shoutouts:
NOsilla: lol im glad you like it lol heres some more :)
Texas Volcano: ok.. thanx for the critisim.. btw this is my story
so if i want barf and caveman inthere at the same time
they will be. Im not goin exactly by the movie THis is
my story. Ok. And ifyou really dont like it or my
spelling, then dont read it, no ones forcing you to. So far
your the only one with a complaint. Everyone else looks past
the grammer and actually reads the story that i am putting
on. THats the point to read it. I didnt put this on here for you
to come and say oh that aint right. You forgot a perod
and so on and so on. No. im trying to get my writing out
so sorry you hate it. I wasnt really thinking of you and yoru likes
when i wrote it. thank you anyways.
brooky dear yo9u cant have spot lol ;p.
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buttercup saw barf talking to star. She frowned, *oh yeah, two
can play at that game* she thought to herself and looked over by
the pool table where she spotted zaiden. She walked up to him
"hey zaiden."
Zaiden looked at her then around him "you talking to me?"
"Is your name zaiden" she said rolling her eyes.
"mm but i thought you said i was disgusting and pigheaded. Flattered
as i was, but the last thing i thought, is to see you coming back
for more. Was i right?"
Buttercup rolled her eyes. "oh get over yourself, If you promise
to stop being stuck on yoruself and pay attention to me then i'll think
about seeing you again"
"pay attention to you? but i thought i was giving you all the attention
in the world" he smirked.
"I mean me, not my boobs"
"mm you sure are a spit fire arent ya."
"well do ya wanna make this work or do ya wanna mess it up again,
its yoru choice"
"i'll think about it, how bout we do a trial eh,"
Buttercup sighed, "alright arlight whatever," she said "ill see you
in alittle bit" she turned and walked out.
Once she was out the door her steps changed into a storming walk.
"a trial run, whodoes he think he is. He's the pig, aand yet he
turns it around like im the one who cant be trusted. off all the
arrogent things" she fumed to herself as she walked to her tent to
get 'sexy'. "I hope you come to your senses soon barfy, cause i dont know
how long ill be able to stay in that dogs presence." she continued as she
threw cloths out on to her cot.
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miracle sat on erics lap as he played poker with spot and x-ray.
"Come on baby, I got my dibs on you"
Eric laughed. "dont give it away. "he grinned and kissed her lightly.
X-ray goraned. "Either you play or take it to your own room, this is
poker not lets make out"
Miracle laughed. "oh shut up x-ray i bet you dont have one
romantic bone in your body."
X-ray smirked. "well i have one bone and it seems to think it
can be pretty romantic when it sees what it wants"
Eric threw a chip at him "Man, did ya half to say somethign like that"
Miracle made a face "yeah jeez, i dont need to know about your
umm.. y eah"
X-ray laughed. "right, what can i say. I'm a ladys man"
Spot rolled his eyes. "Right i havent seen one with you yet"
"they come few and far between, Course you aint gonna see one with me
not until they bring more girls. Come one the x-man has to share, so ill
give to all my little pimp wannabes and once ya'all are satisfied ill
take whats due to me, THats what we call leader skills" he grinned and put a card down.
"Call"
"leader skills my ass, If you came to my hometown in brookelyn yOUll be
running scared" Spot replied
"You all have some serious issues" Miracle smirked. "Go baby you can do it."
she grinned rubbing eric's back
"arlight arlight, Striaght flush "he laid down his cards.
X-ray made a face. "full house ,man i new i s hould have folded."
"Come on spot lets see what ya got" eric nodded towards him.
Spot looked at him, his poker fac on and layed down his cards.
"Ace-ace-ace-ace-king of spades" he smirked.
"No way, youcheat" miracle pointed.
"naw im just that good"he got up and bowed taking his shower tokens
he just earned "thank you gentlemen your good sports"
"aww jeez luckly it wasnt armpit in here, " x-ray alughed.
"I hear ya man, " eric nodded and stood up taking miracle with him.
"Now that the games over we have to find out room"
"arlight" she whistled and winked at the other two boys. "have fun tonight,i know i will"
"aww man, dont tell us your personal stuff" x-ray threw a card at him.
"your just jelous" miracle said sticking her tongue out.
"of what?"
"of me, you know you want my little eric, hes a sexy bitch"
"oh man, dont even go there." x-ray said making a face.
eric laughed and cairried her out.
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tune in next week. Jack notices a new guy, but finds out hes really
an old one. NOt that way either ack... Does buttercups plan work out
will barf come around or will she be doomed int he presence
of zaiden. ehhehe mwahhaha .. find out in next episode.
