DLN: I'm so very sorry for the long update. I
seem to have gotten really really lazy now..... -- Anyway, about the
poll I put, (I deleted that chappie because it was a waste...) it
looks like number 2 won! But some people had voted for number 1 so
guess what? I'm doing a bit of both and both. Does that sound
good with you readers? Hope so. Anyway...here's the new summary!
Hope you guys like it! Oh and, I read over all the chapters and I'll
redo them again soon because of the errors. As you might have
noticed, I'm not very good at spelling lol.....
Summary:
Hilary is madly in love with Tyson but he doesn't notice her as
anything more then an annoying brat and a good friend. How will she
ever get him to notice her? And does he feel the same way? What
happens when Hilary is acting a little strange....and it seems like
only Tyson can do something about it... In the end, will one of them
have to risk their lives? Ty/Hil
DLN: There we go! To tell you
the truth...I kinda had trouble starting this chappie hehehehe. Well
here are notes to all my wonderful reviewers! Who continue to support
Ty/ Hil!!! Holds up a flag that says Ty/ Hil Forever on it, and
gives one to each reviewer Lol. I realized that in chappie five, I
said my goal was to get up to fourty reviews and after that, fifty. I
got way over that. sniff I feel so loved.....okie, then now my goal
is ninety reviews! Let's try and achieve the impossible! Hurrah!
Matt.J1: Yes....Poor Hilary....sniff Don't worry, it'll all work out...I think....O.O
Kohari: Lol. Yes, Ashley should. But if she did, then Tyson would have no heart to love Hilary with. Lol. So I have to prevent Ashley from doing that.
Dranzen: Nods It seems like we all hate Ashley at the moment..which is what I wanted the reader's reaction to be. MWAHAHAHAHAH! Lol. You really don't think I lost any of my reviewers? Looks Well, some of them are gone, but on the other hand, I earned new reviewers!
Someone: I agree. Shame on her.
Chikyuu-Defender-Beyblader: YAY! Hope you update on it soon!
I.lIvE.wItH.sQuIrElLeS: Perfectly written? There are so many spelling mistakes! O.O Ah, oh well. You know I'm very prone to doing them.
Diamond Core: I'm awesome? Aww, thankies! Whacks Tyson
Tyson: Rubs head What was that for?
For liking Ashley.
Tyson: Um..you made me do it...
Actually, you did it yourslef and it was part of the plot. Glares at Tyson Argue with me again, and no snacks for a month!
Tyson: TT
dragonwave: Yeah...nothing really happens in chappie 2 ne? Oh well. Sorry about that. It shows how strong the love is? Thanks...I think. TT. Don't mind me. I do not know what I'm saying.
Lazygurl: "Get back?" Sorry, don't quite understand what your syaing. O.O Lol, sorry.
Carren: I already thanked you enough on the phone but......THANKS AGAIN FOR REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER! Too bad your grounded now...sniff I'll call you next week then...
X Shadow Wolf X2: You read the whole fic? Note to self: Thank you greatly. Wait, I already did that. O.O Heheheh. Well, thanks for reviewing!
tempestlover: Lol. Thankies! Do you mind if I use some of your...er...dream? Lol. Because your dream sounded like a great idea. Also thanks a lot for the long review!
jade destiny: Don't worry. I won't go overboard with the mushy stuff. Tyson's still too dense to realize how he feels. -- And I guess it was a bit weird lol. Chappie four I mean.
Tomoyo13: I continued.
DLN: I didn't know which reviews to answer, and which to not. So sorry, I'll answer all reviews this time. Hope this chappie isn't too much of a bore.
Readers: Sleeping
DLN: I haven't even started yet! O.O Oh well...disclaimer!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but I-
Readers: Still sleeping
Disclaimer: I'm not that boring. O.O
DLN: Oh yes, there was a favourite part of mine in the last chappie, but I made it wrong. -- So here's the right version.
But when she came along
and took your breath away, I was devastated and speechless.
It
has happen.
The thing I was dreading of.
I have one
question to ask.
Why can't it be me, and not her..........
DLN: Now on with the chappie!
Hilary's P.O.V
I was taking a walk again.
Yup, another walk.
It's quite refreshing actually.
Thinking of thoughts again...
