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The Spirit Within


Chappy 2: The Other World

What Happen Last Time.
The thing started to say some stuff that they didn't have a clue what it was then all of a sudden a huge hole comes out of no where and the girls fall into it!! Then the same thing happens to Kai when he took a short cut!
Now The Fic.....


AznVKai,Neko-Chan,Mandy,and FlamE are falling and yelling for their live's.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"
"WERE GOING TO DIEE!!!"
"HELPPPPPP MEEEEEEE!!!!!"
"AHHHHHHHHH!!!.....HEY....THIS IS KIND OF FUN GUYS, SEE LOOK I'M A BIRDY!!....AHHH!"

They have been falling for over 10 min and now they are getting board...

"Ok, this is no fun..." Neko-Chan said. "Yeah I know!! We have been falling for over 10 min this is crazy!" FlamE said. Just as she said that, there were 5 different holes (HUGEE holes) and they all went in different ways. Then Kai came falling and went into one of the holes.

With Kenny,Max,Ray,& Tyson...

"Kai has been gone for a long time!" Max said to his friends.
"Yeah I know..it's not like Kai to stay out for so long." Ray said. "Maybe we should go look for him?" Chief asked. "OK let's go find Kai!!" Tyson said.

With FlamE and AznVKai....

"Owww my head." FlamE moaned. "Where in the world am I?" She then saw AznVKai a few feet away from her, so she went to go see if she was ok.
"AznVKai? AznVKaiiii? Hey you ok? Veemon??....WAKE UP DUDE!!!!!!" FlamE yelled in her ear. "WHAT DO YOU WANT? I WAS SLEEPING CAUSE YOU WERE PASSED OUT!!!!" AznVKai yelled. "WELL SORRY I WAS JUST TRYING TO WAKE YOU UP! Um...do you know where we are?" FlamE asked. But AznVKai had no answer for her friend so they looked around. It was like they went into a different world because the sky had 2 MOONS and there was a lot of fire!!! "AznVKai..."
"Yeah what is it?"
"There are....2 moons!!"
"What your crazy there can-- 2 MOONS?!?!?!"
"....HOLY COW!!!"

"Hey look Veemon one of them is blue ouuu!!!" FlamE pointed out. "Oh cool!...hey what's that up there?" AznVKai asked. "Um..I really don't know but let's go see." FlamE said back.

With Mandy...

"Where am I???" Mandy thought. "This is strange..." Mandy got up and took a look around and found out that she was under water! "AHHHHHH!!" Mandy yelled but she could breath. "What???" Mandy started to swim up to the surface, when she got there she said "AHH I FOR GOT I CAN'T SWIM ON TOP OF THE WATER!!!!!!AHHH!!!" She freaked out and went back under then she thought she saw something.."Man I'm seeing too many things these days!" She thought and something swam by her. "What in the world was that?" A big sea horse came up to her and said through her head.."Hello and welcome to the water relm. Do you need any help?" Mandy looked at the sea horse for a few min then said "Yes I do..can you...take me...to land???" The sea horse turned around and looked at her as if saying "Jump On". So she did and...
Back To FlamE and AznVKai...

FlamE and AznVKai walked up to the thing that they saw and found out it was...................................................................Kai!
"What is Kai doing here?" FlamE asked. "How am I going to know that? Why do you ask questions like that??" AznVKai asked. "Um..don't know I just do."FlamE said. AznVKai sighed then went over to Kai then poked him then said "Botha!" "Ouuu can I join?" FlamE asked her friend. "Yep!" AznVKai said in a happy voice.
"Botha!"
"Botha!"
"BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOTHA,BOT--" They got cut off by Kai saying. "WOULD YOU STOP THAT!!!" The girls jumped back. "Hey we were just trying to wake you! Your just lucky that you didn't wake up like I did!" AznVKai said and looked at FlamE. "Whatever...where are we?" Kai asked. "We don't know...have you seen Mandy or Neko-Chan anywhere??" FlamE asked. "No, I only seen you 2." Kai said back then the girls said at the same time."DAH"

After that they started walking...and walking...and walking...AND then there was a little village of...FIRE!!

