Thank you all for reviewing!It was good. My credit goes to the following:
Spiraea kozak: I considered and like your 'it will be an idea'(2 chp review)but since i had already written the whole story,i decided to go against it.And...how can u say that isnt a cliffhanger?C'mon, read carefully.Thanks.
L J Nights: Hmmm...it seems u like the Ash in the story more than the story itself! Just kidding,heh heh...thanks
P. Matthews: Its gonna finish after couple more chapters so u better decide!Thanks
NoOrDa: Well,the 4 chp's here!Thanks
yoyo: heh heh! Cliffhangers are my enemies too! Every story i read had a cliffhanger so i decided to payback with my own!Thanks
And now with the fic!
Disclaimer:Shoo!I'm too busy with my own life than to care about money hungry lawyers!I'm not sayin anything!
CHAPTER 4: CLIFF AND CAVE
Misty also saw that they were falling, and Ash's open eyes. She, however, did not pass out when they finally stopped, Ash being there to break her fall. She landed heavily on Ash's body, and lay there, trying to consume the shock and their surroundings. They were, by the look of it, very lucky to have fallen on that spot. One more meter and they would have perished in everlasting darkness. Then she saw a cave on their left, and feeling afraid that this would break too, hurried inside. She turned around and saw Ash, still unconscious lying on the ground. She went out again and quickly pulled him inside. Miraculously, the Pokemon were not hurt.
"Tic togi" (Where are we?)Togetic said and started to cry a bit. Pikachu, always there for it, went and tried to comfort it. Meanwhile…
"Ooooo my head!" Said Ash, looking at his surroundings, then at Misty as he quickly sat upright.
"Where are we?" He asked her angrily.
"How should I know, you're the one who pulled me here!" She shouted back.
"I wouldn't have if you hadn't been holding my hand!" He retaliated, blushing.
Misty, blushing harder than him, had no reply to this, and therefore kept quiet. He then walked over to Pikachu and Togepi, checking how his buddy was doing with his back to Misty.
"Here Pikachu, eat this." He told Pikachu. "And Togepi, here, take this. You like it don't you, Togetic?" He said, making sure that his voice was being heard by Misty. "Haven't eaten it in 10 years, have you, Togepi? At this, Tears was starting to flow down on Misty's face.
"When are you going to stop torturing me?" She half cried, half shouted.
Ash did not look at her, but went straight out of the cave. 'What am I doing?' He thought. 'Hey it was her fault,' the 'bad' side thought. 'But even then', thought the 'good' side, 'are you going to punish her all your life for what happened 10 years ago?'
He could bear to think of it no more, and so he dropped the subject and started looking for a possible escape route. Just then it began to snow lightly, but he knew that it would soon become a storm, snowing them in. 'Oh no.' He thought. Then he noticed a small path going left of the cave. He would tell his friends if only it wasn't as small as it was. He knew that they would have to lean against the wall, moving one foot at a time, their hands also touching the wall. But if she slipped…
He went inside to give in his report.
"It's started to snow," he started. "If we don't go now, we'll all be snowed in. We have to leave, NOW."
Misty and his Pokemon looked at him, unsure of what to say. It was Misty who broke the silence.
"How are we going to go?" She asked, no longer looking at his him, but at her own feet.
"I've found a way, but it won't be easy." They went outside and he explained what they have to do.
"You in?" He asked them.
"Yeah," replied Misty. They tied a rope to their waists, linking to each other. Ash thought this was more foolhardy than anything else they had done, especially if one of them slipped, pulling the other…
Ok,i know this chapters confusing but I really don't know how to explain this.If any of you understand what i'm tryin to say please tell me so I can explain to others...
Thanx again,please review to tell me what you think,and remember,I'm just learning how to be better!
-Pika786-
