Well this is my first Fan Fic so please give me a review on how I did.
It was a cool, brisk, morning in the town of Caelin. The village was full of life, everywhere you went, you could hear the sounds of townsfolk, shopping, selling, and socializing about their needs. This is going to be a great day, Robert thought to himself, for he was a thief. Robert was quite young being only the age of about 14. He had dark blue eyes, and dirty Blonde hair, He wore a Black Cloak with the hood up, but little did he know his life as a common thief was going to turn for the better.
Robert sat in a dark alleyway waiting to see his next target to pickpocket. As he sat there with the wind blowing in his face he saw a group of what looked like Mercenaries walking down the road. There seemed to be three leaders, First there was a male with bright red hair, the other to were a woman with a green shade of hair, and a guy with blue hair. They looked to be rich, maybe even Lords. "My luck may finally be turning" he said to himself.
As he crept up to steal some gold from the group, he noticed that someone was watching him one of the people in the group, slowly Robert began to creep away, but not without noticing that he was being followed by one of the people from the group. He began to run , as the wind blew through his hair like a fish swimming through the water, he looked back and saw that he was being followed by the man from the group, than I heard a voice shout "Matthew where are you going" was this man chasing me Matthew Robert thought to himself.
Not looking towards where he was going Robert tripped and fell hearing a loud crack is he felt his leg break. In a slight shock Robert momentarily sat there staring at his leg, for this would never heal properly without a cleric, and he wasn't even close to having enough money for that.
Well that is all I have to write about now so please make Reviews. I do plan to write much more than this so please be patient.