Terrible Elwen
By Jade Limill
Chapter 2
She watched as her soon-to-be-betrothed rode up to the gates of Rivendell. His golden hair was swept to and fro by the wind. And he looked at her.
She did the only thing she could. She flashed her eyes at him. His eyes darkened to royal blue. The first step to making him hers was complete. She smirked. Everything was too easy.
Elwen raced off to the kitchen to get some candy. She would need it with Legolas around. She had discovered at an early age that anything sweet fueled her powers.
A few flashs of her eyes and five minutes later, she scuttled to her room with a basket full of cake and candy. She immediately started eating the sweetcake, licking off the frosting first.
As the sugar rush found her, she also thought of a wonderful prank to play on Glorfindel. She hated the rich frosting on her birthday cake that Lindir would make her in two days. If Glorfindel liked it so much as he had claimed to, she could put frosting in his hair. His lovely hair, that he brushed eight times a day. It made her sick. Her's was prettier than his, and she only brushed it twice a day.
Of course, she could never put frosting in his hair herself. She would order the twins to do so. And make them think it was their idea. She loved getting people in trouble.
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When it was time to eat dinner, Elwen dressed in a dark blue dress that brought out her eyes and went to the Great Hall.
Once she got there, she sat next to Elrohir and whispered what she wanted done in his ear and told him to forget she had told him. He looked at her as if she were crazy. Elwen took the chance and flashed her eyes. A smile came over his face as he leaned over and told his twin.
Legolas was there of course, as was his father. Elwen looked into his eyes and was caught in the silver stare. She snapped out when he looked away again. She knew that she would have to be careful around him.
Legolas, on the other hand, got another flash and his eyes turned even darker. Elwen smiled and sat back. She ate the best foods, as always, and then retired to her room.
"Saklaben, answer me," she said clearly once she had locked her door.
"Yes, my lady, you called?" A rough voice said.
"I want the prince of Mirkwood. Tell me how to get him," Elwen ordered.
"Flash your eyes at every chance you see him. Don't let his father see, for Thranduil has the same powers you do, only he doesn't use them much. He will be your greatest enemy," the Cursed Armor replied.
"Saklaben, tell me how to get his father under my control," Elwen said, suddenly fearful.
"Do not despair, leave your mark on one of his things. Looking at it will be as a flash to anyone else," Saklaben said.
"You may go now, Saklaben," Elwen said. And then the presence was gone.
Saklaben smiled. Mirkwood was just the start. From Mirkwood, he could raise an army and overcome all of Arda.
He had been planned this since he had found Elwen. All he had to do was wait for hormones in her body to start working, and get her to trust him. That was how he controled her.
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Legolas knocked on the door to his father's bedroom. He needed to discuss things with him.
"What is it, Greenleaf?" Thranduil asked his son, who smiled at the use of the nickname.
"Father, I have a problem. I can't get this girl out of my head. I think I love her," Legolas said.
"Which maiden?" Thranduil asked.
"I don't know her name. She has blonde hair and indigo eyes. Or violet. I'm not sure which." Thranduil frowned.
"Legolas, stay away from her. She has the powers of persuasion, as do I, though I believe she uses them more than I. No good can come of a relationship," Thranduil warned, flashing his eyes golden to make sure his son did as he said.
"Yes, Adar," Legolas replied.
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Elwen was alarmed to find Legolas's eyes a lighter blue than that which she had last seen him in the morning. Especially when he turned away from her. She caught his eyes and flashed her's.
"Don't tell anyone of this," she said, flashing her eyes again.
Legolas was confused. He needed to get away from her, his father had told him to, yet he also needed to stay by her side. He could not explain it, but he needed to fulfill her wishes.
He could not tell his father. When she asked to be led to his father's rooms, he was only to happy to reply. Once there, he was ordered to stay out of the room while she drew a mark on the mirror. It immediately turned invisible.
Elwen made her escape and ordered him to forget what she had just done. Of course he obliged. She smiled. Legolas was already hers, his eyes violet, and his father would soon be.
It was only a matter of time before Arda was ruled by cursed armor, Elwen married Legolas, and Thranduil obeyed her every wish. Only a matter of time. . . .
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A/N: Yes, I know short chapter, but the next one will be longer, I promise. Thank you for reviewing,
Replies:
M.A.D.- School in 2 days? Where do you live?! It's Summer for crying out loud! Unless you live in like Austraila or something. . . .hmmm.
leggylover4ever- thank you. I will try making others more intresting.
Seriously Wrong- Um, no parody, this is set before the Lord of the Rings. And it's like a summary for the story. An extended summary. I'm trying to make it interesting.
Elegon- Thank you. I hope they do. I hate her. And I heard that an elf comes of age at 100. So that's what I'm going by.
Anon- Yes, she is a literal Mary-Sue. Soome of it will be humor, but that's to be expected with Mary-Sues. It's not a parody, but it does come a little close.
