me over to a shop.

I look into th' window, me face pressin' against it.

"OooOoooOOooo..."

I spot a pretty piece of cloth. Its dark red.

Jack sighs, an' pulls me into th' shop.

"Jack!"

I looks up an' see's a pretty blonde woman looking frightened.

"Jack you shoul-"

"Shh, shhh, love. We're here to buy Charlie some clothes."

The woman's gaze comes down to me, an' I makes sure to give 'er a wide toothy grin.

"Oh.." she gets a funny disapointed look on 'er face.

"Whats that for?"

I points to th' red cloth.

"Head cloth." She says. "Its a hair cloth. Meant to keep th' hair out o' your face."

I look up at Jack, thinkin'.

"Well, Lizzy, you got anything that might fit Charlie here?"

Lizzy looks upset.

"O' course!"

"Can i's see them then?" I asks.

She huffs and swings around on 'er heel. I cock me head to th' side, likin' th' way she did that. I gots to try that. I's thinks.

Jack yanks me hand, pullin' me with 'im.

I gets a look at that Head Cloth, but Jack pulls me away. He takes me over to some hats.

"One o' these days Charlie....One o' these days."

I blink.

"What?"

"Im gonna get me a hat, Charlie."

"Okay."

I turns around. Theres this woman standing near th' door. She don' seem to be movin' much. She's wearin' a dirty shawl, an' a brown dress.

It takes me a moment to notice she's glaring at me. Me eyes widen, an' I grab on to Jack's jacket.

The woman smiles, showin' all 'er missing teeth.

I rub th' back o' me hand on me mouth.

"Here ye are Girl, these should fit ye."

I jump.

Jack takes the bundle o' clothes from Lizzy, and pulls me money pouch out o' his jacket.

Me eyes widen, an' I feel around for me pouch. Bloody bastard. I's thinks. Must 'ave taken me pouch when I wasn't lookin'.

"Thanks Lizzy, I won' bother ye again."

But from th' look on Lizzy's face, I can tells she don' mind 'im botherin' her, and wishes 'e would do it more often.

I smile.

"C'mon Charlie." Jack says, pullin' me out o' the store.

I gets a glimpse o' the cloth again, an' I looks up at Jack. All I see is his long hair swingin' back an' forth. I gets an idea.

"Wait."

Jack stops, lookin' back at me.

"What?"

I pounce on Jack's open jacket, fumblin' around to get me pouch.

"One more thing Jack."

I runs back to th' store. Lizzy looks up in surprise, an' the woman gurgles.

"Lizzy, 'ow much is that Head Cloth?"

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Finaly. We're goin' to set sail again. Once I 'eard this, I whooped, doin' a little jigg, an' ran from Darla an' Scat.

"Me torture is over!!" I yells out, runnin' out, me hands up in th' air.

Fig laughs, smackin' th' glarin' Darla on 'er arse.

"Gonna 'ave to stick with Scarlet, darlin', this one's too wild."

I runs into th' Inn, an' up to me room. I grab all me things, stuffin' them into th' pack th' First Mate gave me.

I turn around, an' see's Randy leanin' in th' door way.

"You leavin?" He asks.

I nod.

He pushes 'imself off the door way, an' walks up to me.

"And ye want to go?"

I nod me head slowly.

"Didn't you like it here?"

"O' course I liked it."

"But your still leavin?"

"I 'ave too Randy."

"You sure? I mean...you could ask th' Captain to stay."

"I can't do that Randy..I've got to go with th' crew."

Randy bite 'is lip an' nods.

"An' I gots to stay 'ere."

"You don't have to Randy, you could come with us!"

Me eyes light up, an' I gets real excited.

But Randy sniffs, an' shakes 'is head. Me heart deflates, an' I feel all droopy an' wilted. Like a flower in th' hot sun.

"Me Da says I gots to watch over Ma an' Scat...oh an' Jon."

"Oh."

Randy nods.

"Well, I got to go, see ya around Charlie..."

"Wait.."

Randy stops, an' looks at me, all sad like. I sniff. Then we're huggin, and sniffin' together.

"I'll miss you Randy.."

"An' im sure to miss you.."

"We'll see eachother again, won't we?"

Randy pulls away from me, 'is face fierce through all the tears. He nods, grippin' me shoulders tight.

"I hope so, Charlie, I hope so."

I's gets all quiet. This is a 'motional moment, i's thinks.

Then I feel somethin' on me mouth, an' I realize its Randy's lips.

He's kissin' me!!!

Me mind screams. Kiss 'im back, kiss 'im back! I's thinks. Me lips respond, an' I press harder into Randy's lips.

"Charlie?? You get that bony arse movin' else-"

Jack stares at me an' Randy. We jump apart like startled rabbits, an' Randy's face is all red.

"Ello, Jack, im on me way."

Jack is still starin'.

"Ill see you around Charlie..." Randy says quietly, an' slides past Jack out o' me door.

I frown, lookin' at Jack.

"Jack?"

Jack seems to come awake, an' looks coldly at me.

