I'm back! I'm really glad that so many ppl liked this story, and thanks for reviewing *waves*Well here's the third chapta....where it all get's interesting.......
Chapter 3/ Exploring the island
Kai clenched his beyblade tightly in his fist, and opened his eyes for
the second time. Everything was still there. The castle, the small strip
of jungle, and hours, maybe even days of ocean.
"This is not good."Kai muttured to himself (who else can he speak to)
::Kai's POV::
Even in broad daylight, the castle looked haunted. What??? I don't
believe in ghosts.
I decided to start walking. I could hear some sort of goats or sheep
in the small jungle, to the right of me.And to the left of me stretched
the gigantic castle walls.I didn't know where to go first.Maybe I
should get some food and then head down to the castle.
It seemed like a good idea. So I walked down pretty fast.It wasn't a
thick jungle, I could walk through easily. I froze dead in my tracks as
something moved beside me, but I laughed when i realizer it was
only a baby lamb.I laughed?
I felt so free here. I could express any feeling, and no one would
ever know. So I continued to laugh. Suddenly my hand lifted up in the
air, and I screamed so loud:
"FREEEDOM!!"
I had no idea what made me scream. But somehow it seemed right.
All my anger, hate and everything bad came out of me. I was free.
I found some fruits and he picked them up. It seemed fine for
now.I was about to head back to the castle, when i tripped and spilled
everything everywhere. I was going to probably destroy the ground, if
it wasn't for the item inside.A medium-sized, oval pendant, with a
silver rim lay in front of him. I bent down to pick it up, and examined
it. When I toutched the pendant, it felt cold. So cold, I could once
again feel the alone. It was pure blue, with dark purple flames
swirling through it. The top of the silver rim was beautiful. On both
sides, large silver claws tightly gripped the pendant, and in between
them was the head of a dragon. It's jaw was tightly clenched,
revealing sharp jagged teeth. And those strange eyes made you gaze.
They were too the same colour as the pendant, dark blue.And in the
back of the dragon's head were two large chains which connected at
the top.
I thought it came from the castle. Then I could find loads of
beautiful pendants like this. I put it on my neck, as a result of a brave
warrior or something.
::End::
So he headed to the castle. There was a bridge there, and then a large
gate that was open. It led to an enormour door, ten times the height of
Kai.The door was heavy, but it opened easily. He slid into the dark
room. When he started walking, he tripped on something soft ( sorry
ppl, Kai will be falling a lot.) He managed to keep his balance up, and
no fruits spilled.
He bent down, and picked it up.It was a box. A match box.
Kai squinted into the darkness, ans was able to tell that tons of
torches were attached to the walls. He lit two of the, and using the
same match continued down the enormous guest hall. Now he could
clearly see the hall. Large colums (like the ones in rone, but grey and
plain) were on both sides. Doors were in between then.
"There must be hundreds!"Kai thought."Well since I am going to
spend my life here, I don't have to drop the food and try to run up to
each one."
Cowebs were attatched to the knight costumes under each colum.
Musky smell came from the stained red carpet. Kai was actually
going to have to clean it.Two marble staircases swirled from the end
of the hall.Kai walked closer and saw tons of doors! Of course, they
were all empty.
The canlelight flickered off a pair of sad green eyes.
**************************
Now, i still need a girls name. A really cool one. I've decided to space between sentences, sinse there isn't going to be much talking.(unless Kai talks to himself)And whatever you're thinking is going to happen in the story, cross it out, because its wrong.Thanks a lot for reading and please send in an idea of a name with your review. Please...
Chapter 3/ Exploring the island
Kai clenched his beyblade tightly in his fist, and opened his eyes for
the second time. Everything was still there. The castle, the small strip
of jungle, and hours, maybe even days of ocean.
"This is not good."Kai muttured to himself (who else can he speak to)
::Kai's POV::
Even in broad daylight, the castle looked haunted. What??? I don't
believe in ghosts.
I decided to start walking. I could hear some sort of goats or sheep
in the small jungle, to the right of me.And to the left of me stretched
the gigantic castle walls.I didn't know where to go first.Maybe I
should get some food and then head down to the castle.
It seemed like a good idea. So I walked down pretty fast.It wasn't a
thick jungle, I could walk through easily. I froze dead in my tracks as
something moved beside me, but I laughed when i realizer it was
only a baby lamb.I laughed?
I felt so free here. I could express any feeling, and no one would
ever know. So I continued to laugh. Suddenly my hand lifted up in the
air, and I screamed so loud:
"FREEEDOM!!"
I had no idea what made me scream. But somehow it seemed right.
All my anger, hate and everything bad came out of me. I was free.
I found some fruits and he picked them up. It seemed fine for
now.I was about to head back to the castle, when i tripped and spilled
everything everywhere. I was going to probably destroy the ground, if
it wasn't for the item inside.A medium-sized, oval pendant, with a
silver rim lay in front of him. I bent down to pick it up, and examined
it. When I toutched the pendant, it felt cold. So cold, I could once
again feel the alone. It was pure blue, with dark purple flames
swirling through it. The top of the silver rim was beautiful. On both
sides, large silver claws tightly gripped the pendant, and in between
them was the head of a dragon. It's jaw was tightly clenched,
revealing sharp jagged teeth. And those strange eyes made you gaze.
They were too the same colour as the pendant, dark blue.And in the
back of the dragon's head were two large chains which connected at
the top.
I thought it came from the castle. Then I could find loads of
beautiful pendants like this. I put it on my neck, as a result of a brave
warrior or something.
::End::
So he headed to the castle. There was a bridge there, and then a large
gate that was open. It led to an enormour door, ten times the height of
Kai.The door was heavy, but it opened easily. He slid into the dark
room. When he started walking, he tripped on something soft ( sorry
ppl, Kai will be falling a lot.) He managed to keep his balance up, and
no fruits spilled.
He bent down, and picked it up.It was a box. A match box.
Kai squinted into the darkness, ans was able to tell that tons of
torches were attached to the walls. He lit two of the, and using the
same match continued down the enormous guest hall. Now he could
clearly see the hall. Large colums (like the ones in rone, but grey and
plain) were on both sides. Doors were in between then.
"There must be hundreds!"Kai thought."Well since I am going to
spend my life here, I don't have to drop the food and try to run up to
each one."
Cowebs were attatched to the knight costumes under each colum.
Musky smell came from the stained red carpet. Kai was actually
going to have to clean it.Two marble staircases swirled from the end
of the hall.Kai walked closer and saw tons of doors! Of course, they
were all empty.
The canlelight flickered off a pair of sad green eyes.
**************************
Now, i still need a girls name. A really cool one. I've decided to space between sentences, sinse there isn't going to be much talking.(unless Kai talks to himself)And whatever you're thinking is going to happen in the story, cross it out, because its wrong.Thanks a lot for reading and please send in an idea of a name with your review. Please...