Raven46-hey, thanks for your review, you notice you were the only one? My
writing's been going downhill I know. I have no heart left in it, it seems.
I don't know what to do and can you guys tell? I don't want to leave the
story but I promised I would never stop in the middle of one. So let me
know.
Chapter 4
Hellfire had a quick lunch, not speaking to anyone and letting Jack handle everything. She paid for her meal and left briskly, not meeting anyone's eyes except Michael's. He didn't blink and his eyes gave nothing away.
She broke the stare and swept out the door walking at a quick pace to get to Brooklyn. Clouds covered the sky and the sun darkened. She passed over the Brooklyn Bridge and made her way to the lodging house.
Hellfire slipped in quietly, not wanting to make a scene with her appearance. No one saw her as she headed to Spot's room. She figured she'd check there first and then the docks. It was easier to go around unnoticed here, most of the newsies weren't back yet. Hellfire knew her way to Spot's room in the dark, she knew every corner of this area.
She paused for a second, thinking she heard noises coming from the direction she was headed. Maybe he was conferring with some other leaders. No, Jack was in Manhattan. She didn't doubt she heard the voices, not after she had heard the little whimpers of Blink earlier.
She got to Spot's room and opened the door quietly, so not to interrupt if something important was going on. Cautiously, she slipped through the opening into the room.
There was no doubt that she was interrupting something important....
A/n: I know this was like beyond short but I'll have another chapter in less than a week because I already have it typed. Please review if you want me to continue because it looks like no one likes my story and I think I haven't been putting all my heart into it, I just can't seem to get motivated, alright done now, please REVIEW.
Chapter 4
Hellfire had a quick lunch, not speaking to anyone and letting Jack handle everything. She paid for her meal and left briskly, not meeting anyone's eyes except Michael's. He didn't blink and his eyes gave nothing away.
She broke the stare and swept out the door walking at a quick pace to get to Brooklyn. Clouds covered the sky and the sun darkened. She passed over the Brooklyn Bridge and made her way to the lodging house.
Hellfire slipped in quietly, not wanting to make a scene with her appearance. No one saw her as she headed to Spot's room. She figured she'd check there first and then the docks. It was easier to go around unnoticed here, most of the newsies weren't back yet. Hellfire knew her way to Spot's room in the dark, she knew every corner of this area.
She paused for a second, thinking she heard noises coming from the direction she was headed. Maybe he was conferring with some other leaders. No, Jack was in Manhattan. She didn't doubt she heard the voices, not after she had heard the little whimpers of Blink earlier.
She got to Spot's room and opened the door quietly, so not to interrupt if something important was going on. Cautiously, she slipped through the opening into the room.
There was no doubt that she was interrupting something important....
A/n: I know this was like beyond short but I'll have another chapter in less than a week because I already have it typed. Please review if you want me to continue because it looks like no one likes my story and I think I haven't been putting all my heart into it, I just can't seem to get motivated, alright done now, please REVIEW.