Shoutouts:
volcano: have you heard of the phrase.
"contstructive critisim." and "Practice what you preach"
cause you suck. If you want me to take your notes seriously
then learn to use the right grammer in them also. Plus You
should put full words in them so i can understand them. You
obviously have the same problem as i do. Enlgish is not your
native language. And thank god your native language isnt
the same as mine either. So you should go read what you write
before you start taking other people down cause your no better.
If you really want to continue to read my story, then your just
gonna have to get used to my grammer problems cause they are
gonna be the way i make them. I did not mean it was my story as
in im the one who made the whole damn thing up. but the creater
of holes did not make up the story i wrote so there for its mine.
alright. I already put a disclaimer and if you missed it. ill put
another one on. Otherwise if you have any more complaints
tell it to someone who cares cause i dont give a damn. Im not sending
this to any publishers. If i wanted to be serious about becomeing
famous and sending something in. i would most likely make sure it
was grammer perfect, but until then. THis is the best your getting
alright. thank you. You are the weakest link. GOodbye. :) As corny
as that was. THats how i feel about you.
Trinity: heygirl.. thanks a whole lot :) heheheim glad you liked your
chappies.. isnt it fun to come back and read more than what you thought
well atleast when you enjoy it lol :)
Brookly: runs and huggles* hey ya heheheheh...
Disclaimer: i dont OWN HOLES OR THE IDEA FOR THE HOLES GUYS, but i do
own the IDEA For THIS STory. AND my characters. EXCEPT Stars outershell and
possible background once i think of it. BUTTERCUP and MIRaCLE and ERIC and SPOT
and anyone else who is a new character who i havent named but once i reammeber
i will name next time. THank yoU.
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barf turned to her* "What do you think your doin?"
Buttercup looked at him innocently. "Um.. you wanted to talk to me
so i came out here with you what else should i be doin?"
Barf shook his head. "YOu know what i mean. HE is just gonna
try and get down your pants. are you stupid or something. I really didnt
think you were so naive but if you are then.. God.. get a clue"
Buttercup frowned. "jeesus barf ya dont have to be such an ass hole
i thought you were a nice guy but man i guess i was wrong" she frowned and stormed
back in.
Barf growned and kicked the wall the grabbed his foot" goddammit that hurt" he said.
When he was able to feel his foot again he went back to his tent.
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when they got back to camp zigzag looked at jack
"hey ihad a nice time"
Jack raised a brow "you sound as if we were on a date"
ZIg shrugged. "i could only hope"
Jack nods "Right. ok your scaring me now, im just gonna walk away
have a goodnight and ill see you some other time." she waved at him and walked
into her tent.
Zig sighed and smirked. "shes coming to i can tell" He grinned and walked back
to the wreck room whistling.
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Star sat up when she saw jack "hey.. jack comehere"
jack looked at her then headed towards stars cot.
"whats up sky.. er i mean star"
Star shook her head. "nothing. so how you been? hows camp?"
Jack shrugged raising a brow. "arlight." she looked at start
leary and sat down.
star nods and grins. "do you remember that time you me and benny
all went skiing for the first time"
Jack looked at her and nodded. "yeah... " she frowned.
Star nods "mmm.. benny could never get her balance. she broke her arm
that time."
jack frowns more and looks down at her hands. " whats with the
trip down memory lane?"
Star shrugs. "no reason, i just thought." she shrugged again.
"nevermind"
Jack nods "well if there isnt anything else. " she said and stood up.
Star stopped her. "wait. How come you dont join in with all of us"
Jack raised a brow "why should i"
Star sighed. "i dont know, jack. Just.. why cant you be social for once
i mean.. your so stuck on yourself you dont reallize people care
about you and want to talk to you and stuff"
Jack narrowed her eyes. "Stuck on myself. Just who do you think you are. You're
the last person who should be saying stuff like that to me and you know it."
Star frowned and stood up "jack imsorry. ITs just someone has to kick
you in the ass and make you face up to life"
Jack shook her head "well if thats what you think then your not gonna
be the one to do it"
Star shook her head angrily and walked out almost ready to cry."
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Zaiden looks up at buttecup. "whatd puke want"
Butterfrowns "his names barfbag. Im tired im goin to bed." She didnt
feel like making him any more jealous tonight. besides zaidens comment
made her mad and so did barf.
Zaiden frowned. "but we hadnt even started."
"Then start yaself and ya can finish yaself too unless you get
someother stray to do it" she said and walked to her tent also.
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does zig see jack sooner then she had expected.
Does the new arrival help jack come out of her shell.
Does buttecup give up her plan and just go in for the kill.
does miracle and erics happyiness last?
ujmmm lol dun dun dund
tune in nextt ime to
jack goes to camp
ty
volcano: have you heard of the phrase.
