Alright, this is my first fanfiction,so if it sucks, then tell me. Honestly, I want anyone who reviews this to be frank.
I can take some criticism, so don't think you'll hurt my feelings or what not. With that out of the way...
I do not own Tales of Symphonia, or any of it's characters. Namco does, I'm just a fan writing a story.
Now, why should I do a Sheena/Lloyd story? Well, In my opinion I think the interaction between these two characters is adorable. Sheena has a crush on Lloyd, and Llyod never really figures it out. If you played the game with Sheena's affection level the highest you can see a bunch of cute scenes between the two. They usually all end up with Lloyd ruining the moment and hurting Sheena's feelings. Sheena was my favorite character in Tales of Symphonia by far. Everything about he is just so adorable, she's quite bashful and can be reticent with her feelings, but she always tries to act tough to use as a mask to cover her true self, which is quite cowardly and weak. Through the course of the story, Lloyd changes her outlook on life and ultimatley changes the way she acts. Thus, she forms a crush on him :). Of Course Lloyd, dense as ever, is totally oblivious to this and just thinks Sheena's comments towards him are merely freindship based. Stupid Llyod :P. Anyways you probably know all of that crap so let's move on to the actualy story ne?
Also, the first few chapters are basically going to be parts in the game, so it's nothing really new, I just changed/added extra dialogue, nothing to change the story of course.
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Chapter 1 - Approaching Mizuho
It was around noon and the sun was at it's peak, bright as ever. A boy was walking around blindly was stumbling around like an idiot until he finally walked into a large object and fell on his backside.
"NGH" The boy said as he saw a large shadow over him. He quickly reached for his left hip and pulled out a sword and was ready to strike the monsterous shadow when a large boot came chashing down on his esophogus.
"Calm down, you're fine, I have no intentions to harm you" Said a rather tall man in shackles. His calm blue eyes had no hostility.
Suddenly a hyena-like laugh came from a short distance. "PFFFTTTT bwahahahahaahahahahaha!! For Martel's sake, Lloyd, you are SUCH a retard!!" A young man with long crimson hair was just about rolling ground as a swift kick to his gut stopped him abruptly.
"I wouldn't talk, Zelos, you happen to the most moronic, obnoxious, insincere scumbag this group has to offer" Said a voluptuous woman as she puller her foot away from the young man's abdomen. She brushed her long dark hair out of her face as she knelt down and helped pick up the boy as he was dusting off his red jacket.
"You ok?", She asked "You sure made an idiot out of yourself Lloyd...". "Yeah! I mean I know its hard to see and all, but COME ON!" Said a young boy as her knelt infront of Llyod.
"Sh-Shut up Genis" Replied Llyod as he looked down, with an ego obviously shattered.
"I apologize for the humiliation, but had I not disabled you, you might have severely harmed me" Said the tall sapphire colored haired man as he helped the young voluptuous woman pick up Lloyd.
The scarlet haired man started to rise up.. "Ugh.. Sheena... was that really needed?" he said. "No, but it sure felt good"
replied the attractive young woman as she pulled out a red card. "And if you piss me off some more, I might just REALLY hurt you!!"
"Sheesh, alright alright, your so mean to me! Hmph...no one comes to help me out but Lloyd gets half the party.. this is so lame" Zelos said to himself as he trailed off into a mumbling mess.
The group had just left the Gaoracchia Forest, a dark and gloomy woodland where the sun never shined. Lloyd walked out into the sunlight as was temporarily blinded by the sun. They were off to Mizuho, a hidden village that Sheena is from,
to escape the wrath of the Pope's Cardial Knights.
"So.. how far IS Mizuho from here?" Asked a curious Lloyd.
"Not too far.. just cross this grassy area and into that forest over there" She pointed northeast for a breif moment "I.
haven't been there in so long.. I'm a bit nervous to see everyone again."
At this point Lloyd and Sheena were a few yards ahead of the rest of the group. "Why? It's not like you are hated there or anything right?" Lloyd said as he saw a grim face on Sheena. "Oh... I'm sorry, I didn't mean to--" Sheena cut Lloyd off,
"It's fine, they don't hate me."
Lloyd's face brightened "Great! Man, I bet Mizuho is so cool, hey.. think I could learn how to make those cool cards you use?"
"What? You mean my Seals? They're basically pieces of paper with writing on them thats all" Replied the girl in a simple way.
"Oh thats it, Cool! So I can just get this piece of paper here, write some gibberish on it and--"
"It won't work" Sheena cut Lloyd off again.
Lloyd blushed "O-Oh.. well then how do I learn how to make and use them?" He asked, anxious to know the answer.
