My Eru
Chapter One
Three Guys, a Girl, and Dark Holy Hell
"Dark Arrow!"
"Holy Bolt!"
"Please be quite."
"You'll never catch me; I'm the evil Demon Lord Raenef!"
"I'll skewer you on a pike; I'm the soon-to-be Head Cleric of the Temple of Rased!"
"Please...Be....Quite."
"I'll roast you over an open flame!"
"I'll 'Holy Bolt' your ass to hell!"
"SHUT UUPPPP!"
"Jeez, Erutis, all you had to do was ask."
BANG. BOOM.
"Ow, ow ow ow."
CLANG. CLASH.
"Run away!"
Eclipse's Study
Eclipse sighed. Things had been like this for a few days now. Lord Raenef and Chris had been in a competition of sorts; he suspected they were fighting over Erutis. And Erutis had been trying, for the past couple of days, to meditate quietly. So the two loud boys and the very quiet girl had been reeking havoc on his life, his masters' castle, and each other.
What's worse, whenever the knight moved away to a quieter place, the boys followed her. Eclipse would have to send one of the vermin away. The cleric was his immediate choice send him away and Lord Raenef got what he wanted, the knight, all to himself. But what if the knight didn't accept his advances? The knight would have to go...but then Lord Raenef and Chris would continue their bickering and ruin his life :sigh: He was at wits end.
"Holy Bolt!"
"Dark Arrow!"
Not again. "SHUT UUPPP!"
I will not be updating this for a while, I just want some constructive criticism to know if I should continue with it. It is a Raenef/Erutis pairing.