Hello, Mushi mushi, Guten Tag,.sorry got caught up in the hellos.
I'm back with a new chapter. It's hard to type fics when you have two
computers, but only one of them is at my disposal plus, I go back to
college on Monday so I have to prepare for that.
Same disclaimer: Since this is an Self Insertion I own myself. I don't own
any of the Love Hina characters or the series.
{ } Express any form of mental speech (thoughts, telepathic
communications).
Motoko: Shall I do the sum up?
Lee: Sure, but don't strech the truth.
Motoko: Here we go. This weird kid named Lee appeared in my room while I was changing. The fact that he saw me naked started the battle that's about to occur.
Lee: My back was turned when I appeared you idiot.
You're Mine
Motoko: Fine.
Lee: Hey dorkus.
Keitaro: My name is Keitaro.
Lee: Okay Keitaro, where is that Fox-eyed chick?
Keitaro: Kitsune is.(Everyone who wasn't knocked out or learning how to fly saw Kitsune passed out on the floor.)
Lee: That speaks for itself. (The two swordwielders walked out to the front while Keitaro and Shinobu dragged out Kitsune and Su who just woke up, and Sarah was asleep somewhere else.)
Shinobu: Sempai, do you think that tough looking guy can beat Motoko?
Keitaro: I think he's either very good with a sword or a very stupid person.
Lee: Hello, I'm right here, I can hear everything you two are saying. (Naru landed in front of Keitaro just as Lee and Motoko were about to start the battle.) (A.N: Was I right or what?)
Naru: (groans) Dammit.
Kitsune: (Just got up) Whoa, guys what's going on?
Keitaro: That tough looking kid over there appeared out of nowhere and picked a fight with Motoko, and now a battle is about to ensure.
Naru: I hope Motoko kills his ass.
Su: Yay, sword fight, sword fight..oh no I'm hungry!
Lee: I know that if I use my powers you will die within the first five seconds, so if it's alright with you the only powers I will use is the power that keeps this sword visible.
Motoko: I don't care if you are too cocky for your own good. You will soon realize that underestimating me is a fatal mistake.
Lee: Likewise, now bring it Psycho-bitch. (Both of them spent 5 minutes staring each other down and the spectators got restless.)
Su: C'mon, c'mon, fight already so I can eat.
Keitaro: Don't worry, they'll start pretty soon. (Lee falls asleep standing up, everyone minus Motoko face-faults and falls over.)
Naru: What the hell is this? How could someone who sent me on a "Round the World Tour" just fall asleep before a battle starts?!
Motoko: { My point exactly, doesn't this pervert know who he's dealing with?}
Lee: { C'mon Motoko you can't resist an open attack like this. I'm open for death over here.}
Motoko: { Wait, what if he wants me to attack, but there is no way that kid could be this good especially if he's only using the power to keep his sword visible, but what if he is?}
Lee: {C'mon bitch attack already.}
Motoko: {Ahh screw this, opportunity knocks and I'm answering the door.} (Charges at Lee) Boulder Cutting Strike (Leaps in the air for the first strike)!
Lee: {Here we go.} (Opens his eyes and blocks the slash and the ki of Motoko's attack, then counters with a quick diagonal slash that made contact with Motoko's stomach.)
Motoko: (Holding her stomach) You didn't really fall asleep did you?
Lee: (smiles) Nope. Motoko: It was just a ruse to hide your counterstrike.
Lee: Yep.now let's continue. (Motoko tries to strike him five times, but Lee blocked and countered each one with ease. Next she tried another overhead strike, but Lee was prepared to block, but Motoko changed it into a horizontal strike halfway through cutting Lee's chest deeply.)
Lee: Dammit, I didn't expect that.oh well.
Motoko: Heh, I told you not to underestimate me.
Lee: You think you can beat me, well I'll let you in on something.
Motoko: What?
Lee: That first counterstrike I made has been slowly draining your energy with every attack.you will start to feel it shortly.
Motoko: Bullshit (uses her ki against her opponent, but he just stood there unaffected in any way by the attack, then she fell to her knees in pain)! What is going on, I'm losing strength.
Lee: I already told you and besides if charging, leaping, slice n' dicing with your sword kept draining your energy due to my Energy Siphon Counterstrike, surely using your ki would accelerate the process (uses Motoko's own ki against her, sending her back 12 feet, then he kicked her in the face, finally he picked up by her clothes.).