"Well, you have to join the Mizuho tribe.."
"Thats it? COOL! How do I do that??"
"Uhm, well by...marriage..." Sheena looked away and blushed.
"Marriage huh?" Said Lloyd as he thought to himself for a second. "No problem! I'll do it!"
Sheena's eyes widened as she look at Lloyd. Her face was beat red. "Well.. Well, Uh.. I-I guess, if you w-want to." She turned her face quickly.
"Yeah! I just have to find someone from your village and get married!" Llyod said has his face glowed.
"...."
"Huh? Whats wrong Sheena?"
"You are so dense." She walked ahead of Lloyd, unwilling to talk to him anymore.
Zelos ran up to Lloyd. "Wow, now THAT was funny."
"Huh whats funny?" Lloyd said with a dumbfounded look.
Zelos sighed. "It goes like this Lloyd..-- Awwhhh OUCH OUCH OUUCCH" Sheena was dragging Zelos back behind the group.
"Shut up Zelos, I don't need you interfering, telling Lloyd some bogus story about how I have a crush on him, because I DON'T" Sheena was nearly screeming at Zelos.
"Woah woah, who said you had a crush on him? GASP My hunny is falling for another man?!" Zelos said in a jocular manner as he chuckled to himself.
Sheena quickly blushed them fumed. "SHUT YOUR MOUTH YOU IDIOT CHOSEN!" She proceeded to knee him in the crotch and quickly walked away.
"Ngh.. Sheena.. ughhhhh. That was... so... harsh..." Zelos then wimpered a bit but recieved no help from any of his companions.
"He really needs to keep his mouth shut." said Raine.
"Is the red haired one always like this?" asked the man in shackles.
"Zelos always acts a little funny, alot of people don't like him but I think he's a great friend!" Said a cheerful Blonde named Colette.
"Th-Thanks Colette 3" Replied Zelos as he regained his composure.
"Don't encourage him, Colette" said Genis.
"Shut up, brat" the words quickly escaped the Tethe'allan Chosen's mouth as he glared at the small half elf.
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So, any good? First fanfic, so bear with me, I'll add more chapters probably, but only when I have time. I don't really like the format I put it in, so expect next time to be a bit simpler. I added in alot of Zelos stuff since he cracks me up, I find it hilarious how he thinks so highly of himself yet everyone realizes he's just a big dork. Review please :)
I can take some criticism, so don't think you'll hurt my feelings or what not. With that out of the way...
I do not own Tales of Symphonia, or any of it's characters. Namco does, I'm just a fan writing a story.
Now, why should I do a Sheena/Lloyd story? Well, In my opinion I think the interaction between these two characters is adorable. Sheena has a crush on Lloyd, and Llyod never really figures it out. If you played the game with Sheena's affection level the highest you can see a bunch of cute scenes between the two. They usually all end up with Lloyd ruining the moment and hurting Sheena's feelings. Sheena was my favorite character in Tales of Symphonia by far. Everything about he is just so adorable, she's quite bashful and can be reticent with her feelings, but she always tries to act tough to use as a mask to cover her true self, which is quite cowardly and weak. Through the course of the story, Lloyd changes her outlook on life and ultimatley changes the way she acts. Thus, she forms a crush on him :). Of Course Lloyd, dense as ever, is totally oblivious to this and just thinks Sheena's comments towards him are merely freindship based. Stupid Llyod :P. Anyways you probably know all of that crap so let's move on to the actualy story ne?
Also, the first few chapters are basically going to be parts in the game, so it's nothing really new, I just changed/added extra dialogue, nothing to change the story of course.
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Chapter 1 - Approaching Mizuho
It was around noon and the sun was at it's peak, bright as ever. A boy was walking around blindly was stumbling around like an idiot until he finally walked into a large object and fell on his backside.
"NGH" The boy said as he saw a large shadow over him. He quickly reached for his left hip and pulled out a sword and was ready to strike the monsterous shadow when a large boot came chashing down on his esophogus.
"Calm down, you're fine, I have no intentions to harm you" Said a rather tall man in shackles. His calm blue eyes had no hostility.
Suddenly a hyena-like laugh came from a short distance. "PFFFTTTT bwahahahahaahahahahaha!! For Martel's sake, Lloyd, you are SUCH a retard!!" A young man with long crimson hair was just about rolling ground as a swift kick to his gut stopped him abruptly.
"I wouldn't talk, Zelos, you happen to the most moronic, obnoxious, insincere scumbag this group has to offer" Said a voluptuous woman as she puller her foot away from the young man's abdomen. She brushed her long dark hair out of her face as she knelt down and helped pick up the boy as he was dusting off his red jacket.
