Hello people. This is first attempt at a fic in general. So please, give me comments on how to improve my writing. It's kinnda hard for me to write this, cuz I don't usually think or write happy. But hey! It's the thought that counts.
Disclaimer: Looks around the room. Nope. No J.K. Rowling here. But fine. If you insist. I don't own Harry Potter. Happy?
This story is not a serious story. It's a more.... Erm.... Light fic. Don't expect anything to deep. Yeah. I'm gonna try to do that for my next story. It takes place around 3 years after our two favorite characters graduate. Voldemort has been defeated, Lucius was killed, and Draco is NOT a deatheater.
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Ch. 1: Filling in the places.
Draco Malfoy was a Greek God. Girls flocked over him, desperate for just a touch. He loved the attention, but that wasn't what he wanted.
Pansy Parkinson was not a perfect picture and she was not modest - she was the jealous type. She enjoyed drawing attention to herself - not that many people gave it to her. She was a slightly plump witch, with bleach-blonde hair, and ebony eyes, who enjoyed whining, gossiping, and spreading rumors. There was nothing special about her.
Hermione Granger was the exact epitome of perfect. She was a quiet girl, who enjoyed reading. She loved school with a passion. She always had been the top of her grade. She was 1/3rd of the Golden Trio, and was a drop-dead beauty. She was always followed with stares, and guys drooled over her. She was aware of this, but always brushed it off. She liked to think of it as... well... hormones.
Pansy always dreamed of a perfect life with Draco Malfoy. Draco always dreamed of a perfect life without Pansy Parkinson. Their feelings were not mutual.
Hermione Granger always envisioned a life with someone she loved, kids, and a cozy house. To bad she couldn't find someone to fill in the hole.
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Okay. So maybe that was really short. But I promise I'm working on it. I'm also outlining a plot for another story. Cuz I happen to think this is a bit cheesy right now. Ya.... Right.
I'd like reviews. Please? It could be on how to improve everything. Thanks!
me.