Naru: T-t-tell me I this is a dream.there is no way I'm seeing this.
Shinobu: Um Naru.IT'S REAL!!!
Keitaro: Okay, okay, so maybe this guy is the real deal.
Su: (Eating a banana)
Kitsune: (Going through a hangover) I haven't seen anything this odd since Tama-chan blocked one of Motoko's strikes.
Keitaro & Naru: You need to lay off the booze. (Lee is still holding Motoko high like a trophy, then he noticed a cut on his right arm and two on his left.)
Lee: { How did three delayed attacks make contact with my body without me knowing? Even without my powers I should have been able to notice before the scars appeared.That's it, Motoko must have caught on during her five strike barrage. (Looks back while contemplating the scars) The first two I blocked successfully, but the last three strikes must have involved her changing her attacks halfway through each of the final strikes, meaning I only blocked half of the last three blows without me seeing it. Here I thought I was gonna win this fight unscathed. } Motoko: (still in pain) Fu,fu,fu, I told you not to underestimate me.
Lee: (Voice sounds demonic) Heh, you are not even worthy of being my rival in swordsmanship, so I'm gonna do you a favor and end this fight right now (Choke-slams Motoko, picks her up again and throws her up in the air). It's time for the finisher.
Motoko: One. chance. left (starts descending).
Lee: { She just won't give up.I guess I'll have to end this the fun way.} (Holds his sword like he is about to swing a bat and the blade started to glow a red orange color)
Motoko: (Five seconds from impact) God's Cry School Sword Technique. CUTTING EVIL STRIKE: SECOND FORM!!!
Lee: (Stance isn't broken as if the attack had no effect.) Foolish girl I'll show you a real attack (His sword glows bright red as he leapt at the falling Motoko)! DRAGON SLASH (cuts Motoko's left side barely missing any vitals)!!! (Both fighters land on their feet.)
Motoko: (Feels a burning sensation in her body as well as the last of her strength ebbing away.) Why didn't my attack phase you, you evil bastard!
Lee: First off: you were low on energy, second, I am too strong for you like I warned earlier, and third, I am not evil.and you call yourself a swordsman.
Motoko: (groans) But you saw me naked.
Lee: I told you right from the start I had my back turned to you the whole time. Hell, I never even saw your face, you just wanted an excuse to use your techniques on someone and you lost to a superior swordsman.
Motoko: (Barely able to stand) What that last attack?
Lee: It's called Dragon Slash. It's an attack the spirits that have possessed my body taught me when I was ten. One year later I mastered the technique, and two years after that I got so good with it I no longer needed my powers to execute it.
Motoko: But your.sword.
Lee: Glowed? Yes, but that was because the attack was powered by my strength, determination and will.be glad that attack does not kill. I taught myself eight other forms of that same technique and they all kill, and that ends my summary.
Motoko: (whispers) You..you.bastard (Fall face first in the grass and loses consciousness).
Lee: Since this is a "Duel to the Death" (raise his with the point aimed at Motoko's head) I will have to kill you now.
Keitaro, Kitsune, Shinobu, Su(with a banana in her mouth) & Naru: No, you already won! Stop (runs toward the fallen warrior)! (Lee began to thrust his sword at the girl's head and the others gasped.)
(If you thought Motoko was killed you were wrong, actually the crew gasped at the irony that Lee "deliberately" stuck the sword in the ground one centimeter away from her head, then he picks up his sword and sheaths it and the sword disappears.) (Motoko's friends stopped just a few feet away.)
Lee: ( Picks up Motoko threshold style, and smiles at her friends) Well I think this battle is over don't you all agree?
Shinobu: (uneasy) Uuuuuh, yeah.
Naru: (Pissed) Who are you?
Keitaro: How did you get here?
Su: (On the brink of crying) Why did you kill our dear Motoko-san?
Lee: First of all: Motoko is knocked out, NOT dead, and second I will explain everything, but we need to get "Little Hot Warrior Woman" to her room so I can heal her cuts, especially the one on her left side.
Kitsune: (still hung-over) Well, I guess we are choiceless in the matter (Everyone walks towards the dorm).
