Okay I've royally messed alot of this up so if it's a little messy sorry,I am in a hurry here,well here's Chapter 5(if i got it right ....-.-)
The small Breif didn't hear Piccolo's call,and proceeded until the chi seemed to disappear.
When she stopped she was well out of the forest,and far enough away so that Piccolo's chi was only softly aware to her.
She was in a sort of hill-land made of rock,there were mountains of the red-orange sun bleached boulders behind her along with the small outline of the forest,flat rocky lands and cvalleys in front of her,and the wide open sea to her right side while facing the south.
Without even thinking she lowered her own chi and began to scan the landscape.
Nothing.
Piccolo cursed to himself,how could he let her out of his sight!?
He couldn't feel her ki at all,and he couldn't see her through the rooftops of the thick trees he was now flying overhead of.
Cursing himself again he sped up and watched with satisfaction as trees bent and leaves flew as he went by.
Makane blinked,there was no sign of anything that could possibly generate as much power as she and Piccolo had felt around here.
Piccolo.
"Oh no I left him!" she voiced out loud and silently cursed herself.She had reacted on impulse and sprang away before thinking.
"I just hope he's not to mad.Huh-" she was knocked to the ground as the powerful ki vibes overwhelmed her again like a tidal wall slamming into her.
"Ouf!" she grunted as she fell flat on her butt,caught off guard.
She attempted to get up but the ground was shaking and she felt pinned down.
"Wh-what's going on!?" she yelled to no one her eyes going wide as she saw a crack form and spread it's way quickly towards her,earth splitting in two on it's way.
She took to the air just as the earth burst open from underneath her.
Even the air seemed to sway,though she prefered it much more to the huge hole that was forming underneath her.
"Ahhhhhh!" she yelled as she blocked her face from the debris showering her all over the place and backing of a bit dodging a huge chunk of rock that disappeared into the hole beneath her.
"Piccolo!" she yelled both mentally and out loud.
Piccolo felt it instantly,and his big green Namek ears picked up the noise from the groaning earth and Makane's yell for him.
"Makane!Hang on kid!" he yelled back and headed in the direction of the noise as fast as he could go.
Calling on her ki to protect her,a yellow aura sprang to life around her,the small sharp particles of rock couldn't penetrate her skin and she quickly flew through the mess of falling rocks,flying up above the hills and looking down on it.
The ki was gone and the rocks soon settled.
She landed on the rubble and looked around,no one in sight.
"No way that was a freaky coincidence!No way that was an earthquake either!" she said waving away some dust that was still unsettled from her face and let out a gasp.
A man was standing in front of her,a smirk on his face,his eyes penetrating the thin layer of dust in the air to cut right through to her.
The tall dark-haired man smiled as he appeared in front of Makane,her features hardened,"Who are you?" she demanded not intimidated in the least,at least not yet
His grin widened,"Now that's not very polite!" he said,his voice was deep and very masculin,it held cockyness and ignorance,but it had a big hint of fun in it.
She imidiately didn't like him.
"Was this you?" she said spreading her hand out all around her.
His eyes were hodded as he looked around,"Why,I might have."
She clenched her teeth,"Don't get cocky!" she accused making fists but quickly throwing her tmeper and ki under control.
He eyed her,"My my,fiery aren't we there little one." he said lowly.
Oh how she would have loved to punch in his face at the moment.
He took a step towards her and she realised just how tall this guy was.
It didn't help that she was short either.
"My name is Sayain now,in exchange for my name,I want yours."he placed his hands on his hips.
Makane's eyes flashed,"Breif." she awnsered.
"Your whole name sweetie." his grin was very annoying.
She clenched her fists,"You only gave me one." she hissed.
His hand shot out to grab her arm,"Ah but you didn't say you wanted my whole name." his dark
eyes glittered.
She shook her head,"Well then take a lesson from your own cunning mouth Mr.Sayain and next time tell me you want my whole name." she didn't move,"And I asked who you were.All I got was your name."
"And that's all you need to know."he whispered his voice dropping low,"Brief," he whispered his face coming close to her neck,"Your name."he demanded softly his breath behind her ear.
She tensed,her small body was pressed right up against his,and he was dwarving her!
"My name Mr.Sayain,is of no value to you." she managed to whisper feeling incredibly small at the moment and very helpless,if this was the person the ki belonged to,and she was sure he was,he was not someone to mess around with.
He moved so his lips barely touched her ear and his arms were around her waist,"Let me be the one to decide that." she tried hard not to tremble,his breath was warm,no I will NOT let him intice me!Damnit!She had just met the creep!That sparked something within her.
She pushed him away,"Well Sayain,if you want my name,you'll have convince me of the benefit." with that he smiled.
"You've got fire kid,lots of it,and I like that in a girl,it infatuates me." he replied.
Her reaction was curious,even amusing,a look of confusion played over her soft features but also of -was that daring?He smiled to himself,perhaps these humans weren't so bad after all,at least,this Breif wasn't.
"You know what?I like the name Breif,and I think I have my own little name for you gaijin."
Makane's eyes flashed dangerously,"Well I've come up with a name for you Akumu."
He chuckled lightly,"Oh you have no idea Breif." he smiled and turned to go,"You have no idea."
With that he took off into the air.Makane didn't find it to frustrating because alot of people could fly she supposed,he was a Sayain,wasn't he? And besides he had amazing speed.His ki vibes were wierd to...
Just then Piccolo appeared.
"What the hell happened here!?" he cried out and landed next to her.
She cocked her head to one side and said in a zoned out kind of voice,"I don't know...."
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