Okay, I have noticed that I got several good reviews. I'd like to thank both Sparky and Anonymous But Eager for the suggestions, even if Frances is a bit odd of a name for an experiment. I'll take it under advisement anyways. To ABE (Anonymous But Eager), I wasn't going to give her THAT many powers.... just something more along the lines of maybe half of them or so.... But as it isn't set in stone yet, I dunno.
Yes, I did finally realize what Deathdoesn't-matter was saying about my story not being easy to read. It took someone else to say the same thing in terms I can more easily understand to make me realize it, but that's beside the point. Oh, incase anyone was wondering what Ovni means, it's French for UFO...anyways, on to the chapter!
640 wandered through the thick underbrush of the Hawaiian rainforest, not really knowing where she was going. All she wanted to do was put as much distance as possible between her and Gantu's ship. As she didn't know where anything was or who anyone was, she couldn't teleport like some of her cousins. All this time she was as silent as a shadow, if not quieter. A twig snapped behind her, sending her into a bolt and startling her. She burst through the underbrush to find Kokaua Town, Hawaii.
Lilo (without the illusion) walked around the town, humming an Elvis song to herself. It had been several days since she had been turned into an experiment and she still didn't know what kind of powers she had. She thought about trying to find out, but decided against it as, according to Jumba and Stitch, she could have a power she couldn't control. A gray fox came barreling out of the bushes, running into her and knocking her over.
"Sorry." The fox said as Lilo got up. "Something back there scared me and....Wait, are you one of Jumba's experiments?" it asked.
"Ummm, technically I'm just an experiment who used to be human. How do you know Jumba?" Lilo asked, getting up and rubbing her head.
"Hamsterveil kept going on and on about how he 'stole' the experiments he paid for. And he kept calling me 640. Are there really that many like me?" the gray fox asked, also a bit dazed from the collision.
"Last time I checked, not counting me, there are 643 cousins." Lilo said. "But knowing Jumba, he's probably started on some more by now." She added as an afterthought, grinning slightly.
"Cousins?" 640 asked, confused. She had never heard anyone refer to experiments as cousins.
"Yeah. We're all one big ohana." Lilo said. "Speaking of which, I have to get back to the house. Jumba promised he'd help me figure out what my powers are." She said, turning around. "Oh, you might want to come. Gantu isn't too happy after the last couple of losses I think."
At that moment, halfway across the island in Gantu's ship, there was indeed some great discomfort going on. Gantu enraged that yet another experiment had escaped him, and worse escaped Hamsterveil's training camp, was giving his blaster a good workout. Anything and everything that wasn't needed for communicating with Hamsterveil, teleporting experiments, or watching TV was a target. 625 and 635 took cover behind one of 635's force fields, all the while watching the semi-overly dramatic devastation.
"NO, not cheesy!" 625 practically screamed when Gantu shot the cheese sandwich left on the kitchen counter, destroying it and half the crates of bread next to it. "How could you? You killed an innocent life!" he sobbed, also being a bit melodramatic.
"There there. 633 owes you five year's worth of bread. There'll be more sandwiches." 635 said, acting unusual for an experiment that was supposed to be pure evil. "Besides, after he finishes, you can always laser his patookie."
"Oh yeah! Wait, why the heck are you acting nice? Did you get hit too hard in the last fight?" 625 asked suspiciously. "Normally you would gloat and help."
"Well, I did get hit pretty hard by that rock.... guess I'll have to see the little gerbil doctor later."
Well, there's chapter 14...not a whole lot, but better in the paragraphs department, right? Anyways, I'll need some suggestions for powers that Lilo might have, as I'm kinda stumped. Anyways, please review!