By Jade Limill
Chapter 2
She watched as her soon-to-be-betrothed rode up to the gates of Rivendell. His golden hair was swept to and fro by the wind. And he looked at her.
She did the only thing she could. She flashed her eyes at him. His eyes darkened to royal blue. The first step to making him hers was complete. She smirked. Everything was too easy.
Elwen raced off to the kitchen to get some candy. She would need it with Legolas around. She had discovered at an early age that anything sweet fueled her powers.
A few flashs of her eyes and five minutes later, she scuttled to her room with a basket full of cake and candy. She immediately started eating the sweetcake, licking off the frosting first.
As the sugar rush found her, she also thought of a wonderful prank to play on Glorfindel. She hated the rich frosting on her birthday cake that Lindir would make her in two days. If Glorfindel liked it so much as he had claimed to, she could put frosting in his hair. His lovely hair, that he brushed eight times a day. It made her sick. Her's was prettier than his, and she only brushed it twice a day.
Of course, she could never put frosting in his hair herself. She would order the twins to do so. And make them think it was their idea. She loved getting people in trouble.
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When it was time to eat dinner, Elwen dressed in a dark blue dress that brought out her eyes and went to the Great Hall.
Once she got there, she sat next to Elrohir and whispered what she wanted done in his ear and told him to forget she had told him. He looked at her as if she were crazy. Elwen took the chance and flashed her eyes. A smile came over his face as he leaned over and told his twin.
Legolas was there of course, as was his father. Elwen looked into his eyes and was caught in the silver stare. She snapped out when he looked away again. She knew that she would have to be careful around him.
Legolas, on the other hand, got another flash and his eyes turned even darker. Elwen smiled and sat back. She ate the best foods, as always, and then retired to her room.
"Saklaben, answer me," she said clearly once she had locked her door.
"Yes, my lady, you called?" A rough voice said.
"I want the prince of Mirkwood. Tell me how to get him," Elwen ordered.
"Flash your eyes at every chance you see him. Don't let his father see, for Thranduil has the same powers you do, only he doesn't use them much. He will be your greatest enemy," the Cursed Armor replied.
"Saklaben, tell me how to get his father under my control," Elwen said, suddenly fearful.
"Do not despair, leave your mark on one of his things. Looking at it will be as a flash to anyone else," Saklaben said.
"You may go now, Saklaben," Elwen said. And then the presence was gone.
Saklaben smiled. Mirkwood was just the start. From Mirkwood, he could raise an army and overcome all of Arda.
He had been planned this since he had found Elwen. All he had to do was wait for hormones in her body to start working, and get her to trust him. That was how he controled her.
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Legolas knocked on the door to his father's bedroom. He needed to discuss things with him.
"What is it, Greenleaf?" Thranduil asked his son, who smiled at the use of the nickname.
"Father, I have a problem. I can't get this girl out of my head. I think I love her," Legolas said.
"Which maiden?" Thranduil asked.
"I don't know her name. She has blonde hair and indigo eyes. Or violet. I'm not sure which." Thranduil frowned.
"Legolas, stay away from her. She has the powers of persuasion, as do I, though I believe she uses them more than I. No good can come of a relationship," Thranduil warned, flashing his eyes golden to make sure his son did as he said.
"Yes, Adar," Legolas replied.
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Elwen was alarmed to find Legolas's eyes a lighter blue than that which she had last seen him in the morning. Especially when he turned away from her. She caught his eyes and flashed her's.
"Don't tell anyone of this," she said, flashing her eyes again.
Legolas was confused. He needed to get away from her, his father had told him to, yet he also needed to stay by her side. He could not explain it, but he needed to fulfill her wishes.
He could not tell his father. When she asked to be led to his father's rooms, he was only to happy to reply. Once there, he was ordered to stay out of the room while she drew a mark on the mirror. It immediately turned invisible.
Elwen made her escape and ordered him to forget what she had just done. Of course he obliged. She smiled. Legolas was already hers, his eyes violet, and his father would soon be.
It was only a matter of time before Arda was ruled by cursed armor, Elwen married Legolas, and Thranduil obeyed her every wish. Only a matter of time. . . .
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A/N: Yes, I know short chapter, but the next one will be longer, I promise. Thank you for reviewing,
Replies:
M.A.D.- School in 2 days? Where do you live?! It's Summer for crying out loud! Unless you live in like Austraila or something. . . .hmmm.
leggylover4ever- thank you. I will try making others more intresting.
Seriously Wrong- Um, no parody, this is set before the Lord of the Rings. And it's like a summary for the story. An extended summary. I'm trying to make it interesting.
Elegon- Thank you. I hope they do. I hate her. And I heard that an elf comes of age at 100. So that's what I'm going by.
Anon- Yes, she is a literal Mary-Sue. Soome of it will be humor, but that's to be expected with Mary-Sues. It's not a parody, but it does come a little close.