I Hope You Dance
J.E.A.R.K.Potter (Erin) Again thanks to my reviewers TearFromABlueRose raelyn Swishy Willow Wand magical duct tape angel crystalaniron14 ShOrTnSwEeT9013 Pantz J.E.A.R.K.Potter (Jackie)
I am going to do something rare, make part of the chapter in James's point of view. I'm in the mood of a good love story because I have been listening to Across The Stars all morning.
Chapter Five: Interrupted
James's point of view
I was so close, the closer I got the more I was intoxicated by her. Her eyes shut but I couldn't bear to shut mine. It would be almost shutting her out. With her flaming red hair and the eyes that were emerald with flakes of gold and brown that I loved so. I leaned in and the door opened.
Remus, Peter, and Sirius were at the doorway. "Prongs, Seedling (Lily's new marauder nickname) are you in here" Sirius whispered. Lily's eyes opened, and maybe I was just wishing, I thought I saw some disappointment.
Couldn't they have come at a worse time? I just wish they could have just waited another minute. But maybe it was best that Lily and I didn't kiss. I didn't know if she liked me after all. Still a guy can dream.
Lily's point of view
I shut my eyes as he leaned in. With his messy black hair that any sensible girl would want to run her hair though, and those all consuming eyes of his, he was amazing. Suddenly the door creaked open and some one entered.
I realized who it was when I heard Sirius voice, the other marauders. My eyes flew open. Part of me was disappointed and the other half was relieved because I didn't know if he liked me anyways.
James's point of view
"Yes we are here," I said with a sigh. "Is the dog in the sky?" Sirius asked using on of his weird sayings. "Yeah" I replied and I'm sure I sounded very excited about it. (A/N that was sarcasm, Jackie, or any other people like her) We left the cupboard and slowly retreated into the common room. A long night was soon coming to a close but Lily was the only one on my mind.
I went and sat down on my favorite couch. The rest of the boys went up stairs because they were smart and wanted to be somewhat alive in the morning. Lily who must have been as smart as me sat on the couch too.
As we sat there we talked about the prank. I moved closer to her as we were laughing. It ended with an awkward laugh from me. Tension again arouse in the room. And this time there was no interrupting friends. Our lips touch I snapped away just for a moment at the shock of it, and dove, so to speak, right back in. It was sweet and passionate and very mind blowing. Suddenly she pulled away.
Lily's point of view
Sirius had just said one of the strangest questions I think I will ever hear," Is the dog in the sky?" But James seemed to know what he was talking about. We walked to the common room and James sat on the couch I followed him. I don't know why I just wanted to be with him I guess.
We were laughing about tomorrow events of the pranks. He had moved closer to me but I didn't care. Awkward moments followed that and then we kissed. It was fantastic and I just don't know how to explain how it felt. But something inside me told to pull away because if I didn't my friendship would be destroyed; another voice said what if I don't just want friendship. I listened to the former and pulled away.
How do you like it? Do you like Lily's marauder nickname? Please review! This is my longest chapter yet!
J.E.A.R.K.Potter (Erin) Again thanks to my reviewers TearFromABlueRose raelyn Swishy Willow Wand magical duct tape angel crystalaniron14 ShOrTnSwEeT9013 Pantz J.E.A.R.K.Potter (Jackie)
I am going to do something rare, make part of the chapter in James's point of view. I'm in the mood of a good love story because I have been listening to Across The Stars all morning.
Chapter Five: Interrupted
James's point of view
I was so close, the closer I got the more I was intoxicated by her. Her eyes shut but I couldn't bear to shut mine. It would be almost shutting her out. With her flaming red hair and the eyes that were emerald with flakes of gold and brown that I loved so. I leaned in and the door opened.
Remus, Peter, and Sirius were at the doorway. "Prongs, Seedling (Lily's new marauder nickname) are you in here" Sirius whispered. Lily's eyes opened, and maybe I was just wishing, I thought I saw some disappointment.
Couldn't they have come at a worse time? I just wish they could have just waited another minute. But maybe it was best that Lily and I didn't kiss. I didn't know if she liked me after all. Still a guy can dream.
Lily's point of view
I shut my eyes as he leaned in. With his messy black hair that any sensible girl would want to run her hair though, and those all consuming eyes of his, he was amazing. Suddenly the door creaked open and some one entered.
I realized who it was when I heard Sirius voice, the other marauders. My eyes flew open. Part of me was disappointed and the other half was relieved because I didn't know if he liked me anyways.
James's point of view
"Yes we are here," I said with a sigh. "Is the dog in the sky?" Sirius asked using on of his weird sayings. "Yeah" I replied and I'm sure I sounded very excited about it. (A/N that was sarcasm, Jackie, or any other people like her) We left the cupboard and slowly retreated into the common room. A long night was soon coming to a close but Lily was the only one on my mind.
I went and sat down on my favorite couch. The rest of the boys went up stairs because they were smart and wanted to be somewhat alive in the morning. Lily who must have been as smart as me sat on the couch too.
As we sat there we talked about the prank. I moved closer to her as we were laughing. It ended with an awkward laugh from me. Tension again arouse in the room. And this time there was no interrupting friends. Our lips touch I snapped away just for a moment at the shock of it, and dove, so to speak, right back in. It was sweet and passionate and very mind blowing. Suddenly she pulled away.
Lily's point of view
Sirius had just said one of the strangest questions I think I will ever hear," Is the dog in the sky?" But James seemed to know what he was talking about. We walked to the common room and James sat on the couch I followed him. I don't know why I just wanted to be with him I guess.
We were laughing about tomorrow events of the pranks. He had moved closer to me but I didn't care. Awkward moments followed that and then we kissed. It was fantastic and I just don't know how to explain how it felt. But something inside me told to pull away because if I didn't my friendship would be destroyed; another voice said what if I don't just want friendship. I listened to the former and pulled away.
How do you like it? Do you like Lily's marauder nickname? Please review! This is my longest chapter yet!