I suck at writing so you can flame if ya want, it only makes me feel better that people at least read my horrible work to agree.
"Every thing falls apart in the end." His last words, Aielita was gone, Xanna was too, she had given up her life, her only chance to be human forever to save a place she had only know for a little while. But still her demise was the beginning of a down fall. "And no one dies of old age." Jeremy said. He was standing there on the roof of the factory, at the edge. Odd, Yumie and I were all frightened and calling out to him don't do it. Odd closes his eyes and says "plea..." but it's too late.
Jeremy jumps and falls. Just like that there was no more Jeremy.
The next few days Odd claims to be sick. But I know he isn't and I know he is thinking, about what I did not know just then...
In science while collecting Jeremy's work, (the teachers think he is on vacation with his family) I get a urgent call from Yumie. She told me to go to the factory then went dead. Upon reaching the factory room near the elevator yumie is sitting there on the ground. It is easy to see she is holding back tears. As I look up I feel my self get sick and pale.
There is Odd, hanging on the wires, lifeless. But it was worse kiwi, his dog, was jumping up and down underneath him, not understanding why he would not come down and pets him like he always did.
Yumie looked at me and then collapsed on to the ground sobbing. I feel my self get week because I know it was my fault. If I had made him get up, made him go to school then he would not have been able to do this to himself. But I was a bad friend and I let him down, because I am stupid, I am an idiot, a bad friend I deserved to die not him.
Yumie suddenly takes off and I know where she is going and I don't even try to stop her. She would have found a knife any way there were a lot of sharp medial objects around.
I follow her path slowly at an almost dazed way. I find her hunched over a rusted medial pole her wrists still bleeding even though there is nothing left of her. All I am thinking about is
'Every thing falls apart, and no one dies of old age... who had said that?'
I suddenly reach the sewer... I belong here with the rats....this is where I belong. And then I let my self slip in and never woke up. I deserve it, I let them down.
Every thing falls apart in the end, and no one dies of old age.
