Kinny: I had swore to myself I would not sleep until I finished this chapter. I've been so off this story I didn't know what to write. And considering I have insomnia, I stayed up writing this until 7 am. I'm so proud of my self-discipline but this chapter disappointed me greatly. I couldn't find any real plot to write on so I just rambled a bit and stretched it out. It's fairly short and really...boring. I also tried out writing from different POV's...which was weird. I've been working more on my other 2 stories that I just posted recently so hopefully you guys will go read those.
Hot, steamy water splattered down upon blue-ish black hair before dripping and sliding down the still body.
What had he done wrong? He had made Naruto angry...He had done as he was told, did he not? He was supposed to wash Naruto's back, wasn't he?
A surge of anger swept through his body.
It wasn't his fault! Or maybe it was...he had only dropped the soap! Was that really such a big deal?! Agh!! This is so confusing!
Maybe I'll just apologize...
With a sigh, he turns to the twisty-water-turning-on-thing[1].
How do you turn this thing off...?
He poked it.
Nothing happened.
He twisted it.
And what a bad idea that was.
The poor child had twisted it the wrong way, causing the shower to quickly steam up and the water to burn. With a yelp, he hops out, but in his hasted, he slips and slams his head against the linoleum[2].
Naruto lifts his head lazily at the thump and glances over in the direction of the bathroom. Steam could be seen floating into the room and this slightly bothered the blonde.
What the hell was that?
Flinging his legs over the side of the bed and tightening the towel around his waist, he walks back into the steam filled bathroom. The floor was slick with droplets of water and he squinted through the steamy room. Moving towards the shower to turn the water off, hi foot nudges something soft.
"Huh...? Sa-Sasuke!!"
He quickly picks up the boy and rushes back into his room, setting the (NAKED!!) child down. Gently wiping the water away from the pale face and upper body (he had covered the bottom half in embarrassment), he sighed, greatly regretting the fact that he had left him all alone in the bathroom.
It's all my fault.
If I hadn't been such an idiot.
Such a perverted idiot.
But his thoughts were cut off as thick lashes parted to reveal a pair of hazy black eyes. [3]
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(Sasuke's POV)
Where was I? My head throbbed like a bitch. I wanted to give back into the darkness. Into the painless slumber, but something held me back and told me to open my eyes.
So I did.
A groan passes my lips as I struggle to sit up. Vision disoriented and blurred, all that could be seen was a tan blur with a blonde blue on top. I blink a few times to adjust and find myself naked in front of a towel clad Naruto. For some odd reason, I was embarrassed and cruel, unfamiliar words slipped out of my mouth before I knew it.
"What the fuck do you think you're doing, dobe?!"
A look of shock and hurt spread across his face, but at the same time he looked...relieved...and happy?
What did I just say? What did it mean...?
"Sasuke...does that mean you remember?"
Tears begin to well up in his eyes and this only confused my further.
Remember what?
I still don't remember anything!
What's wrong with him?
I was mean!
Why isn't he angry...?
"No....what're you talking about?" Hundreds of questions began to form but I pushed them back, waiting patiently for Naruto's answer.
"Oh." Oh? That's it? Oh?!?!
Patience, Sasuke. Patience.
I take a deep breath to hopefully calm down and look over at him but his head is lowered, blonde strands hanging over and covering his eyes.
"Why?"
"Huh?"
........I can feel my patience wearing thin. Very thin.
"Why would you ask if I remember?" I ask, my voice becoming slightly strained.
My eye twitches slightly but I keep from snapping at him. The room begins to spin and my head throbs painfully, hammers pounding into the sides of my head. Suddenly everything goes black and I finally give into the painless slumber.
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Naruto blinks and looks up as a light -fwump- tells him Sasuke had fainted. He sighed and walked into the kitchen to let the other boy rest. There was nothing else he could do, so he boiled an egg[4]. Hopefully it would help make the bump on Sasuke's head go away. Pain ate away at his heart. It was only the first day and they were already having issues and urges. Okay...maybe not they. But Naruto sure as hell was.
Walking back into the room, he kneels down next to the bed and rubs the towel-covered egg gently against the small bump forming on Sasuke's head. The body twitched but Naruto rubbed it alittle harder. A groan came, causing Naruto to rub just a teensy bit harder. Finally after half an hour, he gets up and pulls the blankets over the still sleeping child before walking back into the kitchen to throw away the egg.
He was exhausted. There had been more than enough 'excitement' for one day. Throwing himself onto the couch, sleep filters through his mind and quickly takes over, pulling him into anything but a peaceful sleep.
[1] I seriously got a mind-blank and couldn't remember what it was called.
[2] It was gonna be marble but I decided that Naruto isn't that well off and Sasuke might die, even though when I was 3 or 4 I slipped and smashed my head onto the marble step in my mummy's bathroom xD;;
[3] Everyone's thoughts and words are always cut off huh? -.-;;
[4] My mom always boiled and egg and (of course peeled the shell off) then covered it with a towel and rubbed it against my head if I fell and hit my head against something. It really works too! Or else my head would be horribly odd shaped...
Kinny: ahhh.....this chapter was BORING!! -growls at herself- Oh well...go read my other stories!! They're far more interesting then this one ;; and one of them has Sakura bashing :3 -evilevilevil- ok well..Review and you just -might- get special happy cookies! :D oh oh!! AND if you look at my really stupid drawings at the bottom you'll get SUPER DUPER cookies!!
Gi wo mite sezaru wa ya n: Maybe I will put a bit of lemon in here. I'm planning to put some lemon into Cruel Fate so if you want it, go read it there! xD
Az-Strawberry: I guess I'm glad 226 came out but I want the story to move faster!! It's soo...uhh...tension-y and stuff!!
Ria Sakazaki: I'm glad you liked that chapter but this chapter was so boring ;-;
Samurai-Kitsune: -cough- of course a shower scene with Sasuke and Naruto is awesome xD
Midnight-Blue-Wolves: haha...where's the rest...ehh...i wrote even less this time...sorriiiee !
Rieko: haha...yeah..Sasuke's so...OOC it scares me. And don't worry about the boyfriend thing...it's not like there's anything that anyone can do about it so...oh well. thanks for caring tho :D
ayame0: o.o;; i'm glad you like it so much =)
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I drew a couple of pictures cause I was bored...and couldn't think of any plot for the story. So hopefully you all will forgive me because I took the time to draw these pictures? xx;; -took less than 5 minutes on each...very lazy...- so don't be mad if they suck horribly...cause my scanner also sucks and just distorted them even more. To see the pics you just copy the link and take out the space between photobucket and .com kay? kay.
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That first one...is as you can tell 'fanfic art' I drew it when I thought about my last chapter. Ya know when Sasuke wonders about wearing boxers and Naruto freaks out? Yep..my freehand's are horrible.
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You guys might've seen this pic before. I just...eyed the picture and drew cause he looks so damned cute!! but I made him skinner since he's supposedly older in my fic...and I actually drew that Naruto logo thing!! ahhhh I was so proud of myself even tho it looks like crap :3
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It's a chibi naruto in a godzilla costume!! :D A little early for halloween but...who cares?
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This one's for all those itachi fans out there. I love itachi :3 I even wrote his name in japanese next to him!! And that's my name in japanese at the bottom. yep yep. I gots mad skilllzzz xD
