Zanza/Kaika - thanks so much for the reviews! I am glad that you like my story(s) so far! Oh and Everyboyd:YOU'RE CRAZY! lol. I hope you like the rest!
Dragonblade - aren't I a stinker? lol. You'll find out...acutally in this chapter. I can't let my main girl die can I? Or will I.....dun dun dun....read on!
Cara - I have been reading all of your stories with Cara and Racheal and SHin and Goki and the likes. They are very good! I love them. Most DBZ fics aren't very good...but yours rock! Keep up the great work!
I hope you all enjoy this chapter! I enjoyed writing it!!!
Chapter 8
Maria's eyes flickered open to the sounds of groaning, yelling, and a few loud bangs. She went to move her legs to stand up and she found that she couldn't. As her vission cleared, she saw why. The demon, the one who had caused her to topple over the edge, was laying on top of her unconcious. The thing was so big and heavy, it's weight far surpassed Marias own weight, so that was why she couldn't move. Maria looked around herself to see where she was. She was obviously at the bottom of the cannon, and there was a small river that ran through the middle of it. She went to move her right arm to position herself, and she found that she couldn't. It was broken. The realisation of the pain finally struck Maria and she had tears rolling down her cheeks in seconds. She heard another bang and she looked up. A few rocks were falling down...though not very big ones. Above her, there must be a battle going on. But what was this? There was one of the big green demons climbing down the rocks, he just got to the bottom. The demon made his way over to Maria and his unconcious friend on top of her.
"So girl, you thought you could escape our camp? Not while I am in charge!" it told her with a hiss and a growl.
"Oh stuff it. You aren't in any position to be saying things like that," Maria retorted and turned her head away from the demon and looked the other way.
"Oh I'm not girly?" It screached and moved swiftly was in front of her face, her chin caressed in it's scaly, boney, hand. Maria tried to get out of it's grasp, but the demon had to strong a grip on her face, and without the use of her legs and right arm...she knew she couldn't. So she did the next best thing...she spat in it's face.
"Oh don't get cocky girly," it said, " I have to get you to my boss yet and your friends just caught up to us...so, well, here I am with you and no partners. No matter, I hated them anyway," it said slyly as it lifted the demon body off of her. It flung the unconcious body into the river 10 feet away. It picked up Maria and slung her over it's shoulder in one swift move before Maria had even time to register what he was doing to her.
"Let me go!" she screamed and started violently trying to wiggle free of his grasp.
"I don't think I can do that," it told her and began walking along the line of the river south, leaving his companions behind. Maria started pounding his back with her left fist. Her right arm hurt really bad and she couldn't move it at all.
"Who is your boss, and why does he want me?" she asked coldly to the green demon.
"OH my boss? You want to know girly? Hmm....lemme see. He wants you cause he wants to kill your precious Kurama." the demon said with a laugh.
"So what if he has me? Why would he get Kurama then?" she asked.
"You don't know? Kurama has a little spot in his demon heart for you you know."
"We...we're just friends," Maria whispered rather sadly. She loved Kurama with all her heart...but she doubted he thought of her as more then just a friend.
"You really think so? No....he loves you girl...and you are our ticket to his death," the demon said then shut his mouth again. They almost had a friendly conversation just then...it's kinda hard to believe right!? 'More then just a friend? Kurama loves me?' Maria thought, her heart racing.
"How long will you have to take me?" Maria asked the demon bored.
"It's not far so hush," it said. Maria shut up not wanting to get on the bad side of this thing again. It was actually fairly decent when he was acting nice.
After what seemed a little over ten minutes, the demon came upon a rock formation with a sort of rock builing built into it. He stopped at the door and said a password that Maria couldn't hear. They walked inside and the demon carried her up long fleets of stairs that twisted and turned like mad. He walked down a corridor and they came upon a large stone room.
"Sir, I have brought the girl," it said as he entered the corridor. Maria tilted her head so she could see. In front of her was a person with a black cloak covering it's head and body.
"Good work Sleeker," a mans voice rang out, "Drop her," it added. The demon, whos name is Sleeker, gently placed her on the floor...not wanting to fully drop her.
"So...Maria. I can see what Kurama sees in you. You're very beautiful...for a human," the guy said and stood up, walking towards Maria as if he was gliding on the stone floor. Maria cringed as he knelt by her. The guy gently took her cheek and caressed it in his hand, looking deep into her eyes. Maria held her breath, not sure of what the violet eyes were intending on doing.
"Yes...very beautiful. I think after I kill Kurama, I will keep you for myself," it whispered softly. Maria gasped as he said that. She shook her head violently, causing her body to move. Her right arm began to hurt more. Before she knew what was happening, she felt the touch of the guys fingers on her injured arm and it began to heal. Before long, it was totally healed and she was able to move it again.
"H-how..." she began. It didn't hurt at all!
"Aww...your dear Kurama is coming with his friends. I can feel them. Oh goody, he brought the demon and the spirit detective along with him. This should be fun!" he announced as he stood up.
"Sleeker, get some chains and chain her to my throne so she can't get away from me," the guy commanded. Sleeker bowed and ran out of the room quickly. He came back with think black chains and attached two of the ends to part of the thrown. He picked up Maria and attache one of the chains to her right leg and the other to her left leg. 'I hope Kurama will be alright...' Maria thought as she sat down, her back against the throne. Her knees were propped up and she buried her head in them in frustration.