Walks do help you think...
It seems like Tyson looks at Ashley more and more each day.
Does he know how hard it is for me?
How it is to love someone.
Want someone.
Need someone.
That you are not able to have....
The worse part is, she seems to want to be friends with me.
Friends with me?
She must be living in a dream world...
I shuddered at the thought of being friends with my competition in love, as I like to call it.
Someday, Tyson might just confess his feelings to her and she'll feel the same way.
Then, I'll have absolutely zero chance of getting him.
I had a feeling that that alful day was going to come soon.
At first, all I wanted to do was cry.
But I wasn't brave enough to shed a tear.
It seems hopeless huh?
Well not really, for there is always enough hope, not much, but it's still there.
As I walked, the sun set, but I could see a faint glow in the distance.
My eyes lit up with curiosity as I walked over to the glow to see what it was.
I had to sheild my eyes for a moment, because the golden light was too bright, but then the light started to fade away as I got closer.
"Strange..." I thought.
The source of the light was blocked by a big, and brown, cardboard box.
Normally, I would have just walked away, and went back home but something inside of me, was telling me to move the box and see what the light was.
I got down on my knees, about to move the box when something else inside of me, said to get away now. Before it's too late...
"Late?" I whispered. What am I talking about....
I got up and backed away but it seemed like the light was pulling me to it....like a magnet or something.
So I got down again, and pushed the box away.
I put my hands up to my eyes right when I moved the box because there was a blinding flash.
I blinked my eyes, then rubbed them lightly.
For some reason, it felt like I had just been knocked out.
At the moment I was seeing tons of stars flashing before my eyes.
When my vision had finally came back, from whatsoever reason why it dissapeared, the light had stopped glowing so I could see what had caused it.
I gave a light gasp as I saw what it was.
Trust me...it was surprising, for what I saw was a.....
"Beyblade?" I said to myself, eyeing the object.
It was indeed a Beyblade.
A pink one in fact, to my happiness.
It looked like a regular blade to me.
Well like the Bladebreaker's blades anyway.
It even had a picture thingy in the center, which I think they called a bit-biste? (I'm going to use your idea k bob's ur uncle? )
No wait, a bit beast.
Yes, that was it.
A bit-beast.....
It looked sort of like Tyson's bit-beast Dragoon, exept it was pink....
Didn't Tyson say that only the detined ones get a bit-beast?
So did that mean I was destined then?
Only one way to find out...
I reached out to grab the blade but when my fingers came into contact with the pink blade, I felt a strange, electrical surge going through me.
I froze.
I felt like I couldn't move...
Then there was a voice in my head...
"Hilary?" It asked, softly.
I felt a light wind on my face when the voice spoke. "Who are you?" I whispered.
Why was I whispering? I- I- don't know...
"I'm your bit-beast.." The voice replied.
"Bit-beast? Mine? I don't have one..." I answered, confused yet frightened at the same time.
"Well, then would you like to be my master? But there's a catch...." The voice trailed off.
Wait a moment. If I was the master of a strong bit-beast, I could probably impress Tyson.
Maybe even beat him, then he'll want to hang out with me more then that Ashley.
But did the bit-beast say there was a catch?
"What's the catch?" I wondered.
"You'll have to let me take control of you sometimes....you know, just sometimes...."
No way was I going to let some bit-beast able to take control of my body. Only I control it and no one else. "No way!" I yelled, then proceeded to move my hand from the blade but it just wouldn't budge.
"You have no choice..." The voice said firmly. "You can't move until you accept. You could have just accepted.... Don't you want to impress Tyson?"
That got me angry. "How do you know about Tyson?" I said, shocked.
"I know everything about you Hilary..." The voice seemed to coax me, making me calm down. "Come on, you want Tyson to love you, don't you? I'm your only chance...you know you want to take me...."
I blinked twice, then closed my eyes. "Your right..." I agreed. "I can't get Tyson without you. Fine, I agree!"
"Finally." The voice exlaimed, then there was another blinding flash of white light and I felt like something was trying to go through me.
It felt like knives were piercing through me. I screamed, but no one could hear me.
I felt like crying, the pain was unbearable, but then it was over, but somehow, I no longer felt like myself.
