Cara(now some saiyan washed ashore) - I read your story, it's very good so far, you have to update soon! Thanks for the review, I am glad you like my story.
DragonBlade - I'm glad too. Though something sad is going to happen in the future.
Kaizan - your reveiws are just so hilarious to read. I read them over and over again and laugh everytime! Thanks for the reveiw to both of you.
Hexgirl - thanks girl. Glad you like my story!
A/N - When I first wrote this story I wasn't sure on how long the dark tournament had been(I forgot) Now that i have looked over my recorded episodes of Yu Yu Hakusho, I see that it didn't span nearly as long as I wrote in this story. It is too late to change it though...so please go with it.
"I can feel them coming. Sleeker, stay by my little doll to make sure she doesn't try anything funny," The man with the violet eyes commanded. The green demon nodded his head in understanding and went to go stand 'guard' by Maria who was still chained to the thrown. The cloaked,violet-eyed person walked out of the 'thrown' room to walk in the corridors of the rock building.
"I don't want Kurama to die," Maria muttered to herself as she felt a few tears well up in her eyes. She blinked rapidly to try to hold them in. Sleeker looked down at the human girl with...was that sympathy in his eyes!!!!(wow....)
"Do you know why my boss has a grugde against your Kurama?" Sleeker asked her as he sat down next to her...something like a friend. Maria looked at him and blinked, then shook her head.
"I...no...I don't," Maria said. She was surprised at the friendliness of the demon. He had once sounded as if he wanted to kill everything that any human touched...now he was...a friend?
"It is somewhat of a semi-long story. I don't know if we will have time to finish it," Sleeker told her.
"Could you tell me anyway?" Maria asked as she sniffed and sat up straighter.
"Ok...it all began when Kurama and...."
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"Ms. Sutana!?" Jade yelled as she pounded on the door. The door swung open and the girl stumbled onto the floor of the house.
"Have they found anything yet?" Ms. Sutana asked. Her eyes were red and swelled and her face was puffy. Jade stood up and shook her head.
"I'm afraid not. It seems she has just dissapeared!!! Though they know one thing, it seems Suuichi has dissapeared also!" Jade cried. Ever since the dissapearance to Maria yestereday, the police had been out looking for her all night.
"I don't know where she could have gone! Who would want to kidnap her!? My angel..." Ms. Sutana said and tears started rolling down her cheeks again.
"Mommy...is Mari home yet?" Akio asked innocently as he came to the door and hugged his mother's leg.
"Not yet sweety," she said and picked him up and held him. She boy buried his head in his mother's shoulder and started crying.
"I am sorry this happened, I will be out looking for them now," Jade said and left the two.
"Maria...come home to us soon," Ms. Sutana muttered and closed the door after her daughter's best friend.
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"Awww...I see you made it. It is more then I expected, but I should have known the whole team was going to come," the violet-eyed man said as the four spirit detectives approached the entry-way of the rock formation.
"Listen scum, give us Maria back," Yusuke yelled.
"Not yet, I can't do that yet. See, I have a fight to win against Kurama," he said again, his manly voice ringing out. It was kinda familiar to the four detectives, but the couldn't quite place it.
"It seems that I will have to do as he says," Kurama mused to himself.
"Who the heck are ye!?" Kuwabara shouted.
"Me? Oh yes...how silly of me not to introduce myself," the man said. A hand reached up to grab the cloak that was covering his body.
"My name is... Sarasu," he said and flung off the cloak. And now the reason was clear to them why the person had seemed so familiar to them. Violet eyes, an alto-sounding manly voice...
"Yes, I am sure you have guessed it my now. I am Karasu's brother," Sarasu said with a smirk on his face. Yusuke gasped slightly and Kuwabara was on the ground.
"So you want revenge, for me killing Karasu," Kurama stated matter-of-factly. Sarasu nodded his head with an evil grin.
"So if you four will follow me," Sarasu said and began to make his way back to the thrown room, the four spirit detectives following.
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"And that is why he wants Kurama's life," Sleeker finished just as the five people came into the thrown room. Maria spotted Kurama and smiled slightly...even though he still had yet to find her.
"Okay, Nobody will interfere with this fight...it is me and Kurama," Sarasu said and stood in front of the thrown. Maria gasped...she didn't want Kurama to fight.
"Agreed," Kurama said and stood facing Sarasu on the opposite side of the room. Sleeker sat next to Maria and the other three spirit detectives moved to a corner.
"Prepare to die Kurama..." Sarasu said and charged.
A/N - Also, I have yet to see the episodes with Karasu and Kuram fight. Though I have read many spoilers cause the waiting is killing me. So sorry if this spoils some things for you guys...I just couldn't think of WHO to use for the villain so....I made up this person.
I hope you like it! Sorry it took me so long to update..I was busy with school!
