THIS IS IMPORTANT!!!
So now we're down to five names...Here are the results so far.
Name Number of votes
Tori 1
Trinity 4(you're getting a lot of votes Amethyst)
Athena 1
Raynne 1
Sayiki 1
Sorry if your name wasn't chosen, but it wasn't my vote.Personally, I like Raynne and Trinity, but ya its up to you.You can still vote for a favourie, only if you didn't vote yet, otherwise go back to the normal reviewing, unless ofcourse you want to tell some people about the hard time I'm having on picking these names, and ask them to vote..*wink cough*If you can, then please do so, I need the final name fast.
Chapter 4/Kai's new bedroom
The marble staircases swarmed with dust when Kai's finger touched them.He slowly walked up the stairs, still holdong one torch to light up others.He chose the stairs on the left of him, as they seemed less deserted, and less...frightening.
Kai walked up to the second floor.Tons of bedroom doors faced him.The dark brown paint was slowly chipping away, leaving bare wood markings.
"Now that's free choice."Kai smirked.
He lit some torches as his hand was getting really tired from holding all that weight.He looked for the best door to be his bedroom.He did that for two reasons.One, so he will know which one was his, and two, the bedroom would be a little more new than the rest. He found a nice door with only a couple of scratches on it.He pulled open the handle.
At first the room was pitch black, but then he was able to see more clearer.He took the torch inside the room.The glittering flames lit everything around him.Kai smirked.
The room was actually beautiful.Even after years the silk matrasses were still there.The bed was about king size.It had had a green silk matrass and beautiful lion shaped legs.It was in the corner of the room. The window was in the middle.There was a desk right across the bed, and beside the desk was a large antique treasure chest. The first thing Kai did was light the candle lamp, and walked over to the chest.
It looked so majestic, and secretive surrounded by the items in the room.Kai picked open the lock with the quill he found on the desk and opened the treasure chest. Inside were books, clothes, materials,
quills ink, probably prized possesions of the person who lived here.But the item that most interested Kai was a diary, two of them.One had a leather cover and was tied with strings, while the other one looked brand new.It's as if Kai wasn't the first one on this island sinse hundreds of years.He opened the new looking diary and sat down on the bed.
March 13, 1986
"Whoa!1986! thats the year i was born."
(the year is probably 2000 in the story)
Kai began reading.
Dear Diary,
Today I was sent to live in this horrible place along with my husband.They never told us of what crime we commited.We decided to pick this bedroom, as it was the most beautiful one. My baby is restless, and i don't know how i'm going to give birth to the little girl.Jack says it will be alright, and he went looking for some food outside.He says we'll survive.I just hope he's right.
Dianne.
Kai flipped open to the next page.There were some blood stains on it.
March 14,1986
I can feel my death getting nearer, as our daughter is getting bigger inside me.I hope she will be alright.I decided to go looking around while Jack is trying to cook.On the right of our bedroom, down the hall there is a library.It is so large! I decided to spend some time reading the books there.Maybe i'll find a survival guide. The door across our room is a bathroom.Jack says we'll have to make a bathroom downstairs as there is soil there.I think Jack is right. Dianne.
Kai stopped reading and decided to explore himself.Maybe this diary will bring him back.Maybe this castle is just a castle. He headed for the library.
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If you're getting any ideas of what's going to happen next, don't tell anyone.Anyway you'll probably be wrong.Hope you liked the chapter, please review!(and vote if ya didn't)
~Jacky~
So now we're down to five names...Here are the results so far.
Name Number of votes
Tori 1
Trinity 4(you're getting a lot of votes Amethyst)
Athena 1
Raynne 1
Sayiki 1
Sorry if your name wasn't chosen, but it wasn't my vote.Personally, I like Raynne and Trinity, but ya its up to you.You can still vote for a favourie, only if you didn't vote yet, otherwise go back to the normal reviewing, unless ofcourse you want to tell some people about the hard time I'm having on picking these names, and ask them to vote..*wink cough*If you can, then please do so, I need the final name fast.
Chapter 4/Kai's new bedroom
The marble staircases swarmed with dust when Kai's finger touched them.He slowly walked up the stairs, still holdong one torch to light up others.He chose the stairs on the left of him, as they seemed less deserted, and less...frightening.
Kai walked up to the second floor.Tons of bedroom doors faced him.The dark brown paint was slowly chipping away, leaving bare wood markings.
"Now that's free choice."Kai smirked.
He lit some torches as his hand was getting really tired from holding all that weight.He looked for the best door to be his bedroom.He did that for two reasons.One, so he will know which one was his, and two, the bedroom would be a little more new than the rest. He found a nice door with only a couple of scratches on it.He pulled open the handle.
At first the room was pitch black, but then he was able to see more clearer.He took the torch inside the room.The glittering flames lit everything around him.Kai smirked.
The room was actually beautiful.Even after years the silk matrasses were still there.The bed was about king size.It had had a green silk matrass and beautiful lion shaped legs.It was in the corner of the room. The window was in the middle.There was a desk right across the bed, and beside the desk was a large antique treasure chest. The first thing Kai did was light the candle lamp, and walked over to the chest.
It looked so majestic, and secretive surrounded by the items in the room.Kai picked open the lock with the quill he found on the desk and opened the treasure chest. Inside were books, clothes, materials,
quills ink, probably prized possesions of the person who lived here.But the item that most interested Kai was a diary, two of them.One had a leather cover and was tied with strings, while the other one looked brand new.It's as if Kai wasn't the first one on this island sinse hundreds of years.He opened the new looking diary and sat down on the bed.
March 13, 1986
"Whoa!1986! thats the year i was born."
(the year is probably 2000 in the story)
Kai began reading.
Dear Diary,
Today I was sent to live in this horrible place along with my husband.They never told us of what crime we commited.We decided to pick this bedroom, as it was the most beautiful one. My baby is restless, and i don't know how i'm going to give birth to the little girl.Jack says it will be alright, and he went looking for some food outside.He says we'll survive.I just hope he's right.
Dianne.
Kai flipped open to the next page.There were some blood stains on it.
March 14,1986
I can feel my death getting nearer, as our daughter is getting bigger inside me.I hope she will be alright.I decided to go looking around while Jack is trying to cook.On the right of our bedroom, down the hall there is a library.It is so large! I decided to spend some time reading the books there.Maybe i'll find a survival guide. The door across our room is a bathroom.Jack says we'll have to make a bathroom downstairs as there is soil there.I think Jack is right. Dianne.
Kai stopped reading and decided to explore himself.Maybe this diary will bring him back.Maybe this castle is just a castle. He headed for the library.
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If you're getting any ideas of what's going to happen next, don't tell anyone.Anyway you'll probably be wrong.Hope you liked the chapter, please review!(and vote if ya didn't)
~Jacky~