"contstructive critisim." and "Practice what you preach"
cause you suck. If you want me to take your notes seriously
then learn to use the right grammer in them also. Plus You
should put full words in them so i can understand them. You
obviously have the same problem as i do. Enlgish is not your
native language. And thank god your native language isnt
the same as mine either. So you should go read what you write
before you start taking other people down cause your no better.
If you really want to continue to read my story, then your just
gonna have to get used to my grammer problems cause they are
gonna be the way i make them. I did not mean it was my story as
in im the one who made the whole damn thing up. but the creater
of holes did not make up the story i wrote so there for its mine.
alright. I already put a disclaimer and if you missed it. ill put
another one on. Otherwise if you have any more complaints
tell it to someone who cares cause i dont give a damn. Im not sending
this to any publishers. If i wanted to be serious about becomeing
famous and sending something in. i would most likely make sure it
was grammer perfect, but until then. THis is the best your getting
alright. thank you. You are the weakest link. GOodbye. :) As corny
as that was. THats how i feel about you.
Trinity: heygirl.. thanks a whole lot :) heheheim glad you liked your
chappies.. isnt it fun to come back and read more than what you thought
well atleast when you enjoy it lol :)
Brookly: runs and huggles* hey ya heheheheh...
Disclaimer: i dont OWN HOLES OR THE IDEA FOR THE HOLES GUYS, but i do
own the IDEA For THIS STory. AND my characters. EXCEPT Stars outershell and
possible background once i think of it. BUTTERCUP and MIRaCLE and ERIC and SPOT
and anyone else who is a new character who i havent named but once i reammeber
i will name next time. THank yoU.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
barf turned to her* "What do you think your doin?"
Buttercup looked at him innocently. "Um.. you wanted to talk to me
so i came out here with you what else should i be doin?"
Barf shook his head. "YOu know what i mean. HE is just gonna
try and get down your pants. are you stupid or something. I really didnt
think you were so naive but if you are then.. God.. get a clue"
Buttercup frowned. "jeesus barf ya dont have to be such an ass hole
i thought you were a nice guy but man i guess i was wrong" she frowned and stormed
back in.
Barf growned and kicked the wall the grabbed his foot" goddammit that hurt" he said.
When he was able to feel his foot again he went back to his tent.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
when they got back to camp zigzag looked at jack
"hey ihad a nice time"
Jack raised a brow "you sound as if we were on a date"
ZIg shrugged. "i could only hope"
Jack nods "Right. ok your scaring me now, im just gonna walk away
have a goodnight and ill see you some other time." she waved at him and walked
into her tent.
Zig sighed and smirked. "shes coming to i can tell" He grinned and walked back
to the wreck room whistling.
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Star sat up when she saw jack "hey.. jack comehere"
jack looked at her then headed towards stars cot.
"whats up sky.. er i mean star"
Star shook her head. "nothing. so how you been? hows camp?"
Jack shrugged raising a brow. "arlight." she looked at start
leary and sat down.
star nods and grins. "do you remember that time you me and benny
all went skiing for the first time"
Jack looked at her and nodded. "yeah... " she frowned.
Star nods "mmm.. benny could never get her balance. she broke her arm
that time."
jack frowns more and looks down at her hands. " whats with the
trip down memory lane?"
Star shrugs. "no reason, i just thought." she shrugged again.
"nevermind"
Jack nods "well if there isnt anything else. " she said and stood up.
Star stopped her. "wait. How come you dont join in with all of us"
Jack raised a brow "why should i"
Star sighed. "i dont know, jack. Just.. why cant you be social for once
i mean.. your so stuck on yourself you dont reallize people care
about you and want to talk to you and stuff"
Jack narrowed her eyes. "Stuck on myself. Just who do you think you are. You're
the last person who should be saying stuff like that to me and you know it."
Star frowned and stood up "jack imsorry. ITs just someone has to kick
you in the ass and make you face up to life"
Jack shook her head "well if thats what you think then your not gonna
be the one to do it"
Star shook her head angrily and walked out almost ready to cry."
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Zaiden looks up at buttecup. "whatd puke want"
Butterfrowns "his names barfbag. Im tired im goin to bed." She didnt
feel like making him any more jealous tonight. besides zaidens comment
made her mad and so did barf.
Zaiden frowned. "but we hadnt even started."
"Then start yaself and ya can finish yaself too unless you get
someother stray to do it" she said and walked to her tent also.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`````
does zig see jack sooner then she had expected.
Does the new arrival help jack come out of her shell.
Does buttecup give up her plan and just go in for the kill.
does miracle and erics happyiness last?
ujmmm lol dun dun dund
tune in nextt ime to
jack goes to camp
ty