Shoutouts:

Sweet A.K.: hey thanks for reviewing. Sorry about the spelling. Some of it is suppose to be like that and some of it s not.. so im sorry. Yes I know I have to proffread im working on it lol.  Its my own fault though :)

Nosilla: lol arlight tis is a good word. Man.. early english :) lol ttyl

x0xTrinityx0x: lol yes barfbag is hot. Lol I think they should have had him in the movie longer then 5 minutes *nods *  lol. 

Irish rain: lol sorry but I didn't understand what you said I got confused lol.  :)  anyways. Heres some  more:)

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     "Jacqueline Rose!  Come here now" Said a demanding voice.

The little girl made her way to the kitchen.

    

     "Yes dad?" she smiled her blond pigtails framing her face making her look angelic except for the shallowness of her pale skin caused by not being able to go out of the house and lack of nutrition.

Roger McCool turned to look at his 6 year old daughter, his face thunderous. 

     "Did you drink the last of the milk?"

Jacks eyes widened at her fathers change in mood, not more then ten minutes ago he was praising her for the "A" she got in English.  She was one of the smartest kids in the class.

     "Yes, I got thirsty"

Roger struck her hard across the face. 

     "Fucking dumbass kid.  Don't you know to say something when we were at the store the other day.  So we would have milk"

Jacqueline held her hand to her red cheek.  She felt something drip from her nose.  She wiped at it and saw the dark red stain the pale skin of her hand.

     "I...I'm sorry dad.  I didn't know" she whispered through the lump in her throat.

     "That's the problem.  You never know.  God dammit, why was I cursed with three good for nothing stupid ass kids."  Roger cursed.

     "mm..my teacher says its you're their own fault that people have kids"

     "Why you smart mouth little bitcH" he spat out and struck her again.  Sending her sprawling to the ground.  Her head hit the corner of the table sharply and she blacked out.*

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 Jack woke up quickly in a cold sweat and breathing hard.

     "Jack you ok?"

Jack looked around blinking trying to focus through the midnight darkness.  Finally her eyes fixed on star's face but star could see jacks eyes were still wild looking.  Star reached a hand out to touch Jacks shoulder and saw her flinch away.

     "Jack, It's me,  Star"  She whispered.

Jack looked at the other beds seeing the girls were still sleeping soundly.

     "jack?  Please talk to me" 

     "I'm fine." Jack finally said and returned her gaze to Star.  Jacks eyes were back to normal.  "what are you doing up?"  Her voice was surprisingly steady.

     "I couldn't sleep any more and then I saw you thrashing around.  What was it? Were you having a bad dream?"  Star asked concerned.

Jack shook her head and moved away from star. "Nothing, just a  fitful sleep is all"

Star sighed.  "jack are you mad at me?"

Jacked looked back over at star and saw the shimmering of tears brimming at her eyes.  "No"

     "then what is it?  Why are you treating me like you do everyone else?"

Jack was looking down into her bag and frowned.  "Star..." she said slowly.

Star looked at her a bit hopeful. "Ya jack?"

Jack shook her head looking up at star. "Just trying it out.   Whyd you change it?"

Star shrugged.  "You know people would have recognized me if I kept calling myself Sky, so I changed my name to Star Johnston.  Don't you like it?"

Jack shrugs.  "Getting use to it..... and you."  She stood up.

Star frowned.  "what do you mean by that? I'm the same person as before Jack."

Jack glanced at her then back to the little dresser stand looking for her brush.  "No.  No ones the same as they were before"

Star studied her friend thinking about what she said.  There was something definitely wrong with Jack.  She didn't know what, but Jack had changed since the last time she saw her and it wasn't for the better.

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  Star was digging her hole when miracle walked up.

     "I bet your glad to know you know someone around here."

Star looked up and shrugged. "It helps." She put a hand to her eyes to shield the sun. "You done digging?"

Miracle nodded. "ya.  When you get to doing it a lot.  You start getting faster"

Star nodded. "Ya.  How are the other girls?"

Miracle grinned. "Well lets see Buttercup is has got major blisters which I'm guessing you do too.' Start nodded in answer. ' and Jack is almost done.  And I am done so now I'm visiting."  She grinned.

Star smiled slightly.  "Well Sounds like your having fun"

Miracle smirks and rolls her eyes. "oh ya bunches."

Just then Buttercup walks over. "man I don't ever want to dig another hole again.  One is good for me" she smirked.

Miricle laughs. "ya well get used to it.  You got... how long you in here for?"

Buttercup grins. "16 months"

Miracle nods "well you got 15 months and 30 more days to dig"

Buttercup groans "well theres no need in being cruel by reminding me."

Star laughed.  These girls seem to be nice and easy to get along with.  Maybe it wont be so bad.  Now if only she could get Jack to lighten up.

Buttercup dropped down "I'd offer to help but" she holdsup her hands to show star her battered palms.  Star gasped.

     "ack.." she then looked down at her own hands and seen how bad hers were. 'This is gonna hurt more as the night goes on"

Miracle smirks "you think this is bad. Wait till the morning. You'll be really sore and its gonna be worse is all"

Buttercup and Star both groaned.

     "god have mercy on us" buttercup smirked.

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Jack finished digging and looked over at the girls huddled around Stars hole.  She tilted her head realizing that Star had grown up a great deal and probably didn't need Jack anymore.  Sighing she got out and started walking towards the tents.  She didn't notice the yellow bus approaching the camp also.

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Miracle fell over on her bed. "hichachacha. Did you see the yummy pieces of flesh that just got recruited here?"

Butter cup smirked. " That hot huh?"

Miracle made a fake drooling scene.

Star laughed slightly.  "what do they look like I missed it."

Miracle grinned.."Mmm  handsome, with hair you just want to run your fingers through and body to die for dreamy eyes and butts you just want to go up and grab"

Buttercup stood up "really where I got an itchy hand.  Direct me and I shall grabb" she laughed jokingly.

Star laughed. "oh no.  Miracle you've created a monster."

Miracle laughed and nodded.  Butter cup threw  pillows at them and they caught them falling over laughing.

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Jack was walking to the wreck room when Barf bag, Zig Zag, Squid, and two other guys she hadn't seen before walked up to her.

     "hey jack meet the newbies.  This here is Eric" the boy nodded smiling.  Eric kinda short with light brown hair and eyes that were the color of the sky after a storm.  "and this is Spot conlon"  Spot winked at her.  Jack just stared at him her expression never changning.  Spot was good looking with piercing blue eyes dark blond hair and slightly short. 

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eeeee sorry I got to stop here. Bell rang. By guys hope you enjoy it ;)