I dont really like this chapter, thats just me talking! So here it is.
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I hated when it was dark, dont get me wrong, I wasent afraid of it or anything. Its just, alot of bad things happen at night, and I didnt want anything to happen today, its been stressful enough. I couldnt see out of the Jeep, I could see the things that the Jeeps headlights lite up for me, which was basically the small dirt road. I kept staring out the windsheild and the Jeeps headlights came across a small cabin, which was obviously Morts. He kinda sighed and turned to me.
'So do you want me to drive you to your place or do you wanna walk?'
Well I surely did not wanna walk, but then I didnt want to bug Mort anymore either. I'm sure he was pretty annoyed, or getting close to it. I was about to open my mouth when he talked a little bit more.
'I mean, I have directions, theres only one more cabin out here, as far as I know. I could drive you there, it would be no trouble at all.'
I was silent and just nodded, I was kinda glad though, I was scared of the dark. I know I said I wasent, but I dont like people knowing these things! We turned around and started driving back down the dirt road, but then we turned down onto another road, it was very violent. There were hills are rocks everywhere, I was afraid we were going to get a flat tire or something. I shut my eyes real tight so I wouldnt see anything, even if it was coming. Then, the car stopped and the engine shut off, I felt a hand on my shoulder. I opened my eyes and saw Mort smiling at me.
'Did the little car ride frighten you? Sorry, didnt mean to go so fast.'
Was
he making fun of me? Eh I didnt care, you cant really get mad at
someone who just helped you out....can you? I hopped out of the car
and Mort followed me to the door, I smiled and turned the door latch.
'Thanks for helping me out Mort....I mean Mr. Rainey...whatever. Anyway, thank you for driving me, I hate the dark.'
He smiled and turned back to his Jeep, I couldnt see anything, but all I could hear was the Jeep driving away. I was alone, I thought I'd be happy, but I was actully kinda frightened. They said they wouldnt hook up the electricity until tomorrow afternoon, so I was completely in the dark. I could light some candles, but then I remembered they were in my car. I took the key out that was mailed to me and opened the door, it was really quiet. I kept stumbling over some stuff on the floor, I didnt know what it was, it was probably some old furniture. I heard something upstairs, that made me stop dead in my tracks. There were footsteps, they were low, my blood started to run cold. I stood there, like a statue, I felt like my legs were glued to the floor. The footsteps started to walk down the stairs, my eyes bulged out and I ran to the door. I slammed it and stood outside, engulfed in darkness, I was so scared that I ran to Morts house.
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So how was that anyway? Please R&R, I need to know what I'm doing wrong or right for that matter. Thanks,
!Sara!