Shout Outs!
Yes today I'm shouting out. Hehehe. Anyways.i havnet fugred out yet what
im goin to write. soo ya. I'm just goin off my head. So if this sounds horrible
I'm apologizing now. Sorry! Lol. Anyways also sorry for my spelling errors
and I know I can go back and do that.but im not feeling to good rightnow
and dont have hte energy to do it so im sorry ill be carefuly next chapy:)
Nosilla: hye ya.tahnks for reviewing.not quite sure. Lol um. Here's another chapter
so enjoy :). Thanks again.
Brookelyn: Yes I know. Poor ZigZag man I met this guy on Saturday that now that
I think about it. looks like Zig. In a way. Lol. Cept his hair ain't as wild
well wait maybe he didn't look like zig.eee i cnat remeber.it was a crazy night
and i havne seen zig in forever. Zig pops out of no where what I heard my name
Jack frowns get back into the woodwork now Ziggy
Zig frowns aww get an attitude adjustment
Jack raises a brow excuse me did you just say what I think you did?
Zig shrugs depends on what you think I said. If you think what I said is
what I said then yes I did just say what you think I said.
Jack raises a brow " shut up you paranoid freak
Spot rolls his eyes" I may be from newsies but even I ain't stupid
get a freakin room.
Jack narrows her eyes don't make me come over there fido.
Spot narrows his eyes back Watch it JacKIE GIRL!
Jack growls and pounces on spot
JD frowns mmmm what about me.
ZIG smirks I can just feel the love in the air.
Oberon ok that's it break it up break it up. Zig sit here and help me. Jd
I love you, JaCk, spot?
Jack and spot continue to fight
OB JACK! SPOT!
They both stop and looks at Oberon and say at the same time WHAT!
OB thank you. Now stop it.
Sorry guys.. back to shoutouts. argg.. Cant keep baby sit them all the time.
FIFI: lol .. ya.. Newsies are awsome i know I already talked to you about it
but this is my shoutout.man.why not lol. So blinks ya fav. ehh..lol
he has a big mouth man. Seriously when he sings. I swear he could prolly fit
his whole fist in there. But he sure is a cutey especially with that patch and i love
his outfit winks lol ok I'm done really.
Spot Take it back.
Jack crosses her arms smirking Truth hurt...
Zig frowns Jack don't be such a...
Barf sends zig a warning look stopping his words
Jack turns to face zig raising a brow yes zig? What was that?
Ob rolls eyes and goes back to shoutouts
DoubleD: lol yes-caveman twitch Stanley are all coming up. Chill chill lol
anw jk. But ya they are coming up. Just working too slowly at it.
Thanks though :) here's another chappy now that you mention it maybe ill add someone
again lol
Spot you dirty rotten scabba he charged jack
Jack takes his weight as she falls to the ground. Nice talk. Newsboy
but we don't talk like that. It's more like you dirty rotten bastard.
Spot growls oh making fun o' me are we. Jist cause I don't know me fatha. Nor me motha
Jack shrug eh.. Not like you're the only one.. It's just a figua of speech thank you very much. She said
rolling over on top of him putting her arm under his chin say uncle
Spot never.. He croaked thought the little air he had
x0xTrinityx0x: lol alright if you got ideas for characters go ahead and send them to me
lol id be happy to look it over and add them :). heheh. Thanks for the review.
Miracle: ya I know I'm nice lol. But hey why not.. Don't worry your characte's
gonna have more chappys obviously lol.. Anyways thanks for reviewing :)
zig groan alright thats it stop it you guys.
Barf nods yall gonna kill each other.
They walked over and after a short time of pulling finally pulled jack and spot apart
panting and shooting daggers at each other
IRISH RAIN: lol. Anyway.. Thanks for reviewing more on this story too again :)
heheheh. Here's another chapy.
OB turns around that s it y'all are goin in the closet...NOW!
Jd pouts what about me..
ob sighs not you just them...
The group frowns
spot but jack started it.
zig nods ya.. she did.
barf shrugs
jack smirks eh. Y'all are babies.
