Ok I wrote this poem from Kagome's perspective. Please read and review and tell me what you think honestly.
It haunts my thought
It haunts my sight
This pain is brought
This fever comes at night
Me being restless
Your image obsess my mind
My heart being dreamless
Because the troubles are entwined
A love I have for you
And the one you have still claims her
From my position I have no view
My life it's all a blur
My body numb from all this grief
And your said one to protect me
With your touch I feel relief
And in those amber eyes I see
The love your harbor inside for me
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