Holy!!!I haven't updated for.....god knows how long! I hope you people out there have hearts, do you?Anyway, as some of you said my story has a very weird plot, and I do agree on that one, but I guess stories these days are all based on how Ray and Kai fall in love or something along those lines. (no offence to ppl who don't write those stories) And I'm fine with flamers, just as long as they have SOME point to them.
And from what I counted Raynne won, and I was going to pick that name as well, but I guess my votes aren't needed anymore.Plus Trinity sounds a bit too high-tech for this story, don't ya think?
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We can't wait longer!!
Kai was awakened by the horrible nightmare, not remembereing the events
of the previous night.He sat up in the bed and emedietly remembered
everything.He couldn't imagine just about HOW crazy his life was going to
get.He looked around his room, to find Blaze missing.He didn't know what
chance he had at finding a rabbit in a huge castle like this one.
He walked outside for a bit of fresh air and peacefully stared out into the
endless ocean.Then he realized just how much he hated the ocean.He hated
it, because it brought him into a dead-end, for his life.
"Grrrrrrrrrraaaaaaahhhh!!!!!"Kai kicked the rock at the ocean with all his
might.He channeled his anger away from him and to the ocean.
"I HATE YOU!!!I hate you!!"He souted a couple of times kicking rocks at
the ocean, but in a couple of minutes collapsed on the sand.
::Kai's POV::
How could I be reduced so low?Cursing water?What is wrong with me?I
guess that man did have a point, at this rate I'll lose my mind!I can't let that
happen, I have be the Kai I used to be.Otherwise I'll forget everything, I'll
become an.....animal.
::End::
"No more."He said ceratainly.
Kai stuck his hand in his pocket and pulled out Dranzer.He looked deep into
the bit, mezmorized by its beauty.
"Dranzer, I'm back!"
All day, Kai worked endlessly carving a beyblade dish out of the huge old
tree that broke quite a while ago.Handling the axe was quite hard, and Kai
had to put the axe down every five minutes.Even though he was strong, the
axe always seemed to weigh MORE than him.
"How the heck did they handle these?They didn't have workout centeres, did
they?"
At last he made a decent bowl inside and began polishing the dish, using the
rough material he found in his room.It really was as hard as sandpaper.
By seven oclock in the evening Kai was finished.The sun was just beginning
to dip beyond the horizon, and Kai stood there, watching it.
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"I'm worried."Ray spoke out loud, not meaning to.
"About what?"Tyson asked.
"Huh?"Ray looked at Tyson still not realizing anything.
"You said you were worried remember?What are you worried about?"Tyson
ripped open a bag of chips, stuffing his face in it.
"Kai."Ray spoke after some silence.
"Kai?"Tyson looked up from his bag, suprised.
"What Kenny said before made a lot of sence. Why would Kai kill some one,
let alone shread them to pieces!!"Ray answered.
"Ray's deffinitely right. Just because Kai hides his feelings so well doesn't
mean he would actually forget about one of us, and even if so, we aren't like
that, are we?"Max stood up.
"But didn't you see how nervous Kai was when he was watching that show
about the murder?It's like he was trying to hide something!"Tyson continued
to stall.
"Believe what you want but I'm with Ray, and we're deffinitely gonna have to
do something about this."Max barged in.
"Go ahead, I ain't stopping ya."Tyson turned away, and once again was
mezmorized by the television.
"Let's go to that police station."Ray pointed at the door.
"Yes, let's do that.......um....one problem."Max started.
"What's that?"
"We don't know which police station he was taken to, and there are millions
of them here, we'll never find them!"Max finished.
"Well luckily, those thugs from the police are a bit careless with their
supplies." Kenny smiled, as he held up a bussiness card.
"Well you got a good eye then!"Max exclaimed.
"Where is this police station?"Ray asked.
"It's called Rexdale Police Station, 1110 Broadmoor rd.E"Kenny smiled.
"Well what are we waiting for?"Max asked.
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"1118,1116,1114,1112...there! Rexdale Police Station!"Kenny pointed at the
gloomy building where Kai was taken to.
"Oh gosh, Kai was taken there???It looks like a..."Max began.
"I guess so, let's go in we have to find Kai."Ray cut him off as he already
began walking towards the building.
Inside the fraction of the bladebreakers had two choices of people to go to,
a grumpy, tough-looking policeman, or a pretty blonde policewoman, and
I'm guessing you know where they chose to go to.
"Hi, may I help you boys?"She asked as Ray walked up.
"We're looking for our friend Kai. He was accused of murder and taken here,
but we're certain he wouldn't do anything like that."Ray began.
"Oh I see, but you never know, people do change."She explained.
"Trust us, we've had experience, and we're sure Kai won't do such a
thing."Kenny broke in.
"You speak of a boy named Kai, was he not the one accused of that horrible
murder with the little five-year-old girl?"She asked curiously.