"Hurry up."

He swings aroun', leavin' me door open, an' leaves.

I don' know what to say. Well...I don' know what to thinks. Did I do's something wrong?

He just kissed me, i's thinks. Was 'e not suppose to?

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I watch as th' port gets smaller an' smaller. I wonder what Randy is thinkin'....

We left before dawn, knowin' that there won't be no sun to bother the crew, so they's can work in cool air.

An' as we sail away, I see th' pretty gold an' orange sun comin' up.

I likes sunrises, i's thinks. So pretty..

"Ey, Charlie!"

I turns around. Its Nik, th' second mate.

"Aye?"

"Get your arse on over 'ere an' get to work!"

"Aye sir."

I takes th' bucket an' mop, lookin' at Nik. He plops a bundle o' rags on me 'ead.

"Th' Captain's Cabin ain't been cleaned yet, get to it."

I nod, Straightenin' me shoulders. I always got to look tip-top when near th' Captain.

I can only see through one eye, what with th' rags on me head, so I wasn't surprised non when I walked right into somebody.

I yelped, almost droppin' th' bucket.

"You okay Charlie?"

I nod, but the rags are still on me 'ead an' I can't see none, so I start shakin' me 'ead, tryin' to flip the rags out o' me eyes. It ain't workin' too well.

But then th' rags are lifted off me head, an' I looks up into th' eyes of none other than Jack Sparrow.

"Hi Jack." I says.

"Hi Charlie."

We were quiet like for a bit. I's looks down at me feet, now in new boots.

"You kissed Randy eh?"

"I kissed 'im back, but Randy kissed me first."

"You like 'im like that?"

"I don' know. It was a 'motional moment."

"Ah."

I chew on me cheek. Jack looks down at th' rags in 'is hand.

"Just be careful."

He gently puts the rags back on me 'ead, makin' sure they don't fall in me face.

I nod, an' watch as Jack turns an' walks away.

"Jack?" I calls out.

He stops, lookin' at me over 'is shoulder.

"Love?"

"You like your 'air that way?"

"Its okay..."

"Can I try somethin?"

Jack's eyebrows go up, an' I puts on me winnin' face. Or...well...as much of it as I can.

"Pleeassee??"

"....Fine."

Score.

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"One more Jack, an' we're almost done."

"Lookin' good Jack, Don' worry." Mannie patted Jack's shoulder, lookin' at the bead in me hand. "Maybe thats a bit too much...?"

I glare at Mannie, knowin' Jack ain't gonna take that as a good sign.

"Just forget that last one! We're done, we're done."

He started to get up. I growled, yankin' 'is hair so he would sit back down.

"Shut up, an' let me do this Jack."

"But what if I don' want you to do this?"

"You promised!"

"Okay, okay. Just hurry up."

"Fine."

I grabbed th' piece o' hair I had wanted, pullin' a bit harder than I knew I should. Jack yelped, an' almost started to get up, but Fig growled and flashed th' knife he was cleanin'.

I tied in th' last bead, lettin' th' piece of hair fall back to clank against its friends.

"Mannie?"

Mannie handed me the Head Cloth.

I wrapped it around Jack's forhead, reachin' under an' tying it at 'is neck.

"Are you done yet?" Jack whined.

"Yep. All done! Now stand up."

Jack whooped, jumpin' up an turnin' around to me.

"It better look good."

I grin.

Mannie scratches 'is chin.

"Well now....It certainly looks different..."

"I like it. Makes you look like a real pirate!"

Fig tugged on a bead.

"I am a pirate." Says Jack.

"I know, but now ye look it!"

Jack growls.

I gets an idea, an' clap me 'ands together.

"I know, I know! Th' Captain 'as a mirror!"

"Good idea, lets go an' ask 'im if you can use it." Mannie rubs me head.

The Captain took one look at Jack, an' opened 'is door all th' way, not even needin' us to ask 'im.

We shuffled in, holdin' our breaths.

Th' Captain handed Jack 'is mirror, and Jack stood there for a while, just lookin' at 'imself.

"Charlie? Is this th' head cloth you asked about at th' shop?"

I nod.

"Hmm..."

Jack turns 'is head from side to side, wiggling his eyebrows.

"Well if that ain't a man admiring 'imself, then I don' know what is." Fig smacked Jack on 'is back, makin' Jack choke on air.

Th' Captain an' Mannie laughed, an' I smiled.

I needs to know what he thinks....

"Charlie? You gonna charge me for this?" Jack turns to me, grinnin.

I blink.

"You like it?"

"O'course."

I launch meself into Jacks arms. Jack laughs, hugging me back.

"Five shillings Mr. Sparrow."

Jack stops laughing an' glares at me.

"I knew it."

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My gosh. That took so long!! Ahhh, but it was worth it! Lalalaalala....done with chapter five!! Next: Chapter Six!

This is the last chapter of her as a ten year old. Im going to make her be twelve in the next one.

WHAT DO YOU THINK???? REVIEW!!!! thank you.