Last time: Harry didn't scream in till the flames in gulped him interlay.
Snape had just put on the pendent and said the incantation, when he felt the formulary tag of the portkey. The next thing he know he found himself in a small living room. With a boarded up fireplace and really bad furniture. Snape went into the next room, staying in the shadows, he found that it was a kitchen. And on the right there was a stair case. Snape headed toured the stairs. He very slowly clamed the stairs, but when he stepped on the thread step it quicken. Snape froze and listened. He heard nothing so slowly yet again he started claming the stairs. When he got to the top landing he very slowly started opening up doors, to see which one Harry was in. The first door he open was a bathroom, the next had some fat kid in it. This must be the brats cousin Snape thought to him self. He shut the door and went on. When Snape got to the last door he found that it was locked. What's this now, why is this door locked when nun of the others are. Snape thought. Snape took out his wand and unlocked the door. He opened the door slowly. What he saw surprised him. He saw another bed room, with a boarded up window. And in one corner of the room there was a bed, with a small figure twisting and turning in it. Snape walked over to the bed and lend over the boy. Just by looking at him he could tell that he wasn't feeling well and having one of his nightmares. I guess I should wake the little monster up, he thought. Just as Snape put his hand on his shoulder, Harry, screamed. Not a little surprised scream, but a scream of pain .Snape was taken a back by this and took his hand off him. "What the bloody hell not again" Snape heard someone say for one of the other rooms. Then there was this big stomped noise as someone was coming down the hall. "Trying to wake everyone in the damn nabor hood up boy." A very lager man had just stopped and stood in the doorway. "Who in the bloody hell are you" Snape looked over at the man in the doorway. "Get out of my house" Then the man came charging at Severus. Snape blocked the mans blows then he pushes him out the door then he slammed the door in the mans face and locked it with his wand. Snape sighed, his attention was brought back to him when he yet again heard a muffed scream behind him. He ran back to Harry's bed and started to shack him awake.
Harry wake with a start. He was painting and sweating heavenly. He was burning up. He reached up and wiped the sweat off his face." Its about time you woke up" Harry jumped up when he heard this. He reached down and picked up his glasses. Even with them on everything still was fuzzy. Someone was in his room, at first Harry thought it was his uncle then he looked closer at the figure and find who it was. " h hello professor" he said voice very horsy, and sickly voice. "what are you d doing here." Snape glared at the boy for a moment before answering. " I've come to check on the little golden boy how can even send a stupid letter if his life depended on it." Snape glared at him some more. Harry just stared at him trying to get what every the professor said to sink in. But he couldn't. It was to hot. He wiped more sweat off his fore head. Snape noticed his ill looking manner. And snared at him." hats the matter Potter not feeling up to the weather." Harry heard that comment and gave Snape a tiny smile. Even more sweat fell down his face. Then his elbows that were holding him up gave way and him fell down back into his bed. Breathing heavenly he closed his eyes. Snape rushed over to his side. Harry opened his eyes and looked up at his Professor then very softly he said "nope guess not, then he passed out from the heat.
Ok you guys how's this ,o sorry for the misspells no spell check remember ok see you in ch 4