Well, here's my response to the 100 word challenge at AI. Enjoy!
Ami, sitting on an armchair with a blanket, was reading Pride and Prejudice. She read that book for the hundredth time this week. Before finishing it, she put down the book and took off her reading glasses. She sat there for a while listening to the rain, trying to gather her thoughts, which were quickly interrupted by the phone.
"YOU STAY AWAY FROM HIM!! YOU HEAR ME?!" Shouted a very angry Amazonian warrior.
"Um, who is this?"
"Oh you know who this is, little missy!"
Ami then just heard a dial tone.
"Well, some people never learn manners." She scoffed.
Review questions:
1) Was there anything confusing?
2) Was this story exciting to read? Original?
3) Was I redundant? Informative?
The crossover was between Shampoo (Amazonian warrior) from Ranma and Ami from Sailor Moon. They were arguing about Ranma. Shampoo thinks Ami's in love with Ranma and tries to threaten her to stay away from him.
Disclaimer: Sailor Moon belongs to Naoko Takeuchi and Ranma belongs to Rumiko Takahashi. This story belongs to me.
Ami, sitting on an armchair with a blanket, was reading Pride and Prejudice. She read that book for the hundredth time this week. Before finishing it, she put down the book and took off her reading glasses. She sat there for a while listening to the rain, trying to gather her thoughts, which were quickly interrupted by the phone.
"YOU STAY AWAY FROM HIM!! YOU HEAR ME?!" Shouted a very angry Amazonian warrior.
"Um, who is this?"
"Oh you know who this is, little missy!"
Ami then just heard a dial tone.
"Well, some people never learn manners." She scoffed.
Review questions:
1) Was there anything confusing?
2) Was this story exciting to read? Original?
3) Was I redundant? Informative?
The crossover was between Shampoo (Amazonian warrior) from Ranma and Ami from Sailor Moon. They were arguing about Ranma. Shampoo thinks Ami's in love with Ranma and tries to threaten her to stay away from him.
Disclaimer: Sailor Moon belongs to Naoko Takeuchi and Ranma belongs to Rumiko Takahashi. This story belongs to me.