Ob shakes head no excuse get in there now
they all reluctantly go in the closet
SIGHS finally ok.sorry for that. Hopefully they will learn their lesson and
if not. They better keep my closet clean I'm not cleaning up after them
Grrrr. lol here's the story now
Jack was digging her hole. She was used to hard living. But she wasn't used to digging
all the time. She sighed and sat down tot take a break. She wiped the sweat off her
brow and made a face. She felt disgusting. Her hair was sticking to her and her shirt was starting
to get wet from sweat too. The only good thing is when those sparingly few breezes came by
having a damp shirt made the air cooler on your skin. She set her shovel aside and looked
down at her damaged blistered hand. She gently ran a thumb over her hurting palms and winced.
"It gets easier as it goes"
Jack looked up to see a kid with longish slightly curling brown hair and brown eyes.
When she didn't say anything he sat down next to her.
"Hi I'm Stanley, but everyone calls me caveman" he grinned.
Jack nods "hmm.. "
Stanley grins. "So what are you in for?"
Jack shrugs and stands back up picking her shovel up hoping he'd get the sign she
wanted him to leave so she could dig again. Obviously he didn't cause he still sat
there expecting her to answer.
"I have to dig."
Stanley nods and grins "alright go ahead. I'll stay out of your way"
jack nods "good" she started digging but soon stopped when she realized he hadn't
left yet. She sighed and stopped looking at him exasperated.
"Well don't you have a hole to dig?"
He just shook his head "naw. Zero helped me dig my hole today cause I'm so slow, so I'm done now"
Jack growled "well then don't you have somewhere to be?"
He grinned smugly and shook his head "nope.. Where is there to be here? We're at camp"
Jack sighed "Look here now.. Hairyman. I said I have to dig my hole. I didn't want to be
rude and tell ya to leave but you obviously can't get hints. So ill spell it out for ya.
Will you please leave now so I can dig my hole" she said the last part a little slower
as if he had a hard time of understanding.
Stanley frowned "it's caveman alright. And you don't gotta be so pushy ya should have just
said something "he said a hurt look on his face as he got up brushed himself off and headed
back over to zero.
Squid grins and winks at Zero "see man i tol' ya she was nuts"
Zig having seen the whole thing, rolls his eyes and looked back at jack as
she struggled trying to dig her hole. She had a particularly hard spot to dig at. Mr. sir, he's sure, gave it to her on purpose.
She did look cute like that though. He heard the sound of a vehicle and shielded his eyes against
the bright never-ending sun and saw the glint off the chrome of the water truck
"thank god. " Jack said as she got in line.
"Hey what do you think your doin chica? Your new so your spots at the end of the line" magnet
said pushing in front of her.
She shoved him out of line "Scuse me. First come first serves"
Magnet growls but X-ray put a hand up to him to stop him from saying or
doing anything "im sorry but we have rules and we have spots in line, no breaking them.
Newbies go in back because they aren't important. You have to earn your spot in line
then you can advance" X-ray nod.
Jack raises her brows crossing her arms "That's the most stupid immature piggish thing
i've ever heard."
The guys looked at her with a blank look on their face
jack smirks "what can understand the English language. Have I stumped your fragile
little minds with my semi big words' she rolls her eyes and goes to the back of the line
"the one who wins is the one brave enough to walk away"
x-ray frowns and got his water jug back filled. Armpit joined him, leaning over to him.
"Did she say we were immature?"
Armpit nods" I do believe she did why?"
"Hmm no reason. Just that.. I want to know what crawled up her a$$ and died"
"Why'd you forget to shower again armpit" barf said walking up catching the tail
end.
"Ha very funny, but we were talking about snapper"
"jack, what about jack?" zig asked walking up also to see what the
controversy is all about.
"I think she needs a freaking beatin man. She's got to learn to control
what she's saying and who she's saying it too. 'Fore someone lets her have it." X-Ray explained
barf nods, "True. I'd say if she keeps it up. She ain't gonna be around for long"
Zig frowns "hey you don't know her. So don't talk about her like that" he said and walked away
"WELL SOMEbody's cranky today "armpit said.
"Aww he jist like her that's all" x-ray said.
The boys laughed.
Alright here it is. How'd it go? Was it ok? well thanks heheh bye