I don't own inuyasha

50 years ago i only thought of power

to become a full demon and be strong

but real reason i wanted to become a demon was because i was

weak and afraid

not to be accepted by demons or humans was to much to bear

to be attacked by full demons and humans was un fair

what have i done to them

my only crime was to be born half demon

So now i want to become full demon

a dream that i thought was impossible

then i heard of the power of the shikon jewel

which can grant me my wish

so that i will be accepted by someone

so that almost no one can can challenge me

so i will become full demon

What do u think ?

Plz review