Dragonblade - aren't I a stinker? lol. You'll find out...acutally in this chapter. I can't let my main girl die can I? Or will I.....dun dun dun....read on!
Cara - I have been reading all of your stories with Cara and Racheal and SHin and Goki and the likes. They are very good! I love them. Most DBZ fics aren't very good...but yours rock! Keep up the great work!
I hope you all enjoy this chapter! I enjoyed writing it!!!
Chapter 8
Maria's eyes flickered open to the sounds of groaning, yelling, and a few loud bangs. She went to move her legs to stand up and she found that she couldn't. As her vission cleared, she saw why. The demon, the one who had caused her to topple over the edge, was laying on top of her unconcious. The thing was so big and heavy, it's weight far surpassed Marias own weight, so that was why she couldn't move. Maria looked around herself to see where she was. She was obviously at the bottom of the cannon, and there was a small river that ran through the middle of it. She went to move her right arm to position herself, and she found that she couldn't. It was broken. The realisation of the pain finally struck Maria and she had tears rolling down her cheeks in seconds. She heard another bang and she looked up. A few rocks were falling down...though not very big ones. Above her, there must be a battle going on. But what was this? There was one of the big green demons climbing down the rocks, he just got to the bottom. The demon made his way over to Maria and his unconcious friend on top of her.
"So girl, you thought you could escape our camp? Not while I am in charge!" it told her with a hiss and a growl.
"Oh stuff it. You aren't in any position to be saying things like that," Maria retorted and turned her head away from the demon and looked the other way.
"Oh I'm not girly?" It screached and moved swiftly was in front of her face, her chin caressed in it's scaly, boney, hand. Maria tried to get out of it's grasp, but the demon had to strong a grip on her face, and without the use of her legs and right arm...she knew she couldn't. So she did the next best thing...she spat in it's face.
"Oh don't get cocky girly," it said, " I have to get you to my boss yet and your friends just caught up to us...so, well, here I am with you and no partners. No matter, I hated them anyway," it said slyly as it lifted the demon body off of her. It flung the unconcious body into the river 10 feet away. It picked up Maria and slung her over it's shoulder in one swift move before Maria had even time to register what he was doing to her.
"Let me go!" she screamed and started violently trying to wiggle free of his grasp.
"I don't think I can do that," it told her and began walking along the line of the river south, leaving his companions behind. Maria started pounding his back with her left fist. Her right arm hurt really bad and she couldn't move it at all.
"Who is your boss, and why does he want me?" she asked coldly to the green demon.
"OH my boss? You want to know girly? Hmm....lemme see. He wants you cause he wants to kill your precious Kurama." the demon said with a laugh.
"So what if he has me? Why would he get Kurama then?" she asked.
"You don't know? Kurama has a little spot in his demon heart for you you know."
"We...we're just friends," Maria whispered rather sadly. She loved Kurama with all her heart...but she doubted he thought of her as more then just a friend.
"You really think so? No....he loves you girl...and you are our ticket to his death," the demon said then shut his mouth again. They almost had a friendly conversation just then...it's kinda hard to believe right!? 'More then just a friend? Kurama loves me?' Maria thought, her heart racing.
"How long will you have to take me?" Maria asked the demon bored.
"It's not far so hush," it said. Maria shut up not wanting to get on the bad side of this thing again. It was actually fairly decent when he was acting nice.
After what seemed a little over ten minutes, the demon came upon a rock formation with a sort of rock builing built into it. He stopped at the door and said a password that Maria couldn't hear. They walked inside and the demon carried her up long fleets of stairs that twisted and turned like mad. He walked down a corridor and they came upon a large stone room.
"Sir, I have brought the girl," it said as he entered the corridor. Maria tilted her head so she could see. In front of her was a person with a black cloak covering it's head and body.
"Good work Sleeker," a mans voice rang out, "Drop her," it added. The demon, whos name is Sleeker, gently placed her on the floor...not wanting to fully drop her.
"So...Maria. I can see what Kurama sees in you. You're very beautiful...for a human," the guy said and stood up, walking towards Maria as if he was gliding on the stone floor. Maria cringed as he knelt by her. The guy gently took her cheek and caressed it in his hand, looking deep into her eyes. Maria held her breath, not sure of what the violet eyes were intending on doing.
"Yes...very beautiful. I think after I kill Kurama, I will keep you for myself," it whispered softly. Maria gasped as he said that. She shook her head violently, causing her body to move. Her right arm began to hurt more. Before she knew what was happening, she felt the touch of the guys fingers on her injured arm and it began to heal. Before long, it was totally healed and she was able to move it again.
"H-how..." she began. It didn't hurt at all!
"Aww...your dear Kurama is coming with his friends. I can feel them. Oh goody, he brought the demon and the spirit detective along with him. This should be fun!" he announced as he stood up.
"Sleeker, get some chains and chain her to my throne so she can't get away from me," the guy commanded. Sleeker bowed and ran out of the room quickly. He came back with think black chains and attached two of the ends to part of the thrown. He picked up Maria and attache one of the chains to her right leg and the other to her left leg. 'I hope Kurama will be alright...' Maria thought as she sat down, her back against the throne. Her knees were propped up and she buried her head in them in frustration.
