The Lone Reed-You're good. I was wondering if anyone would think that. Well
I'll make this response short so you can see what's going to happen.
Sarah- It's one of the more interesting stories you've read lately? THIS IS NOT MEANT AS A DISS TO ANYONE'S STORY MERELY MY OWN!! Then there must not be very many good stories out there because mine is awful.
An undercover newsie- Well you can hope it gets better.
Chapter 5
Hellfire had no doubt she was interrupting something important. She was shocked and momentarily speechless. Though, she regained her tongue soon enough.
"YOU FUCKING BASTARD! YOU MOTHER FUCKING ASSHOLE! How dare you?!? How could you??" Her voice got extremely sarcastic. "Wait, I'm guessing it was pretty easy since it looks like you guys were having a good time. I could hear you in the hall."
"Spot, baby, who's this?" The petite, buxom blonde in the bed asked.
Hellfire answered for him. "She doesn't know Spot? Hmm why don't you tell her dat I was ya goil? Tell dat bitch dat ya told me ya loved me. Ya prolly told her dat she's wonderful, that you'll never leave her, that YOU LOVE HER."
Spot finally tried to redeem himself. "Well.ya don't know what ya talkin bout Hellfire. She umm She's not like that. Besides me an you, we jus aren't woikin out too well."
"She? Ya don't know her name but she's good enough to fuck? How could I eva have liked someone like you? You're a horrible evil bastard and I neva want ta see ya again." She didn't give him a second glance, not wanting to give him the satisfaction of seeing the beginnings of tears. Hellfire slammed the door so hard the room shook as she walked out. She used her rage to push away the tears until she could be alone.
One newsie made the mistake of trying to stop her. Without blinking, she slammed a fist into his face. "Leave me alone."
"Hellfire I'se sorry." The newsie straightened, a hand holding his bloody nose. "I didn't hear ya come in or I woulda-"
Hellfire cut him off. "Or what, all of youse woulda kept lying to me? how many?"
"Several." The newsie admitted grudgingly. He backed away nervously, not wanting to get hit again. "None of us wanted ta cross Spot."
"Of coise not. Heaven forbid you do something against da almighty Spot." She leaned in close and slowly said each word. "I don't give a damn." With that she didn't even give him another glance and just walked out the door.
A gusty wind tore at her clothing and hair. She walked a couple of streets and stopped. Hellfire sunk down against a wall and buried her head in her hands. Her eyes welled with tears and spilled over. She pulled her knees to her chest and her body shook with her sobs. Finally she ran out of tears.
A/n: I know short yea yea, but interesting was it not? Review please.
Sarah- It's one of the more interesting stories you've read lately? THIS IS NOT MEANT AS A DISS TO ANYONE'S STORY MERELY MY OWN!! Then there must not be very many good stories out there because mine is awful.
An undercover newsie- Well you can hope it gets better.
Chapter 5
Hellfire had no doubt she was interrupting something important. She was shocked and momentarily speechless. Though, she regained her tongue soon enough.
"YOU FUCKING BASTARD! YOU MOTHER FUCKING ASSHOLE! How dare you?!? How could you??" Her voice got extremely sarcastic. "Wait, I'm guessing it was pretty easy since it looks like you guys were having a good time. I could hear you in the hall."
"Spot, baby, who's this?" The petite, buxom blonde in the bed asked.
Hellfire answered for him. "She doesn't know Spot? Hmm why don't you tell her dat I was ya goil? Tell dat bitch dat ya told me ya loved me. Ya prolly told her dat she's wonderful, that you'll never leave her, that YOU LOVE HER."
Spot finally tried to redeem himself. "Well.ya don't know what ya talkin bout Hellfire. She umm She's not like that. Besides me an you, we jus aren't woikin out too well."
"She? Ya don't know her name but she's good enough to fuck? How could I eva have liked someone like you? You're a horrible evil bastard and I neva want ta see ya again." She didn't give him a second glance, not wanting to give him the satisfaction of seeing the beginnings of tears. Hellfire slammed the door so hard the room shook as she walked out. She used her rage to push away the tears until she could be alone.
One newsie made the mistake of trying to stop her. Without blinking, she slammed a fist into his face. "Leave me alone."
"Hellfire I'se sorry." The newsie straightened, a hand holding his bloody nose. "I didn't hear ya come in or I woulda-"
Hellfire cut him off. "Or what, all of youse woulda kept lying to me? how many?"
"Several." The newsie admitted grudgingly. He backed away nervously, not wanting to get hit again. "None of us wanted ta cross Spot."
"Of coise not. Heaven forbid you do something against da almighty Spot." She leaned in close and slowly said each word. "I don't give a damn." With that she didn't even give him another glance and just walked out the door.
A gusty wind tore at her clothing and hair. She walked a couple of streets and stopped. Hellfire sunk down against a wall and buried her head in her hands. Her eyes welled with tears and spilled over. She pulled her knees to her chest and her body shook with her sobs. Finally she ran out of tears.
A/n: I know short yea yea, but interesting was it not? Review please.
