Hey, I realized that I my last chapter I wrote that James was a keeper, but
he was a chaser or was he a seeker I am just totally confused here? Anyway,
I'll try and find out what he is for the next chapter.
Chapter 4
"Lily! Over here," Rachael yelled pulling Lily into a seat between her and Beth.
It had been raining when they got out of the coaches and Lily had been caught up in the crowd. She sat down and brushed he hair out of her face.
"God, it's like a bloody stampede out there." She said grumpily, "I'm starving, where's the food?"
"We need to watch the sorting ceremony before we can start the feast." Beth said, nodding towards the long line of first years waiting to be sorted.
"Oh yeah, why is nothing going right for me??" Lily whined.
"You'll be fine once you've had something to eat." Beth said.
"Yeah, you better be happy once you've had some food because." Rachael began, but Professor McGonagall had started the sorting so she couldn't go on.
Meanwhile Sirius, James, Remus and Peter were sitting further down the table discussing James's "plan" to get Lily to go out with him.
"So?" James asked Sirius after telling him what he was going to do, "What do you think?"
Sirius clapped him on the back and said "Can I have your broomstick?"
"What?" James looked at him strangely.
"When Lily kills you, can I have your broom?"
"Lily is not going to kill him" Remus said "She is going to go out with him"
"Yeah, whatever," Sirius turned to James, " Prongs, face it mate, Lily's not going to go out with you, and there's piles of other girls who would kill to have just one date with you, so why don't you forget about Lily and find yourself another chick."
"Because I'm not like you Sirius, I used to be like you, one girl one week, another the next, but I dunno, what's the point?"
"I've been going out with Rachael for a month" Sirius said.
"Yeah, I suppose, but at least you've got the girl you like, the girl I like hates me."
James hung his head looking thoroughly depressed.
James and Sirius were probably the best looking boys in their year and up until 5th year they had both used this to get the things, and girls they wanted. But then James had fallen for Lily Evans, who was pretty and popular James's ideal girl, there was only one problem, Lily hated James.
She hated the way he teased people like Snape, and the way he acted as if he was the King of the world, someone everyone should try to be like. But recently she had found herself caring what James would think and looking forward to seeing him in class in the mornings and this is what made her hate him the most. She couldn't help it but she was slowly falling for him, and she thought the only way to stop herself from falling in love with him completely was to be even more horrible to him than she was before.
Lily thought that James only wanted to go out with her so he could and her name to his long list of girlfriends, but she was wrong. James really cared about Lily and since he had fallen for her in his 5th year, he hadn't even looked twice at any other girl. Although James really like Lily, he didn't know what to say to her and would always come out with something offending and she would just roll her eyes and walk away, but because I was they're final year of Hogwarts and James's last chance with Lily he was desperate. He would do anything to get her to go out with him.
Sirius looked at James's sad face and said, "Alright, I'll try to help, but I don't know how much good I'll be, I mean Rachael's kind of different from Lily isn't she?"
"Yeah, I know," James said "It's alright, just don't be so negative okay? Lily's going to fall head over heels in love with me this year, you wait and see"
Remus, Sirius and Peter all looked disbelieving.
James began to look depressed again. "This is our 7th year" He said desperately "Lily must have realized how much I care about her by now"
Sirius looked down the table at Lily and her friends,"Yeah, I'm sure she has" he lied.
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I was going to stop here, but it's not as long as I thought it was so I'll add some more.
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It was the end of the feast and Lily, Beth and Rachael were coming out of the great hall feeling very full and tired.
"I need sleeeep" Rachael moaned holding her stomach "I feel sick"
Beth laughed, "That's not surprising seeing as you ate three times as much as me and Lily did"
"That's what I like in a girl" Sirius said appearing and putting his arm around Rachael, "A nice healthy appetite."
"God, you sound like my mother!" Rachael said.
"Is that bad?"
"Erm. lets just say you could be worse"
Then she kissed him and ran off to join Lily and Beth.
