Shinigami's Punishment-Angel of Heaven, Keeper of Pergetory, and Guardian
of Hell
Please review! I just want to know that someone has read it. Please tell me if you think I chose the right pilots for the roles.
______Inside the library______
She raised her tiny little head to look at Duo.
"It's okay." Said Duo putting out one long hand. "You're safe now. Nothing will ever hurt you again."
Gently he lifted up the child's spirit and hugged her softly in his arms rocking her back and forth.
"And you!" He growled as a man's spirit sat up and lm. "You like setting fires? Hu? You like fire? Well, you will get plenty of that where I'm taking you."
The spirits jaw dropped.
"Mind waiting in Pergetory a minute? I have a special little angel to deliver first."
The spirit disappeared.
"Thank you kindly."
Duo bowed his head and closed his eyes. The pair dissolved into the flames.
_____In Heaven____
They passed through a silver gate set with pearls and diamonds. Beneath Duo's feet were soft puffy clouds and ahead a bright light.
And from the light came a boy of around fifteen with messy brown hair and perussian blue eyes, dressed all in white. As he neared Duo relaxed. He had gotten the girl home safe.
"Be careful with her, Yuy." He slid the girl into Heero's arms. She let out a whimper of fright.
"Shhhh, you are safe."
Can I have my things?" Asked Duo patting the spirit on her head.
"You have another delivery, Maxwell."
Heero turned away and walked back into the light hugging the girl close to him.
"Oh yeah." Breathed Duo. "Fun." He cracked his knuckles and stretched his neck.
After dissolving again, Duo found himself in a dark someplace. Spirits sat chained to darkness struggling to get free.
"Trowa! I need the library burner!" Duo called.
"Which one?" Came a dull voice and Trowa Barton stepped out of a nearby shadow.
Duo's eyes widened.
"You-you mean.never mind. The one in Hillsdale that killed the eight- year-old girl. Mitchell Public Library."
Trowa disappeared for a moment but did not return alone. He had the spirit Duo had spoken with briefly in the library. He was bound in chains, the end of which was held securely in Trowa's right hand.
"Come on."
"Duo,"
"Hu?"
"Make sure he gets there." Trowa disappeared again.
"COME ON!" Duo yanked the chain, closed his eyes, and they were gone.
The temperature where they arrived was excruciatingly hot and the air dry. Flames surrounded them and through the flames came a Chinese man dressed in red leather pants and knee length jacket with a light shirt. His jet-black hair was tide tightly back. A grin split his face when he saw who Duo had brought with him.
"I have been waiting for you, Mr.Otis." He shot his arm out and grabbed the spirit by the throat. Welcome to Hell. Thank you, Baka Luci, I have you a new toy!"
"You're welcome, Onna."
_____Back in heaven_________
"I need my stuff, Yuy."
Heero was sitting at the top of the pearly gates with a grim look on his face. With a flick of his wrist a folded black pant suit appeared on his lap. A hat sat on top of it.
"Sorry. But you are not yet finished." He said to Duo. "The fire will claim the life of one other. I need the soul of Katoria Kinshutoroo.
(A.N. Please tell me what you think. Quatre will come in. Yes, Wufei was the guardian.)
Please review! I just want to know that someone has read it. Please tell me if you think I chose the right pilots for the roles.
______Inside the library______
She raised her tiny little head to look at Duo.
"It's okay." Said Duo putting out one long hand. "You're safe now. Nothing will ever hurt you again."
Gently he lifted up the child's spirit and hugged her softly in his arms rocking her back and forth.
"And you!" He growled as a man's spirit sat up and lm. "You like setting fires? Hu? You like fire? Well, you will get plenty of that where I'm taking you."
The spirits jaw dropped.
"Mind waiting in Pergetory a minute? I have a special little angel to deliver first."
The spirit disappeared.
"Thank you kindly."
Duo bowed his head and closed his eyes. The pair dissolved into the flames.
_____In Heaven____
They passed through a silver gate set with pearls and diamonds. Beneath Duo's feet were soft puffy clouds and ahead a bright light.
And from the light came a boy of around fifteen with messy brown hair and perussian blue eyes, dressed all in white. As he neared Duo relaxed. He had gotten the girl home safe.
"Be careful with her, Yuy." He slid the girl into Heero's arms. She let out a whimper of fright.
"Shhhh, you are safe."
Can I have my things?" Asked Duo patting the spirit on her head.
"You have another delivery, Maxwell."
Heero turned away and walked back into the light hugging the girl close to him.
"Oh yeah." Breathed Duo. "Fun." He cracked his knuckles and stretched his neck.
After dissolving again, Duo found himself in a dark someplace. Spirits sat chained to darkness struggling to get free.
"Trowa! I need the library burner!" Duo called.
"Which one?" Came a dull voice and Trowa Barton stepped out of a nearby shadow.
Duo's eyes widened.
"You-you mean.never mind. The one in Hillsdale that killed the eight- year-old girl. Mitchell Public Library."
Trowa disappeared for a moment but did not return alone. He had the spirit Duo had spoken with briefly in the library. He was bound in chains, the end of which was held securely in Trowa's right hand.
"Come on."
"Duo,"
"Hu?"
"Make sure he gets there." Trowa disappeared again.
"COME ON!" Duo yanked the chain, closed his eyes, and they were gone.
The temperature where they arrived was excruciatingly hot and the air dry. Flames surrounded them and through the flames came a Chinese man dressed in red leather pants and knee length jacket with a light shirt. His jet-black hair was tide tightly back. A grin split his face when he saw who Duo had brought with him.
"I have been waiting for you, Mr.Otis." He shot his arm out and grabbed the spirit by the throat. Welcome to Hell. Thank you, Baka Luci, I have you a new toy!"
"You're welcome, Onna."
_____Back in heaven_________
"I need my stuff, Yuy."
Heero was sitting at the top of the pearly gates with a grim look on his face. With a flick of his wrist a folded black pant suit appeared on his lap. A hat sat on top of it.
"Sorry. But you are not yet finished." He said to Duo. "The fire will claim the life of one other. I need the soul of Katoria Kinshutoroo.
(A.N. Please tell me what you think. Quatre will come in. Yes, Wufei was the guardian.)