To be Continued
That's all for now. You all know the drill, review if you like. If the fic is good or it sucks just say so. Just don't call me a fuckin' dumbass.
Once again thanks to OmegaDragon for his story "Switching Lives" it inspired me to write this and a Special Thanks to the person who gave me my first review ever.
Motoko: Shall I do the sum up?
Lee: Sure, but don't strech the truth.
Motoko: Here we go. This weird kid named Lee appeared in my room while I was changing. The fact that he saw me naked started the battle that's about to occur.
Lee: My back was turned when I appeared you idiot.
You're Mine
Motoko: Fine.
Lee: Hey dorkus.
Keitaro: My name is Keitaro.
Lee: Okay Keitaro, where is that Fox-eyed chick?
Keitaro: Kitsune is.(Everyone who wasn't knocked out or learning how to fly saw Kitsune passed out on the floor.)
Lee: That speaks for itself. (The two swordwielders walked out to the front while Keitaro and Shinobu dragged out Kitsune and Su who just woke up, and Sarah was asleep somewhere else.)
Shinobu: Sempai, do you think that tough looking guy can beat Motoko?
Keitaro: I think he's either very good with a sword or a very stupid person.
Lee: Hello, I'm right here, I can hear everything you two are saying. (Naru landed in front of Keitaro just as Lee and Motoko were about to start the battle.) (A.N: Was I right or what?)
Naru: (groans) Dammit.
Kitsune: (Just got up) Whoa, guys what's going on?
Keitaro: That tough looking kid over there appeared out of nowhere and picked a fight with Motoko, and now a battle is about to ensure.
Naru: I hope Motoko kills his ass.
Su: Yay, sword fight, sword fight..oh no I'm hungry!
Lee: I know that if I use my powers you will die within the first five seconds, so if it's alright with you the only powers I will use is the power that keeps this sword visible.
Motoko: I don't care if you are too cocky for your own good. You will soon realize that underestimating me is a fatal mistake.
Lee: Likewise, now bring it Psycho-bitch. (Both of them spent 5 minutes staring each other down and the spectators got restless.)
Su: C'mon, c'mon, fight already so I can eat.
Keitaro: Don't worry, they'll start pretty soon. (Lee falls asleep standing up, everyone minus Motoko face-faults and falls over.)
Naru: What the hell is this? How could someone who sent me on a "Round the World Tour" just fall asleep before a battle starts?!
Motoko: { My point exactly, doesn't this pervert know who he's dealing with?}
Lee: { C'mon Motoko you can't resist an open attack like this. I'm open for death over here.}
Motoko: { Wait, what if he wants me to attack, but there is no way that kid could be this good especially if he's only using the power to keep his sword visible, but what if he is?}
Lee: {C'mon bitch attack already.}
Motoko: {Ahh screw this, opportunity knocks and I'm answering the door.} (Charges at Lee) Boulder Cutting Strike (Leaps in the air for the first strike)!
Lee: {Here we go.} (Opens his eyes and blocks the slash and the ki of Motoko's attack, then counters with a quick diagonal slash that made contact with Motoko's stomach.)
Motoko: (Holding her stomach) You didn't really fall asleep did you?
Lee: (smiles) Nope. Motoko: It was just a ruse to hide your counterstrike.
Lee: Yep.now let's continue. (Motoko tries to strike him five times, but Lee blocked and countered each one with ease. Next she tried another overhead strike, but Lee was prepared to block, but Motoko changed it into a horizontal strike halfway through cutting Lee's chest deeply.)
Lee: Dammit, I didn't expect that.oh well.
Motoko: Heh, I told you not to underestimate me.
Lee: You think you can beat me, well I'll let you in on something.
Motoko: What?
Lee: That first counterstrike I made has been slowly draining your energy with every attack.you will start to feel it shortly.
Motoko: Bullshit (uses her ki against her opponent, but he just stood there unaffected in any way by the attack, then she fell to her knees in pain)! What is going on, I'm losing strength.
Lee: I already told you and besides if charging, leaping, slice n' dicing with your sword kept draining your energy due to my Energy Siphon Counterstrike, surely using your ki would accelerate the process (uses Motoko's own ki against her, sending her back 12 feet, then he kicked her in the face, finally he picked up by her clothes.).
Naru: T-t-tell me I this is a dream.there is no way I'm seeing this.