"He was accused, and that doesn't mean he actually did anything."Ray said
with concern.
"Well I'm not the one you should be talking to, I wasn't one of the people
who arrested him.But I guess I can get you to talk to the boss. He knows
everything around here.Just wait a moment."She began to dial her
officephone, and Ray could hear only parts of her conversation."This is
Kelsey, we have a few visitors who are here to see a friend of theirs, that boy
Kai.They say he didn't do it.....what?Oh of course, but they're asking if they
could speak to you.....yes.yes, I'll tell them.....alright boss, thankyou."And
she hung up.
"He will see you in a few minutes.Please follow me."She stepped out of her
office, and lead the boys down a dark corridor.
Everything in it was dimly lit, and pure black.They followed the lady in
silence not knowing whether there will be anything to look at.She stopped
suddenly, and pulled out a large ring of keys.She shuffled through them,
quietly humming to herself and then stuck one into the door.
"Are we going to Kai's cell?"Max asked suddenly.
"No, you're going to talk to the boss."
"Is Kai even here?"Ray asked suspiciously.
Kelsey ignored him.She opened the door, and the inside of the room seemed
even darker than the hall.She motioned for them to step inside, and pulled a
pretty large switch which ligted up the whole room.Now the bladebreakers
could see everything.The room seemed endlessly white.White floor,white
ceiling,while walls, and white furniture which was barely visible through all the
white.
"Please have a seat, the boss will be here in a minute."And she left without
another word.
"And where are the seats?I can't see anything its too light in here!"Max said,
feeeling around for a couch of a chair.
Ray alreaday sat down in a chair, his back facing the door they came
through.Max and kenny silently joined him.
"See that door over there, I bet he'll come out from there."Ray said.
"What door?"Maxasked squinting his eyes to see some sort of a door.
Then it opened, and a large man wearing black from head to toe came in.He
sat down in the chair opposing the boys, and spoke in a deep voice.
"So I'm guessing you're Kai's 'best friends'.."He began.
"Where is he?We won't leave until we see Kai!"Ray growled not holding
back the anger.
"Then you might as well prepare your self because then you'll be staying here
for a long time, your frien Kai is gone to a place almost like hell, "the island
of no return"."He chuckled as he left the boys in shock, not knowing what
awaited their dear friend....
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So what'dya think. My writing probably got suckier from not writing for so long, but I'll try to update more ofthen id possible.It's kinda hard to write when I have to anime comic books to draw (one for school) as well as a pile of homework, but I managed to put in some time for writing...Oh well see ya in the next chapter!
And from what I counted Raynne won, and I was going to pick that name as well, but I guess my votes aren't needed anymore.Plus Trinity sounds a bit too high-tech for this story, don't ya think?
***************
We can't wait longer!!
Kai was awakened by the horrible nightmare, not remembereing the events
of the previous night.He sat up in the bed and emedietly remembered
everything.He couldn't imagine just about HOW crazy his life was going to
get.He looked around his room, to find Blaze missing.He didn't know what
chance he had at finding a rabbit in a huge castle like this one.
He walked outside for a bit of fresh air and peacefully stared out into the
endless ocean.Then he realized just how much he hated the ocean.He hated
it, because it brought him into a dead-end, for his life.
"Grrrrrrrrrraaaaaaahhhh!!!!!"Kai kicked the rock at the ocean with all his
might.He channeled his anger away from him and to the ocean.
"I HATE YOU!!!I hate you!!"He souted a couple of times kicking rocks at
the ocean, but in a couple of minutes collapsed on the sand.
::Kai's POV::
How could I be reduced so low?Cursing water?What is wrong with me?I
guess that man did have a point, at this rate I'll lose my mind!I can't let that
happen, I have be the Kai I used to be.Otherwise I'll forget everything, I'll
become an.....animal.
::End::
"No more."He said ceratainly.
Kai stuck his hand in his pocket and pulled out Dranzer.He looked deep into
the bit, mezmorized by its beauty.
"Dranzer, I'm back!"
All day, Kai worked endlessly carving a beyblade dish out of the huge old
tree that broke quite a while ago.Handling the axe was quite hard, and Kai
had to put the axe down every five minutes.Even though he was strong, the
axe always seemed to weigh MORE than him.
"How the heck did they handle these?They didn't have workout centeres, did
they?"
At last he made a decent bowl inside and began polishing the dish, using the
rough material he found in his room.It really was as hard as sandpaper.
By seven oclock in the evening Kai was finished.The sun was just beginning
to dip beyond the horizon, and Kai stood there, watching it.
***********
"I'm worried."Ray spoke out loud, not meaning to.
"About what?"Tyson asked.
"Huh?"Ray looked at Tyson still not realizing anything.
"You said you were worried remember?What are you worried about?"Tyson
ripped open a bag of chips, stuffing his face in it.