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Okay, so the end bit was completely random, but I was trying to make it longer! So please review and tell me what you thought.
Chapter 4
"Lily! Over here," Rachael yelled pulling Lily into a seat between her and Beth.
It had been raining when they got out of the coaches and Lily had been caught up in the crowd. She sat down and brushed he hair out of her face.
"God, it's like a bloody stampede out there." She said grumpily, "I'm starving, where's the food?"
"We need to watch the sorting ceremony before we can start the feast." Beth said, nodding towards the long line of first years waiting to be sorted.
"Oh yeah, why is nothing going right for me??" Lily whined.
"You'll be fine once you've had something to eat." Beth said.
"Yeah, you better be happy once you've had some food because." Rachael began, but Professor McGonagall had started the sorting so she couldn't go on.
Meanwhile Sirius, James, Remus and Peter were sitting further down the table discussing James's "plan" to get Lily to go out with him.
"So?" James asked Sirius after telling him what he was going to do, "What do you think?"
Sirius clapped him on the back and said "Can I have your broomstick?"
"What?" James looked at him strangely.
"When Lily kills you, can I have your broom?"
"Lily is not going to kill him" Remus said "She is going to go out with him"
"Yeah, whatever," Sirius turned to James, " Prongs, face it mate, Lily's not going to go out with you, and there's piles of other girls who would kill to have just one date with you, so why don't you forget about Lily and find yourself another chick."
"Because I'm not like you Sirius, I used to be like you, one girl one week, another the next, but I dunno, what's the point?"
"I've been going out with Rachael for a month" Sirius said.
"Yeah, I suppose, but at least you've got the girl you like, the girl I like hates me."
James hung his head looking thoroughly depressed.
James and Sirius were probably the best looking boys in their year and up until 5th year they had both used this to get the things, and girls they wanted. But then James had fallen for Lily Evans, who was pretty and popular James's ideal girl, there was only one problem, Lily hated James.
She hated the way he teased people like Snape, and the way he acted as if he was the King of the world, someone everyone should try to be like. But recently she had found herself caring what James would think and looking forward to seeing him in class in the mornings and this is what made her hate him the most. She couldn't help it but she was slowly falling for him, and she thought the only way to stop herself from falling in love with him completely was to be even more horrible to him than she was before.
Lily thought that James only wanted to go out with her so he could and her name to his long list of girlfriends, but she was wrong. James really cared about Lily and since he had fallen for her in his 5th year, he hadn't even looked twice at any other girl. Although James really like Lily, he didn't know what to say to her and would always come out with something offending and she would just roll her eyes and walk away, but because I was they're final year of Hogwarts and James's last chance with Lily he was desperate. He would do anything to get her to go out with him.
Sirius looked at James's sad face and said, "Alright, I'll try to help, but I don't know how much good I'll be, I mean Rachael's kind of different from Lily isn't she?"
"Yeah, I know," James said "It's alright, just don't be so negative okay? Lily's going to fall head over heels in love with me this year, you wait and see"
Remus, Sirius and Peter all looked disbelieving.
James began to look depressed again. "This is our 7th year" He said desperately "Lily must have realized how much I care about her by now"
Sirius looked down the table at Lily and her friends,"Yeah, I'm sure she has" he lied.
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I was going to stop here, but it's not as long as I thought it was so I'll add some more.
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It was the end of the feast and Lily, Beth and Rachael were coming out of the great hall feeling very full and tired.
"I need sleeeep" Rachael moaned holding her stomach "I feel sick"
Beth laughed, "That's not surprising seeing as you ate three times as much as me and Lily did"
"That's what I like in a girl" Sirius said appearing and putting his arm around Rachael, "A nice healthy appetite."
"God, you sound like my mother!" Rachael said.
"Is that bad?"
"Erm. lets just say you could be worse"
Then she kissed him and ran off to join Lily and Beth.
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Okay, so the end bit was completely random, but I was trying to make it longer! So please review and tell me what you thought.