Is this True?
This is my first time to write a story in English and I'm not that really good especially in my grammars so just review it, please.
It was sometime in September, and as usual, my training as an acolyte began at about 2 AM, I hurriedly ran down the marble steps of the cathedral and into the open spaces of the training grounds, as I reached the end of the hallway, a raven haired swordsman suddenly came into view. "Hi Lily, are you doing something?"
I turned around and saw Kent, a close friend of mine, walking towards me. At first I'm kinda sleepy for I woke early this morning but when I saw him there, walking towards me I suddenly jolted out of slumber land and I'm totally awake. I saw Kent, standing right there beside me, looking as handsome as he will ever be. "Well not quite much, why is that so?" I answered him with a soft smile plastered upon my pale face.
"Can we talk for a while? If it's ok with you." I agreed. At first we were talking beside the fountain at the center of prontera, it was still dark and only street lights shimmered through the streets, talking about things in my life especially my love life. Then suddenly his voice became serious as he tried to untangle his tongue, trying to say:
"You know you've got beautiful hazel-brown eyes. You're so pretty, smart and you've got the... uh.... body. A guy that could have you is very lucky you know." He paused for a while then looked at me straight in the eyes and caressed my cheek, brushing the stray locks of my raven-black hair. Then he continued:
"All I'm trying to say is that... The first time I saw you I told myself to gather confidence and ask you if you could be my gf but when I did, I found out you already have a boyfriend. I like you, Lily."
As I heard those words, I felt a tingling sensation, I could hear no words coming out of his lips, and instead I hear music. I felt like I could just melt as he gazed trough me. "Is this True or am I dreaming?" I asked myself.
Before I could say anything he held my hand and again looks into my eyes, slightly he leaned forward as his lips touched mine, I could feel the world freeze, and time swirled around us as if we were the only ones existing. It was a long, passionate and deep kiss.
"Oh my gosh! Did he really kiss me?" This question kept ringing in my mind for a couple of minutes.
"Why did you kiss me? You're aware that I have a boyfriend right?"
"Ya, sorry I just can't help it." Looking at the floor. Then he kissed me again. Every time he kisses me that night I felt guilty, I'm being unfair to my boyfriend. But then I like it when he kisses me. It's so tender. But then after the training's over, we didn't see each other again so I just buried the memory in the past.
I'm really not good in writing stories but this is all I can. I hope you like it. Please review. I really appreciate it.
