okay.reviews.
GamaFox, I am flattered that you'd wanna see my art pics, and I'm trying to send them to you but right at the moment I am experiencing technical difficulties, so as soon as I have that problem fixed I will have those pics in your inbox for ya.
Zeheria, thanx for the suggestion, but most of my art is non transformers related and im not sure if they allow that.
Flamestrike0, I hate to disappoint you, but in case you haven't noticed I have not introduced any other Decepticons really in my story, so just hang tight and read the chap to discover the mystery bot. you might be surprised. also, if your life has no other meaning and you know all that is transformers could you plz tell me like a few of the episodes that come right before JetFire comes into the picture, that and the episodes around the whole starsaber/mini con thing? (you know, when they're searching for them?) I've kinda forgotten those few important details. if you could remember, that'd be great.
anywhoo- that said and done, on with the story!
Chapter 7
Captured
The tall figure stepped out of the shadows, taking a wing tip from his shoulder he held it out in front of him and it turned into a glowing red sword. "That mini con is mine!" The red bot lunged forward, thrusting his sword at Hot Shot.
"Hot Shot, look out!" Alexis screamed.
Back at the Autobot base:
"What's up with those mini cons?" Smokescreen pointed to the foursome who were waving excitedly, beckoning them to the computer screen.
"I don't know. Maybe you should see what they want." Red Alert barely looked up from the large something or other that he was always tinkering with.
"All right." Smokescreen sighed. "Hey, what are you guys so upset about?" He walked over to the mini cons.
"Bleeb bleep bleep blop!" Highwire pointed at the screen.
"Huh?" Smokescreen didn't understand the language but he understood the gesture. He shifted his gaze to the screen Highwire was pointing to. "Holy smokes!" He suddenly rose and called over to Red Alert. "Hot Shot and the kid's are under attack!"
"What?" Optimus questioned, as he had just entered the room. "Oh no." His optics studied the screen. "Let's move out pronto, men!" He commanded as they ran to the warp room, the mini cons in tow.
In the wooded location:
"Ugh!" Hot Shot fell to one knee and grasped his shoulder plating where the sword had deeply gouged it.
"Heh heh heh." The red bot chuckled insanely, smirking at his victory. "Give it up Autobot, you're not match for me.
Hot Shot rose to his feet, stumbling backwards into a tree. "Never! You'll never defeat me, Starscream!" He growled, determination in his voice.
"Hmph. You're pathetic." Starscream frowned, waving his sword point in his opponents face. "I shall end your useless life now!" He swung back to deliver a final blow.
"Nooo! Hot Shot!" The kids screamed together as they watched in horror as the sword came ever closer to its destination.
All of a sudden an energy blast came from out of nowhere, knocking the holder of the sword backwards.
(cue the transformers in disguise song. pan over to see Optimus kneeling, hands clasped together)
"Not today, Starscream." Optimus looked up, glaring at the Decepticon.
"Optimus!" Starscream stuttered backing up, right into Smokescreen, that is.
"Aww, leaving so soon? Where's your leader, Decepti-bum?" Smokescreen stopped the bot's way of escape.
Red Alert ran up to Hot Shot. "Hot Shot, are you okay?" He grabbed his comrade's arm, helping him up to his feet.
"Are you kidding? I'm barely functional, let alone okay." Hot Shot could barely talk and could not hold his own weight. He sunk down to the ground and Red propped him up.
"Hmm. You're right." Red Alert examined the yellow bot's shoulder joint. "He's cut through some vital wires. We have to get you back to the base. Further analyses will reveal exactly which wires are cut."
"Oh, I hope Hot Shot's going to be okay." Alexis fretted as their mini cons drove up to them.
Trice left the kids with his mini con friends and drove up to where Emrial still waited from where she had been dumped from the car. As she straddled the three-wheeler there was a loud crash in the woods behind her, and suddenly there was a large tank cannon directly behind her.
Both mini con and kid froze from fear. Emrial screamed as another Decepticon came up and grabbed her, holding her tightly in his hand. "Trice, help me!" She pounded her fists on the hard metal surface that surrounded her.
Optimus turned at the sound. "No!" He shouted.
