um i got bored so i wrote the 5th chapter after the 4th. heh. so read and review.
Silently he stood up. "kagome. Why didn't I run? Why didn't I try to get you the second I found you?" he asked himself. "I'm stupid. That's why kagome. But I'm going to find you. And I'm going take you back with me before anyone can take you from me. I need you here your right. So I'm going to make it up to you."
His eyelash was heavy with tiny drops of tears. His heart beat fast. "don't worry or cry kagome." He sighed. "I'm going to find you." At that he broke into running. He panted farther into the forest he didn't hear any screaming or crying so he continued running faster and faster until he felt his lungs stung with air.
He stopped and sat on a rock. Panting quietly. He realized he did need kirara. But he wasn't about to go back like a sissy. He was going to be strong and find kagome.
"I'm going soft." He said realizing what he's been doing for days. "I've been getting too mushed up. I need kagome more than ever. She's the only person who could help me." He thought about this for a moment. "tomorrow is the new moon..." he realized again. "tomorrow is when kagome is always with me. The new moon." Lighten up! His conscience yelled at him. Kagome doesn't always have to be here! Just ignore the new moon! It's already dark see inuyasha? inuyasha thought for a moment.
He looked at his hair. Already becoming black with still a patch of silver at the side. He felt his heart crawl into his throat. Don't cry inuyasha. Don't cry please. A familiar voice said. It was kagome's voice. Kagome? He thought. Yes inuyasha please help me! I don't know where I am! I'm in this water tank or something but I can breathe. It answered him. He jumped. "who are you?!" he asked the air as if a person had entered his thoughts.
Inuyasha since the last hour I've been trying to reach you. Your thoughts. He scowled. Oh so now your miss Genie?
Lighten up! Kagome's voice urged. That's not the only time I've heard that! Inuyasha answered arrogantly.
Inuyasha you're a big boy now get up and run! I'm In naraku's castle but I don't know what room. I don't remember what happened. And inuyasha.
What?
I didn't forget about the new moon and I'm really sorry about it.
Inuyasha thought. She was in trouble going to be used or to die and she remembered the new moon. Inuyasha looked at his hair. The silver was completely gone now.
Run inuyasha! NARAKU IS COMING!! Kagome's voice urged again.
Inuyasha hesitated then started to run.
I'm coming kagome.
I know inuyasha.
He jumped forgetting kagome was in his mind. She would be in his mind both ways sometimes. All the time in his heart.
Ah how sweeeeet! Now review please. Whats wrong with this story? Is it not good? Well personally I think you all are idiots! Is all you want romance and other crappy erm.... Stuff?!?! Well then I have something to say. KISS MY BUTT.