I clutched the blade in my hand tightly and bent on one knee to get up from the ground.
My eyes glowed red for a second, then a evil grin made it's way on my face.
Next Day At School
Tyson's P.O.V
"Hey Hilary!" I called out, as I saw my brunette friend, walking towards the school entrance in front of me.
Hilary turned around and faced me with a smile.
A smile?
That was not a smile.
It was sort of...er...how should I put this...evil looking...
And her eyes...they not wore her usual kindness but were flashing somewhat dangerously.
"Hello Takao." Hilary said slowly, saying each sylabble slowly.
"Since when did you call me by me japenese name?" I asked confused. "And why do you look like you're stressed out? Is something wrong?"
"I can call you by your japenese name anytime I wish to, Takao." Hilary replied a bit coldly, emphasizing my name. "And I am not stressd out, so therefore there is nothing wrong with me."
"Um...okay..." I answered. "If you say so... So did you do your math homework last night? Pretty hard eh?"
"We had math homework?" Hilary asked, her eyes still flashing.
"Er...yeah..." I backed away a bit from her. Her eyes were freaking me out. She looked like she could have killed me any second now. "Did you do the work?"
"No." Hilary replied, simply.
"No?" I reapeated, shocked.
"That's what I said." Hilary rolled her ruby eyes at me.
Hilary?
Not doing her homework?
This is not possible...
Was the world turning weird or something?
I was so shocked, that I stumbled backwards and almost fell down the stair step that I was on.
"Whoa!" I exclaimed.
Hilary rolled her eyes at me yet again. "You such a klutz, Takao." Then she left me, and entered the school doors.
Leaving me, staring after her shocked.
What was wrong with Hilary today?
"Hey Tyson!" I heard a voice shout from behind me.
I turned around to see Max running up to me.
When Max had got to me, he stopped panting and trying to catch his breath.
"Yo, Max my buddy." I grinned. "Finally someone who doesn't call me Takao."
"Huh?" Max asked. "Nobody calls you Takao."
"Hilary does." I muttered.
"Hilary? She never called you Takao before..." Max wondered.
"Well, she was acting a bit strange today." I admitted.
"Well she probably woke up from the wrong side of the bed." Max joked.
"Yeah...probably." I said, forcing myself a smile.
"Well, what time is it?" Max asked, changing the subject.
"Huh?" I checked my watch. "Oh, about 8:15 am."
Max's grin suddenly changed to a look of horror. "OH MY FUCKING GOD! I WAS SUPPOSED TO MEET PROFESSOR TOUYA AT 8:00 AM! SEE YA TY!" Max yelled, then rushed off through the front doors of the school.
I opened the fornt doors to look after him. "MIND YOUR LANGUAGE, MAX TATE!" I yelled, after him.
"WHATEVER!" I heard him reply.
I chuckled, but then my smile turned into a frown.
Yeah...I was worried about Hilary...
She is one of my friends anyway.
What caused her to act this way.
I started at the space in front of me, but then saw Hilary exiting from one of the classroom doors.
I didn't bother calling her.
I didn't want her to go all Kai-like on me again.
I stared at her as she started walking down the halls.
"I don't know who you are...." I thought, as I stared after her. "But you're sure not Hilary..."
Somewhere From The Back Of The School
"Yeah, she took the blade." Ashey whispered into a walkie- talkie.
"Excellent." A deep voice, probably a man, answered back. "Are you sure she did?"
"Of course she did!" Ashley exclaimed. "Did you think I wouldn't know?"
"Well, do you think she's capable of taking the bit-beasts from them?" The deep voice asked.
"She is quite close to them. I tried being friends with her, but I guess that didn't work, so this way would do better." Ashley smirked.
"Well, you better get them for me, or you know what will happen to you." The deep voice said firmly.
"Don't worry. I'll get them. Got to go now." Ashley said, then snapped off the walkie-talkie. "You'd better watch your backs...." Ashley whispered.
DLN: I'm sorry for the lame chapter. Trust me, Ashley has something to do with it. Don't worry, it's not going to turn into one of those weird plot thingies. O.O Hilary gets her body back sometimes so it's still the same thing as before, but just with a little twist. I will not say it sucks anymore but it probably does hehehe. K, well I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter.