I don't have to tell you what questions need to be answered next chapter, you can figure them out yourself. Plz review. I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
GamaFox, I am flattered that you'd wanna see my art pics, and I'm trying to send them to you but right at the moment I am experiencing technical difficulties, so as soon as I have that problem fixed I will have those pics in your inbox for ya.
Zeheria, thanx for the suggestion, but most of my art is non transformers related and im not sure if they allow that.
Flamestrike0, I hate to disappoint you, but in case you haven't noticed I have not introduced any other Decepticons really in my story, so just hang tight and read the chap to discover the mystery bot. you might be surprised. also, if your life has no other meaning and you know all that is transformers could you plz tell me like a few of the episodes that come right before JetFire comes into the picture, that and the episodes around the whole starsaber/mini con thing? (you know, when they're searching for them?) I've kinda forgotten those few important details. if you could remember, that'd be great.
anywhoo- that said and done, on with the story!
Chapter 7
Captured
The tall figure stepped out of the shadows, taking a wing tip from his shoulder he held it out in front of him and it turned into a glowing red sword. "That mini con is mine!" The red bot lunged forward, thrusting his sword at Hot Shot.
"Hot Shot, look out!" Alexis screamed.
Back at the Autobot base:
"What's up with those mini cons?" Smokescreen pointed to the foursome who were waving excitedly, beckoning them to the computer screen.
"I don't know. Maybe you should see what they want." Red Alert barely looked up from the large something or other that he was always tinkering with.
"All right." Smokescreen sighed. "Hey, what are you guys so upset about?" He walked over to the mini cons.
"Bleeb bleep bleep blop!" Highwire pointed at the screen.
"Huh?" Smokescreen didn't understand the language but he understood the gesture. He shifted his gaze to the screen Highwire was pointing to. "Holy smokes!" He suddenly rose and called over to Red Alert. "Hot Shot and the kid's are under attack!"
"What?" Optimus questioned, as he had just entered the room. "Oh no." His optics studied the screen. "Let's move out pronto, men!" He commanded as they ran to the warp room, the mini cons in tow.
In the wooded location:
"Ugh!" Hot Shot fell to one knee and grasped his shoulder plating where the sword had deeply gouged it.
"Heh heh heh." The red bot chuckled insanely, smirking at his victory. "Give it up Autobot, you're not match for me.
Hot Shot rose to his feet, stumbling backwards into a tree. "Never! You'll never defeat me, Starscream!" He growled, determination in his voice.
"Hmph. You're pathetic." Starscream frowned, waving his sword point in his opponents face. "I shall end your useless life now!" He swung back to deliver a final blow.
"Nooo! Hot Shot!" The kids screamed together as they watched in horror as the sword came ever closer to its destination.
All of a sudden an energy blast came from out of nowhere, knocking the holder of the sword backwards.
(cue the transformers in disguise song. pan over to see Optimus kneeling, hands clasped together)
"Not today, Starscream." Optimus looked up, glaring at the Decepticon.
"Optimus!" Starscream stuttered backing up, right into Smokescreen, that is.
"Aww, leaving so soon? Where's your leader, Decepti-bum?" Smokescreen stopped the bot's way of escape.
Red Alert ran up to Hot Shot. "Hot Shot, are you okay?" He grabbed his comrade's arm, helping him up to his feet.
"Are you kidding? I'm barely functional, let alone okay." Hot Shot could barely talk and could not hold his own weight. He sunk down to the ground and Red propped him up.
"Hmm. You're right." Red Alert examined the yellow bot's shoulder joint. "He's cut through some vital wires. We have to get you back to the base. Further analyses will reveal exactly which wires are cut."
"Oh, I hope Hot Shot's going to be okay." Alexis fretted as their mini cons drove up to them.
Trice left the kids with his mini con friends and drove up to where Emrial still waited from where she had been dumped from the car. As she straddled the three-wheeler there was a loud crash in the woods behind her, and suddenly there was a large tank cannon directly behind her.
Both mini con and kid froze from fear. Emrial screamed as another Decepticon came up and grabbed her, holding her tightly in his hand. "Trice, help me!" She pounded her fists on the hard metal surface that surrounded her.
Optimus turned at the sound. "No!" He shouted.
I don't have to tell you what questions need to be answered next chapter, you can figure them out yourself. Plz review. I hope you enjoyed this chapter.