"Why is everything fireeee?!?" FlamE asked the 2 teens. "There you go again with dumb questions that I don't have a answer too!" AznVKai said back to her. They walked up the the village and saw Beast..FIRE BEAST! "Oh...my....god....FIRE DEMON THINGYS!!" FlamE yelled. Then Kai said. "Would you please stop with the fire crap and the answer to your question is that everything is fire because this is a fire world...well it looks like that." "OOOOOOOOhhhhh" Both girls said. "So what are we waiting for let's go take a look!" AznVKai said.

At The Village...

All the beast stoped what they were doing and looked at the 3 people that just walked into the village. "We come in peace!!" FlamE said while puting up peace signs.Then all the people looked at one another and started going back to what they were doing before. "Ok..how did that happen??" AznVKai asked. "I have no idea..." Kai said back.

They started walking to the town square and they saw a huge dragon, it had read skin and fire on the end of it's tail. Then this beast said "Hello humans my name is Fo (Fo means Fire) and I'd like to welcome you to our village." They stood there for a few min and then Kai asked "Fo...where are we?" The dragon then said "We are in the fire relm of the Bit-Beast world." They were all shocked at what Fo said to them. "Bi...bit-beast..W..world"

Mandy POV

I went on the back of the sea horse and we zoomed away it was so fast! I thought I was going to fall off but I didn't. So anyway when we got to land I thanked the sea horse and walked over to a hill to see if I could find a path or something. When I got to the top almost everything I saw was almost all water!! Man I could not believe it! I found a path,went to it,then walked.....

End Of Mandy's POV

Neko-Chan was running in a forest for her life! Something was after her but she didn't know what. Neko-Chan ran and ran until she saw light! She ran up to it then saw Mandy walking down it. "Neko-Chan?? Wha--" She got cut off by Neko-Chan saying "SHUT UP AND RUUNNNN!!" With that she ran past her then Mandy looked at what she was running from...it was the most ugly...nasty thing she ever saw so she ran after Neko-Chan. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" The 2 girls yelled. "WE GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!" "LESS TALKING MORE RUNNING!!!!" "OKKK!!!!!!"
"WHAT I JUST SAY?!?!"
"SO YOUR TALKING TOO!!"
"FOR GET IT AND RUN!!!"

Back To AznVKai,Kai,FlamE, & The Fo...

"Yes Bit-Beast world, is there something wrong with that?" Fo asked.
"N..o..It's just becasue we...don't...know..this place was real."AznVKai said. Kai,FlamE,and AznVKai told Fo the whole story from how they got there and until now. So Fo was helping them find Neko-Chan and Mandy. They were flying on the back of the fire dragon when they saw 2 little dots(me:from high up in the air things look like lil dots.) running from a bigger dot.
"Hey look dots..dude." FlamE said. "Wait they look like...um...hm...NEKO-CHAN AND MANDY FO GO FLY DOWN THERE!!

They went down and was now flying beside the 2 girls running.
"Hiya, why you running??" AznVKai asked her found friends. that...thing behind us..." Neko-Chan told them. They all looked back to see a evil bit-beast then it yelled "GIVE IT BACK TO ME!!!" Neko-Chan seemed to be scared now it's like she was the one that has something of the bit-beast.
"NO,NO,NO,NO,NOOO!!" Neko-Chan yelled. "IT'S MINE NOW!!!!" Fo stoped flying and let Kai,FlamE,and AznVKai off his back. He was going to battle this bit-beast!! The bit-beast stoped running after the 2 girls and was going to battle also!! They looked at eachother for 1 min then Fo was glowing a red/orange colour and then he yelled.
"FLAMING FIRE BALL!!!!"
The other bit-beast was not ready for his attack yet so he lost.
"Dude..."Mandy said. "That was !!!"
"Yes,yes whatever. We must go now and help you find a way out of here." Fo said to them. Then they got on Fo's back and flew away into the sky.(me: like a big,big birdy!!!lol)


MaxLover: ok I think that chappy was short "sigh"...well sorry that I went back and forth,& back and forth! I just wanted to keep you from the other half. heeh heeh .' well please review!! buh bi