Hi all! i'm back! well like usual i don't know what to say,
so on to the Review!
dear darknessmystery: hello to u too! guess what this review does count (u know then u said in your story my review doesn't count) i know we know each other so i'll just call u!
dear evilive: evilive? hey i like that name it's cool! any way no i have not played Icewind Dale, is it made by D&D? (D&D means dungeons and dragons)
well that all for the review, this chapter kind of sucks!
Chapter 2
The feeling of some one he lost
In castle of Dranzer, in a room they call the meditating room. A boy, Kai, was stands in this room. His hair was two different shades of blue. Light blue in front and a dark blue in the back. His eyes were red-purple. He had on face paint, he was wearing a white scarf and a sleeveless shirt, on one side of his shoulder was an epaulettes and he had on baggy jeans. He also had bright red phoenix's wings and tail.
He was looking out of the window. He had a weird feeling in his gut. He didn't like it. I think the evil of the past is coming back' he though and I think Tyson met some one new. I think I'm going to meet someone I lost. But who?' he close his eyes. He just couldn't shake the feeling out of him.
"Kai?" said a female voice out side of the door. Kai didn't answer. A girl walks in to the room. She had lower back lenght red hair with the slipt on the left side and layered bangs that partially covered right eye. Her eyes were sky blue. She was warring a silk dress and high heel shoes. She also has phoenix's wings and tails like Kai but not red but a whitish-blue.
"There you are" she said "I was looking for you everywhere! You're hard to find... Kai what's wrong?"
"Oh... Umm there nothing's wrong Virginia." He said eyes still close.
"You're lying to me, little devil!" she said in cute voice, "Tell me what wrong! I am your girlfriend so you can tell me anything!"
That was true, she is his girlfriend. I can tell her what I'm feeling.
He turned to face her. He didn't know she was so close to him.
"Some thing great but evil is soon to come! The Prince of the dragon has met some...someone you might know I'm sure he found a new friend! I so sure I'm going to meet someone or something that I lost in my past! And I think I'm going crazy Virginia because in my dreams one word is said "ICE" I have no idea what it mean!" He said hating the feeling he feeling.
Virginia was kind of confused and mad. She was mad because she didn't like when people call them self crazy or stupid or anything bad.
"Let start at the beginning shall we? The evil thing could it be Balkov twins?" she ask.
"No it's not them my little angle!" he replied.
"But you said it's a great evil!" she said
"Yes they are evil but not great!" he smile he liked making fun of people especially Tyson.
"Then who Kai who?" she had a bit of fear in her voice. She didn't want to know but as a knight and leader of the other knights she needed to know. She was hoping it was not him.
"It's... the one of the past, the one with many name but we call him Blood Eater the dragon call him One with No Fur or Scales." The smile left when he said this.
Why him? Why couldn't it by a fluffy bunny or some thing nice? Why of all people did it have to be him? Why, why, why?!
"Ok so it's him!" she said calmly but she was screaming in the inside. "About Tyson, he always finds new friends, he found Max didn't he? And the possibility of it being someone I know is not that good. And what did you lose in past?"
"I don't remember what I lost but it's killing me. What do you have to say on that one word "ICE"?" He said.
"Nothing!" Kai look that her with a 'Yah right' look. "Ok if it make's you feel better...Ice... it sounds kind of familiar to me like if it was a name of a friend I once new. But I don't think it can be a name can it?"
"Yes it can!" Kai said a bit surprised that he didn't think of it.
"Oh...yah your dad, no father no wait the king want to see you!" she just remember why she was looking for him.
"Oh does he now? Well you can tell him to fuck to hell because I'm not seeing him!" Kai said rudely.
"1st of all I can't say that to the king my little devil he'll kick me out!" she said in a sugar high voice. "2nd, of all just talk to the guy! It's the first time he wants to talk to you! 3rd of all I'll kiss you if you go!"
"Kiss!?" Kai said in a wanting voice.
"Yup a French Kiss." She was trying to tempt him.
"French kiss!?" he wanted it but he didn't want to show weakness or to see his father.
"Come on! You know you want!"
"Umm! Ok!" he gave up "1st French kiss and then I see my father, ok!?!?" he grabbed her and put her in his arms. They stared to french each other. Wwwwwwwwwweeeee I got a French kiss, Kai thought, who cares if I got to talk to my dad now?!?! I got a French kiss!!!
They broke apart, "Ok, you see your dad now." she said.
Kai growled. "Do I have to?"
"Kai stop being a baby" she laughed.
"Me big baby! Baby wants kisses lots and lots of kisses!" he didn't mind being childish around her but with other people he would sit in the shadow and be an asshole.
"Oh Kai... you're such a little devil, but you're my little devil! He, he!" she hugged him. And with that they left the meditating room together hand and hand to talk with King Dranzer.
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