"Kai."Ray spoke after some silence.
"Kai?"Tyson looked up from his bag, suprised.
"What Kenny said before made a lot of sence. Why would Kai kill some one,
let alone shread them to pieces!!"Ray answered.
"Ray's deffinitely right. Just because Kai hides his feelings so well doesn't
mean he would actually forget about one of us, and even if so, we aren't like
that, are we?"Max stood up.
"But didn't you see how nervous Kai was when he was watching that show
about the murder?It's like he was trying to hide something!"Tyson continued
to stall.
"Believe what you want but I'm with Ray, and we're deffinitely gonna have to
do something about this."Max barged in.
"Go ahead, I ain't stopping ya."Tyson turned away, and once again was
mezmorized by the television.
"Let's go to that police station."Ray pointed at the door.
"Yes, let's do that.......um....one problem."Max started.
"What's that?"
"We don't know which police station he was taken to, and there are millions
of them here, we'll never find them!"Max finished.
"Well luckily, those thugs from the police are a bit careless with their
supplies." Kenny smiled, as he held up a bussiness card.
"Well you got a good eye then!"Max exclaimed.
"Where is this police station?"Ray asked.
"It's called Rexdale Police Station, 1110 Broadmoor rd.E"Kenny smiled.
"Well what are we waiting for?"Max asked.
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"1118,1116,1114,1112...there! Rexdale Police Station!"Kenny pointed at the
gloomy building where Kai was taken to.
"Oh gosh, Kai was taken there???It looks like a..."Max began.
"I guess so, let's go in we have to find Kai."Ray cut him off as he already
began walking towards the building.
Inside the fraction of the bladebreakers had two choices of people to go to,
a grumpy, tough-looking policeman, or a pretty blonde policewoman, and
I'm guessing you know where they chose to go to.
"Hi, may I help you boys?"She asked as Ray walked up.
"We're looking for our friend Kai. He was accused of murder and taken here,
but we're certain he wouldn't do anything like that."Ray began.
"Oh I see, but you never know, people do change."She explained.
"Trust us, we've had experience, and we're sure Kai won't do such a
thing."Kenny broke in.
"You speak of a boy named Kai, was he not the one accused of that horrible
murder with the little five-year-old girl?"She asked curiously.
"He was accused, and that doesn't mean he actually did anything."Ray said
with concern.
"Well I'm not the one you should be talking to, I wasn't one of the people
who arrested him.But I guess I can get you to talk to the boss. He knows
everything around here.Just wait a moment."She began to dial her
officephone, and Ray could hear only parts of her conversation."This is
Kelsey, we have a few visitors who are here to see a friend of theirs, that boy
Kai.They say he didn't do it.....what?Oh of course, but they're asking if they
could speak to you.....yes.yes, I'll tell them.....alright boss, thankyou."And
she hung up.
"He will see you in a few minutes.Please follow me."She stepped out of her
office, and lead the boys down a dark corridor.
Everything in it was dimly lit, and pure black.They followed the lady in
silence not knowing whether there will be anything to look at.She stopped
suddenly, and pulled out a large ring of keys.She shuffled through them,
quietly humming to herself and then stuck one into the door.
"Are we going to Kai's cell?"Max asked suddenly.
"No, you're going to talk to the boss."
"Is Kai even here?"Ray asked suspiciously.
Kelsey ignored him.She opened the door, and the inside of the room seemed
even darker than the hall.She motioned for them to step inside, and pulled a
pretty large switch which ligted up the whole room.Now the bladebreakers
could see everything.The room seemed endlessly white.White floor,white
ceiling,while walls, and white furniture which was barely visible through all the
white.
"Please have a seat, the boss will be here in a minute."And she left without
another word.
"And where are the seats?I can't see anything its too light in here!"Max said,
feeeling around for a couch of a chair.
Ray alreaday sat down in a chair, his back facing the door they came
through.Max and kenny silently joined him.
"See that door over there, I bet he'll come out from there."Ray said.
"What door?"Maxasked squinting his eyes to see some sort of a door.
Then it opened, and a large man wearing black from head to toe came in.He
sat down in the chair opposing the boys, and spoke in a deep voice.
"So I'm guessing you're Kai's 'best friends'.."He began.
"Where is he?We won't leave until we see Kai!"Ray growled not holding
back the anger.
"Then you might as well prepare your self because then you'll be staying here
for a long time, your frien Kai is gone to a place almost like hell, "the island
of no return"."He chuckled as he left the boys in shock, not knowing what
awaited their dear friend....
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So what'dya think. My writing probably got suckier from not writing for so long, but I'll try to update more ofthen id possible.It's kinda hard to write when I have to anime comic books to draw (one for school) as well as a pile of homework, but I managed to put in some time for writing...Oh well see ya in the next chapter!