DragonBlade - I'm glad too. Though something sad is going to happen in the future.
Kaizan - your reveiws are just so hilarious to read. I read them over and over again and laugh everytime! Thanks for the reveiw to both of you.
Hexgirl - thanks girl. Glad you like my story!
A/N - When I first wrote this story I wasn't sure on how long the dark tournament had been(I forgot) Now that i have looked over my recorded episodes of Yu Yu Hakusho, I see that it didn't span nearly as long as I wrote in this story. It is too late to change it though...so please go with it.
"I can feel them coming. Sleeker, stay by my little doll to make sure she doesn't try anything funny," The man with the violet eyes commanded. The green demon nodded his head in understanding and went to go stand 'guard' by Maria who was still chained to the thrown. The cloaked,violet-eyed person walked out of the 'thrown' room to walk in the corridors of the rock building.
"I don't want Kurama to die," Maria muttered to herself as she felt a few tears well up in her eyes. She blinked rapidly to try to hold them in. Sleeker looked down at the human girl with...was that sympathy in his eyes!!!!(wow....)
"Do you know why my boss has a grugde against your Kurama?" Sleeker asked her as he sat down next to her...something like a friend. Maria looked at him and blinked, then shook her head.
"I...no...I don't," Maria said. She was surprised at the friendliness of the demon. He had once sounded as if he wanted to kill everything that any human touched...now he was...a friend?
"It is somewhat of a semi-long story. I don't know if we will have time to finish it," Sleeker told her.
"Could you tell me anyway?" Maria asked as she sniffed and sat up straighter.
"Ok...it all began when Kurama and...."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(arne't I mean? I stop in the middle of a story like that...no wait...the beginning of one! Continue...this isn't it)
"Ms. Sutana!?" Jade yelled as she pounded on the door. The door swung open and the girl stumbled onto the floor of the house.
"Have they found anything yet?" Ms. Sutana asked. Her eyes were red and swelled and her face was puffy. Jade stood up and shook her head.
"I'm afraid not. It seems she has just dissapeared!!! Though they know one thing, it seems Suuichi has dissapeared also!" Jade cried. Ever since the dissapearance to Maria yestereday, the police had been out looking for her all night.
"I don't know where she could have gone! Who would want to kidnap her!? My angel..." Ms. Sutana said and tears started rolling down her cheeks again.
"Mommy...is Mari home yet?" Akio asked innocently as he came to the door and hugged his mother's leg.
"Not yet sweety," she said and picked him up and held him. She boy buried his head in his mother's shoulder and started crying.
"I am sorry this happened, I will be out looking for them now," Jade said and left the two.
"Maria...come home to us soon," Ms. Sutana muttered and closed the door after her daughter's best friend.
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"Awww...I see you made it. It is more then I expected, but I should have known the whole team was going to come," the violet-eyed man said as the four spirit detectives approached the entry-way of the rock formation.
"Listen scum, give us Maria back," Yusuke yelled.
"Not yet, I can't do that yet. See, I have a fight to win against Kurama," he said again, his manly voice ringing out. It was kinda familiar to the four detectives, but the couldn't quite place it.
"It seems that I will have to do as he says," Kurama mused to himself.
"Who the heck are ye!?" Kuwabara shouted.
"Me? Oh yes...how silly of me not to introduce myself," the man said. A hand reached up to grab the cloak that was covering his body.
"My name is... Sarasu," he said and flung off the cloak. And now the reason was clear to them why the person had seemed so familiar to them. Violet eyes, an alto-sounding manly voice...
"Yes, I am sure you have guessed it my now. I am Karasu's brother," Sarasu said with a smirk on his face. Yusuke gasped slightly and Kuwabara was on the ground.
"So you want revenge, for me killing Karasu," Kurama stated matter-of-factly. Sarasu nodded his head with an evil grin.
"So if you four will follow me," Sarasu said and began to make his way back to the thrown room, the four spirit detectives following.
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"And that is why he wants Kurama's life," Sleeker finished just as the five people came into the thrown room. Maria spotted Kurama and smiled slightly...even though he still had yet to find her.
"Okay, Nobody will interfere with this fight...it is me and Kurama," Sarasu said and stood in front of the thrown. Maria gasped...she didn't want Kurama to fight.
"Agreed," Kurama said and stood facing Sarasu on the opposite side of the room. Sleeker sat next to Maria and the other three spirit detectives moved to a corner.
"Prepare to die Kurama..." Sarasu said and charged.
A/N - Also, I have yet to see the episodes with Karasu and Kuram fight. Though I have read many spoilers cause the waiting is killing me. So sorry if this spoils some things for you guys...I just couldn't think of WHO to use for the villain so....I made up this person.
I hope you like it! Sorry it took me so long to update..I was busy with school!
