A/N: I'm writing this now coz I'm off school sick (cough cough) and I would like to say thanks a lot for all your reviews... including the criticism ones, now I can learn from my mistakes.

Thanks to:

Lil Doro,

Queen Adreena,

Spicydonut185,

Lionheart1,

And I suppose Pisher.

Disclaimer: ON THE FIRST PAGE URGH

Chapter 3: Fate

Rinoa screamed and struggled to get away, but it was no use, and she couldn't use her magic, she hadn't learned to control it yet.

Rinoa could hear the men's boots pounding on the cold hard floor of Balamb as they ran away from Squall. She began to think.

Ugh why am I so not me, what's wrong with me?

She couldn't think straight (as you can imagine, it is hard to scream and struggle at the same time as thinking).

She could now see that they were outside of Balamb and onto the damp, wilting grass. The men came to a stop and She was roughly thrown into the boot of a car and they drove off.

Rinoa didn't know what to do, she was squashed and depressed, there were so many emotions rising up inside of her, her eyes began to sting with tears. Why was she being taken? What would these people want?

Rinoa pounded on the top of the roof, she was still in a state of shock, she wanted to be near him, Squall. She felt a tear slide down her smooth face.

He had just asked me the question of a fairytale, why did they have to come then, I was so happy, and now I don't know if I will ever see him again, I don't know if this fairytale will have a happy ending,

Tears Flooded her eyes and spilt out uncontrollably.

Why is he so... so out of character, that's why I've been so stressed, what could make him so upset?

Rinoa's train of thought was broken as she was abruptly pushed against the front of the boot. She could hear a car door opening and closing, then some footsteps and a key turning.

A crack of light spread as the boot was opened. A man gave her his hand to help her out. Rinoa took it apprehensively and stood up and attempted to slap him, but he grabbed her wrist and pulled her firmly away from the car.

Rinoa looked at the ground in despair

"Why are you doing this" She said and she tried to pull away, but the man just laughed at her attempt to escape.

She could feel something familiar was ahead of her.

I remember this ...

She felt a number of emotions wash over her, and as she looked up, her eyes widened when she saw what was to be her fate ...

A/N: I'm sorry that this is such a short chapter and that I am such a bad writer especially this chapter but the story line is good right ... right (cricket chirps) waaaaa (sniff sniff).

I will only update when I get a certain amount of reviews!

(friends walk in)

1st friend: hey pinky.

Me: hey what are you doing here.

"2nd friend: we just wanted to see you. Do you remember us.

1st friend: Seeing that you have been on here so long you probably don't .

Me: Uh... you ... are...

2nd friend: Urgh ... I'm Caitlin and this is Vicky (Points to 1st friend) we are YOUR BEST FRIENDS!

Me: oh yeah I remember you now!!!!

Caitlin: 'bout time. (flicks hair).

Mysterious girl walks in

Mysterious girl: yeah how could you forget US ... me, Courtney. We are the most fashionable people in school.

Me: nice try Courtney, but I don't like you now... you were mean to me and Caitlin and Vicky and then you went off with some other people, so don't try to come crawling back to us.

Ha ha!!!!!!