Goodbye :)
NOsilla: lol im glad you like it lol heres some more :)
Texas Volcano: ok.. thanx for the critisim.. btw this is my story
so if i want barf and caveman inthere at the same time
they will be. Im not goin exactly by the movie THis is
my story. Ok. And ifyou really dont like it or my
spelling, then dont read it, no ones forcing you to. So far
your the only one with a complaint. Everyone else looks past
the grammer and actually reads the story that i am putting
on. THats the point to read it. I didnt put this on here for you
to come and say oh that aint right. You forgot a perod
and so on and so on. No. im trying to get my writing out
so sorry you hate it. I wasnt really thinking of you and yoru likes
when i wrote it. thank you anyways.
brooky dear yo9u cant have spot lol ;p.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
buttercup saw barf talking to star. She frowned, *oh yeah, two
can play at that game* she thought to herself and looked over by
the pool table where she spotted zaiden. She walked up to him
"hey zaiden."
Zaiden looked at her then around him "you talking to me?"
"Is your name zaiden" she said rolling her eyes.
"mm but i thought you said i was disgusting and pigheaded. Flattered
as i was, but the last thing i thought, is to see you coming back
for more. Was i right?"
Buttercup rolled her eyes. "oh get over yourself, If you promise
to stop being stuck on yoruself and pay attention to me then i'll think
about seeing you again"
"pay attention to you? but i thought i was giving you all the attention
in the world" he smirked.
"I mean me, not my boobs"
"mm you sure are a spit fire arent ya."
"well do ya wanna make this work or do ya wanna mess it up again,
its yoru choice"
"i'll think about it, how bout we do a trial eh,"
Buttercup sighed, "alright arlight whatever," she said "ill see you
in alittle bit" she turned and walked out.
Once she was out the door her steps changed into a storming walk.
"a trial run, whodoes he think he is. He's the pig, aand yet he
turns it around like im the one who cant be trusted. off all the
arrogent things" she fumed to herself as she walked to her tent to
get 'sexy'. "I hope you come to your senses soon barfy, cause i dont know
how long ill be able to stay in that dogs presence." she continued as she
threw cloths out on to her cot.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
miracle sat on erics lap as he played poker with spot and x-ray.
"Come on baby, I got my dibs on you"
Eric laughed. "dont give it away. "he grinned and kissed her lightly.
X-ray goraned. "Either you play or take it to your own room, this is
poker not lets make out"
Miracle laughed. "oh shut up x-ray i bet you dont have one
romantic bone in your body."
X-ray smirked. "well i have one bone and it seems to think it
can be pretty romantic when it sees what it wants"
Eric threw a chip at him "Man, did ya half to say somethign like that"
Miracle made a face "yeah jeez, i dont need to know about your
umm.. y eah"
X-ray laughed. "right, what can i say. I'm a ladys man"
Spot rolled his eyes. "Right i havent seen one with you yet"
"they come few and far between, Course you aint gonna see one with me
not until they bring more girls. Come one the x-man has to share, so ill
give to all my little pimp wannabes and once ya'all are satisfied ill
take whats due to me, THats what we call leader skills" he grinned and put a card down.
"Call"
"leader skills my ass, If you came to my hometown in brookelyn yOUll be
running scared" Spot replied
"You all have some serious issues" Miracle smirked. "Go baby you can do it."
she grinned rubbing eric's back
"arlight arlight, Striaght flush "he laid down his cards.
X-ray made a face. "full house ,man i new i s hould have folded."
"Come on spot lets see what ya got" eric nodded towards him.
Spot looked at him, his poker fac on and layed down his cards.
"Ace-ace-ace-ace-king of spades" he smirked.
"No way, youcheat" miracle pointed.
"naw im just that good"he got up and bowed taking his shower tokens
he just earned "thank you gentlemen your good sports"
"aww jeez luckly it wasnt armpit in here, " x-ray alughed.
"I hear ya man, " eric nodded and stood up taking miracle with him.
"Now that the games over we have to find out room"
"arlight" she whistled and winked at the other two boys. "have fun tonight,i know i will"
"aww man, dont tell us your personal stuff" x-ray threw a card at him.
"your just jelous" miracle said sticking her tongue out.
"of what?"
"of me, you know you want my little eric, hes a sexy bitch"
"oh man, dont even go there." x-ray said making a face.
eric laughed and cairried her out.
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tune in next week. Jack notices a new guy, but finds out hes really
an old one. NOt that way either ack... Does buttercups plan work out
will barf come around or will she be doomed int he presence
of zaiden. ehhehe mwahhaha .. find out in next episode.
Goodbye :)