Shinobu: Um Naru.IT'S REAL!!!
Keitaro: Okay, okay, so maybe this guy is the real deal.
Su: (Eating a banana)
Kitsune: (Going through a hangover) I haven't seen anything this odd since Tama-chan blocked one of Motoko's strikes.
Keitaro & Naru: You need to lay off the booze. (Lee is still holding Motoko high like a trophy, then he noticed a cut on his right arm and two on his left.)
Lee: { How did three delayed attacks make contact with my body without me knowing? Even without my powers I should have been able to notice before the scars appeared.That's it, Motoko must have caught on during her five strike barrage. (Looks back while contemplating the scars) The first two I blocked successfully, but the last three strikes must have involved her changing her attacks halfway through each of the final strikes, meaning I only blocked half of the last three blows without me seeing it. Here I thought I was gonna win this fight unscathed. } Motoko: (still in pain) Fu,fu,fu, I told you not to underestimate me.
Lee: (Voice sounds demonic) Heh, you are not even worthy of being my rival in swordsmanship, so I'm gonna do you a favor and end this fight right now (Choke-slams Motoko, picks her up again and throws her up in the air). It's time for the finisher.
Motoko: One. chance. left (starts descending).
Lee: { She just won't give up.I guess I'll have to end this the fun way.} (Holds his sword like he is about to swing a bat and the blade started to glow a red orange color)
Motoko: (Five seconds from impact) God's Cry School Sword Technique. CUTTING EVIL STRIKE: SECOND FORM!!!
Lee: (Stance isn't broken as if the attack had no effect.) Foolish girl I'll show you a real attack (His sword glows bright red as he leapt at the falling Motoko)! DRAGON SLASH (cuts Motoko's left side barely missing any vitals)!!! (Both fighters land on their feet.)
Motoko: (Feels a burning sensation in her body as well as the last of her strength ebbing away.) Why didn't my attack phase you, you evil bastard!
Lee: First off: you were low on energy, second, I am too strong for you like I warned earlier, and third, I am not evil.and you call yourself a swordsman.
Motoko: (groans) But you saw me naked.
Lee: I told you right from the start I had my back turned to you the whole time. Hell, I never even saw your face, you just wanted an excuse to use your techniques on someone and you lost to a superior swordsman.
Motoko: (Barely able to stand) What that last attack?
Lee: It's called Dragon Slash. It's an attack the spirits that have possessed my body taught me when I was ten. One year later I mastered the technique, and two years after that I got so good with it I no longer needed my powers to execute it.
Motoko: But your.sword.
Lee: Glowed? Yes, but that was because the attack was powered by my strength, determination and will.be glad that attack does not kill. I taught myself eight other forms of that same technique and they all kill, and that ends my summary.
Motoko: (whispers) You..you.bastard (Fall face first in the grass and loses consciousness).
Lee: Since this is a "Duel to the Death" (raise his with the point aimed at Motoko's head) I will have to kill you now.
Keitaro, Kitsune, Shinobu, Su(with a banana in her mouth) & Naru: No, you already won! Stop (runs toward the fallen warrior)! (Lee began to thrust his sword at the girl's head and the others gasped.)
(If you thought Motoko was killed you were wrong, actually the crew gasped at the irony that Lee "deliberately" stuck the sword in the ground one centimeter away from her head, then he picks up his sword and sheaths it and the sword disappears.) (Motoko's friends stopped just a few feet away.)
Lee: ( Picks up Motoko threshold style, and smiles at her friends) Well I think this battle is over don't you all agree?
Shinobu: (uneasy) Uuuuuh, yeah.
Naru: (Pissed) Who are you?
Keitaro: How did you get here?
Su: (On the brink of crying) Why did you kill our dear Motoko-san?
Lee: First of all: Motoko is knocked out, NOT dead, and second I will explain everything, but we need to get "Little Hot Warrior Woman" to her room so I can heal her cuts, especially the one on her left side.
Kitsune: (still hung-over) Well, I guess we are choiceless in the matter (Everyone walks towards the dorm).
To be Continued
That's all for now. You all know the drill, review if you like. If the fic is good or it sucks just say so. Just don't call me a fuckin' dumbass.
Once again thanks to OmegaDragon for his story "Switching Lives" it inspired me to write this and a Special Thanks to the person who gave me my first review ever.