"You ok?", She asked "You sure made an idiot out of yourself Lloyd...". "Yeah! I mean I know its hard to see and all, but COME ON!" Said a young boy as her knelt infront of Llyod.
"Sh-Shut up Genis" Replied Llyod as he looked down, with an ego obviously shattered.
"I apologize for the humiliation, but had I not disabled you, you might have severely harmed me" Said the tall sapphire colored haired man as he helped the young voluptuous woman pick up Lloyd.
The scarlet haired man started to rise up.. "Ugh.. Sheena... was that really needed?" he said. "No, but it sure felt good"
replied the attractive young woman as she pulled out a red card. "And if you piss me off some more, I might just REALLY hurt you!!"
"Sheesh, alright alright, your so mean to me! Hmph...no one comes to help me out but Lloyd gets half the party.. this is so lame" Zelos said to himself as he trailed off into a mumbling mess.
The group had just left the Gaoracchia Forest, a dark and gloomy woodland where the sun never shined. Lloyd walked out into the sunlight as was temporarily blinded by the sun. They were off to Mizuho, a hidden village that Sheena is from,
to escape the wrath of the Pope's Cardial Knights.
"So.. how far IS Mizuho from here?" Asked a curious Lloyd.
"Not too far.. just cross this grassy area and into that forest over there" She pointed northeast for a breif moment "I.
haven't been there in so long.. I'm a bit nervous to see everyone again."
At this point Lloyd and Sheena were a few yards ahead of the rest of the group. "Why? It's not like you are hated there or anything right?" Lloyd said as he saw a grim face on Sheena. "Oh... I'm sorry, I didn't mean to--" Sheena cut Lloyd off,
"It's fine, they don't hate me."
Lloyd's face brightened "Great! Man, I bet Mizuho is so cool, hey.. think I could learn how to make those cool cards you use?"
"What? You mean my Seals? They're basically pieces of paper with writing on them thats all" Replied the girl in a simple way.
"Oh thats it, Cool! So I can just get this piece of paper here, write some gibberish on it and--"
"It won't work" Sheena cut Lloyd off again.
Lloyd blushed "O-Oh.. well then how do I learn how to make and use them?" He asked, anxious to know the answer.
"Well, you have to join the Mizuho tribe.."
"Thats it? COOL! How do I do that??"
"Uhm, well by...marriage..." Sheena looked away and blushed.
"Marriage huh?" Said Lloyd as he thought to himself for a second. "No problem! I'll do it!"
Sheena's eyes widened as she look at Lloyd. Her face was beat red. "Well.. Well, Uh.. I-I guess, if you w-want to." She turned her face quickly.
"Yeah! I just have to find someone from your village and get married!" Llyod said has his face glowed.
"...."
"Huh? Whats wrong Sheena?"
"You are so dense." She walked ahead of Lloyd, unwilling to talk to him anymore.
Zelos ran up to Lloyd. "Wow, now THAT was funny."
"Huh whats funny?" Lloyd said with a dumbfounded look.
Zelos sighed. "It goes like this Lloyd..-- Awwhhh OUCH OUCH OUUCCH" Sheena was dragging Zelos back behind the group.
"Shut up Zelos, I don't need you interfering, telling Lloyd some bogus story about how I have a crush on him, because I DON'T" Sheena was nearly screeming at Zelos.
"Woah woah, who said you had a crush on him? GASP My hunny is falling for another man?!" Zelos said in a jocular manner as he chuckled to himself.
Sheena quickly blushed them fumed. "SHUT YOUR MOUTH YOU IDIOT CHOSEN!" She proceeded to knee him in the crotch and quickly walked away.
"Ngh.. Sheena.. ughhhhh. That was... so... harsh..." Zelos then wimpered a bit but recieved no help from any of his companions.
"He really needs to keep his mouth shut." said Raine.
"Is the red haired one always like this?" asked the man in shackles.
"Zelos always acts a little funny, alot of people don't like him but I think he's a great friend!" Said a cheerful Blonde named Colette.
"Th-Thanks Colette 3" Replied Zelos as he regained his composure.
"Don't encourage him, Colette" said Genis.
"Shut up, brat" the words quickly escaped the Tethe'allan Chosen's mouth as he glared at the small half elf.
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So, any good? First fanfic, so bear with me, I'll add more chapters probably, but only when I have time. I don't really like the format I put it in, so expect next time to be a bit simpler. I added in alot of Zelos stuff since he cracks me up, I find it hilarious how he thinks so highly of himself yet everyone realizes he's just a big dork. Review please :)