Hi guys once again! Thanks for the reviews, I don't know but I always love people just encouraging me on. At the end of the chapter or each chapter I thank each reviewer personally, also I UPDATE ONE TO TWO WEEKS if I have time, I sneak it in somehow . Well thank you once again and I'm going to try to be descriptive in this one. Also Hikari will possibly be the only character I made up in the story, other than that the characters are from the game.
I do not own Kingdom Hearts.
Enjoy!
-SilentLuck
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"Soooooo......., what do you do in this island anyways?" Hikari said with curiosity.
"Nothing that concerns you." Riku said hotly.
"What does that mean?!"
Riku grinned and said, "What do you think, or are you too dumb?"
Hikari sped toward him and bonked him fiercely on his silver head.
"Oww! Why you little......"
"Here we go again." Kairi said as she stared at the two chasing each other.
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"Wow, going to different worlds, COOL!" Hikari said, her teeth flashing in the sun.
"Yeah." Sora said happily.
"So do you want to help us build the raft?" Kairi replied.
"Sure."
"Okay go with Riku and get 3 coconuts, 5 fish, 2 mushrooms and some drinking water." Kairi said slowly but with a cheerful smile. Then she shot a dirty look at Riku and seemed to say quietly, "Behave" through clenched teeth.
Riku who was staring at the ocean snorted and gave a false smile at Kairi. Kairi groaned in reply but walked away with Sora tailing along.
"Oh yeah." Kairi threw an empty glass bottle toward Riku and then left.
"Let's go dimwit." Hikari said combing her dark hair away from her eyes.
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They were where Riku beat Sora, by the crooked tree, Riku's favorite spot. There were three thick palm trees, abundant with coconuts at the top.
Riku then grabbed his wooden sword and attacked the nearest tree. One coconut fell, it was a pale yellow and it was a bit ripe. Hikari unsheathed her sword and then frowned, her sword would cut the trunk not move it a bit to make coconuts fall.
"Here." Riku said, his wooden sword spiraling toward her, she caught it.
"Thanks."
Hikari then locked her blue-gray eyes on its trunk and ran toward it, and then she swung the sword hard into the trunk and two pale yellow coconuts dropped into the warm sand.
Then she grabbed the coconuts in her arms and smiled at Riku. Riku burned with embarrassment and looked away.
"Beginner's Luck."
"Right." Hikari said with sarcasm.
"Let's go, alright." Riku said, annoyed.
Riku then grabbed his sword and observed Hikari struggling a bit with the coconuts. Her sword was also in the sand. Riku then picked her sword up and walked toward the bridge.
"Let's go, we'll leave the stuff with Wakka."
"Wakka? Who's he or her?"
Riku ignored her, as Hikari was following Riku to this 'person' she did not yet encounter.
Riku then stared back at her and sighed, he walked toward Hikari and grabbed the three coconuts with ease.
"Thank you." Hikari said, shocked with the assistance and his strength.
"Don't mention it."
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Wakka was twirling a blue and white ball with one finger, the waterfall thundering behind him. He was a boy with flaming red hair, brown eyes, tan skin, and his yellow pants rippled in the soft breeze. His shirt attached with his pants, and sturdy sandals that blended with his clothes. (sorta forgot how Wakka looks)
"Wakka!"
"Riku, man, how you doin'?"
"Who's this?" Wakka replied, a quizzical look on his face, staring at Hikari.
"Introduce....me." Hikari said through a tight smile, kicking Riku on the foot.
"Ow! Oh....., um, Wakka this is Hikari, Hikari this is Wakka."
"Hi." Hikari said shyly, as Wakka smiled.
"We need you to watch this stuff." Riku said, dropping three coconuts in front of him.
"Okay." Wakka replied as Riku grinned in thanks.
"Great, Hikari let's go."
"You're no- Hikari thought against it- Okay."
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Riku walked behind Wakka and then filled the empty bottle with cool water from the waterfall and walked toward the foamy ocean.
"Hikari, we need fish, five actually." Riku said as he stared at the girl.
"So, what's your point?"
"Hikari!" Riku shouted angrily.
"Sheesh! Fine! Don't start crying like a baby!"
"Look, let's just get the fish. I get 3 you get 2." Riku said curt.
"Fine whatever, Grandpa."
"Bu- Riku threw a small knife to her and a short rope.
"Use it, alright, I just hope your not too dumb to figure it out."
"Hey!- Riku dived into the water- Grrr, come back you!"
Hikari then dived into the water; the water was clear as she saw a silvery flash dart in front of her. Hikari stared at the knife and then swam to the strange flash of color. She soon saw a fish in the water, pecking on a gray rock. Hikari quickly stabbed the fish and sprung up in the water.
She sniveled, "Man I hate doing anything like that!"
She saw Riku catching his third fish already and then coiling the rope around them, smiling and then ruffling his hair. Hikari for some reason blushed lightly.
"Riku!"
"Huh?"
"Riku, I can't do this, y'know?"
"Too scared?"
Hikari bonked Riku on the forehead and stared at him angrily.
"Ow. Look did you get any?"
"One."
"Fine, I'll get one more."
Riku walked in the water, scanning. He found one and slowly walked toward it, the fish swam toward Riku thinking it was a colorful piece of coral; Riku killed it. Hikari groaned with disgust.
"Riku-
"Look I know, but we need to eat." Riku automatically held her chin and put it up toward his face.
Her eyes shined in the sun, her hair flowing magically in the wind.
"Wha- What am I doing!" He thought, he slapped his hand and then turned away, his cheeks a beet red.
"Look, let's go."
Riku's emotions were wild, he couldn't guess what they were.
Hikari followed, wanting to insult Riku and have a little fun she stopped.
Riku was giving the fish to Wakka, Hikari running toward them.
"There's a secret place at the base of that tree." Wakka said.
"Is there? I love Adventure! Riku let's go!"
"But we need 2 mush-
Hikari grabbed Riku's hand and crouched to get inside, Riku followed.
When Hikari went deep inside she saw drawings decorate the walls, one had Sora giving a star to Kairi, what was that? Hikari shrugged and then she saw a door.
It had no knob to turn, it was a light color of wood, Hikari walked toward. She was about to touch it when she heard a voice.
"Hikari!"
Riku ran in front of her as she heard a dead, chilly voice.
"The door to other worlds, the connection, the downfall, the heartless....."
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To be Continued....
So what do you think? Please review. Also did I make this one a bit too serious?
Now before I go I want to thank my reviewers:
Amourwolf: thanks so much for your review, and I'm so glad you like it!
Nicole: hey girl, thanks for the compliment, as you can see I'm a KH fan as well and I'm happy you like Hikari. (bad girl bad girl whatcha gonna do, whatcha gonna do when Riku comes for you. )
Kawii-chan: thanks for the review, I'm happy you like my story.
Sora1truelove: this is chappie 2 and thanks for the compliment, I'm happy you thought it was great.
Vanna-chan: I'm happy you like my capitalization, grammar, and etc. I believe as well that's important, I did this a bit more descriptive I hope it made it better somehow, I'm not very experienced, I'm trying! Also my only other character that I made up is Hikari, also I appreciated the help but I don't want to spoil it for you! But thanks.
Nariko-Aolani: Thank you for the review, if you can see I did that dialogue you offered I hope it makes more sense.
Thank you everyone, tell me what you think.
This was a bit short, I'll make it longer later on.
Please review!
