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~dizzy izzy: I write in my own way and if you don't like it... DON'T READ THIS STORY THEN!!!!!! Plus, I'm just in 7th grade and the English teachers
don't teach us anything. Oh, ok I'm trying. Ttyl!!

~inu: the first chapter was boring, its gets better. I do have a plot. The
first chapter was boring because I didn't know how to open the story. I
don't like using big paragraphs, but I use small ones.

~ainu larie: I don't care if it's a mary-sue! I don't' care if you like the
way I write!!!!!!

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Disclaimer: el: nah, don't feel like doing it.
Haldir: *appears out of no where* well you should.
El: aaahhhh!!!!!! *starts to run*
Tolkien: this is what she did to me.
El: noo!!! *runs and jumps into haldir's arms*
Haldir: see, she just likes me better. (

[ This means a song]

Prisoner of the Heart
Chapter 2:
Things Happen

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"Come on!!" some one said while pulling on the rope that held her hands.
She walked along grimly. "Hurry up!!" the same one said.

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She didn't know how long they been walking, but it was getting dark and the
ropes were digging into her wrists.
"We rest here tonight" he said while pushing her up the ladder into the flet. The strange people with pointed ears (Megan noticed this when they were walking) shoved her in the corner. Most of the strange people went to sleep while other kept on watch. She didn't know what to do, but sleep. So,
she went into a dreamless sleep.

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She felt something poking her, trying to wake her up. /what the hell. I'm trying to sleep!!!!/ What ever was poking her stopped. A few seconds later
it started up again.
"Will you quit it!?!?!?!?!" she yelled while trying to keep her male
accent.
"We must leave now if we are to reach Caras Galadhon buy mid-day."
"Fine," she started to get up, only to get pulled so hard that she fell
over. "Ugh, shit, crap"
"BE SILENT!!!" he yelled, "get up, where're leaving".

*******

They hadn't been walking for long when they heard it.
"What was that??" she asked sacred, yet not. "Orcs!!" the same one yelled again. /he looks cute when he yells. No!!!!
What am I saying?!?!?! Wait! Did he just say orcs??/
"Shit!!!" she cursed while the guard people took out their weapons. She managed to get her bonds cut right before the things started to charge at
her.
"Rag!!!" it shouted while raising it's sword to strike. It was coming closer. She dropped her dagger. It was getting to close for her liking now. She was going to die. She did the first thing that came to mind, she did a back-hand spring (a/n: or think of it as a mix between a back-flip and a hand-stand. Those who know what a back-hand-spring is, good for you). She landed right when the sword landed on the ground and the hood of her cape
fell off her head. The 'orc' thing picked up its sword getting ready to
strike again. She started to think how she could hold it off.

That was the fifth orc Haldir just shot down. He looked to see what the prisoner was doing, she was trying to out smart the orc. /so at least she's not an enemy./ he grabbed another arrow from his quiver getting ready to fire at his next appoint. /wait/ he looked again at the prisoner. /he's a she!!!/ He fired his arrow, not caring where it went. He was trying to get
to her to protect her. Then, it happened.

[ When I find myself in times of trouble,
Mother Mary comes to me speaking words of wisdom,
Let it be.]

Everything was in slow motion. She managed to get a sword, and was fighting one off. She sliced off its head, not seeing one was coming up behind her.
"LOOK OUT!!!" he yelled, trying to run to her.

[ And in my hour of darkness,
She is standing right in front of me,
Speaking words of wisdom,
Let it be.]

She turned around, she raised her sword ready to strike what was behind
her. But she was too late.

[ Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be. Whisper words of wisdom, let
it be.]

She stopped moving, only dropping her sword. She looked down at her self to
see blood. The orc took out the sword. She didn't make a sound.

[ And when the broken hearted people,
Living in the world agree,
There will be an answer,
Let it be.]

The orc raised its sword for the last strike, but Haldir killed him before
the chance. He ran to her, and she was still staring at all the blood
coming from her stomach.

[For those they my be parted,
There is still a chance that they will see,
There will be an answer,
Let it be.]

She was leaning backwards to fall, but he caught her before she fell to the
ground.

[ Let it be, let it be. Let it be, let it be. There will be an answer,
Let it be.]

"Hold on, everything will be alright"
"I know" she said while trying to drift into a sleep.

[Oh, let it be. Let it be, let it be.
Whisper word of wisdom,
Let it be.]

"No, no. wake up!" he said calmly while shaking her. "I'm still here. Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere". She smiled a week
smile.

[Let it be, let it be. Let it be, let it be.
Whisper words of wisdom,
Let it be.]

All the orcs were gone, and all the elves came to see what happened.
"I'm going ahead. She needs medical attention now!!"
No one fought against what he said. Haldir got up and started to run
towards the city.

[And when the night is clouded,
There is still a light that shines on me,
Shine until tomorrow,
Let it be.]

She started to close her eyes.
"No! Don't close your eyes. Talk to me. Please, talk to me. Just don't
close your eyes"

[I wake up to the sound of music,
Mother Mary comes to me,
Speaking words of wisdom,
Let it be.]

"Ok. My name is Megan. What is your name?"
"Haldir, my name is Haldir."

[Let it be, let it be. Let it be, let it be.
Oh there will be an answer,
Let it be.]

"Hey Haldir, I know this may sound stupid but can you do something for me?"
"Shure, what is it?"
"To be my friend."

[Let it be, let it be. Let it be, let it be.
Whisper words of wisdom,
Let it be.]

"Why do you ask?"
"So that when I die, I'll know that I had at least one friend."
"You won't die, I promise."
"No one can keep promises like that Haldir."
She tried to close her eyes again, only to be woken be Haldir.
"No closing your eyes."
"I wasn't going to go to sleep, I just wanted to close my eyes."
"I know, but you can't"
"Hey Haldir?"
"Yes?" "When we stop, take my cape. If I die, keep it to remember me. It I live,
then give it back to me later. Ok?"
"Ok." He could see the city. He was getting close, but he did not know if Megan would make it. She was becoming paler and her breathing was becoming raspy
and short. /hold on Megan, almost home. /

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Reviews (continued):

~ sir lady alnna cooper: thanx. Trying my best.

~burn the sues: I know about the English problems. And the mary *twitch* sues are trying to convert me to their evil ways!! Help!!! *get pulled down
by a bunch of evil mary-sues to their evil layer*

god, this chapter was long. It took 6 pages. Please R&R. flamers, be ware!!! I'll roast marshmallows on it and give them to the loyal reviewers.
*eats one*
I'll try to up-date soon.