Hello! My name is kariangel100 and this is my first fiction for card captor
Sakura, as you already know. If you like my story, please tell me, it might
help me write faster or not have writers' block! Oh just to warn you this
is an s + s fiction and I write slowly! Also rateing may change to R later
on, much later on, but will not be what you would think.
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*The Sweet Waters*
* By: kariangel100 *
* Rated: PG-13 *
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Summery: Children of all age have been mysteriously disappearing for centuries, abducted by the mysterious shadow. Each and every one of them has a gift, a small link in common. The sweet water and the light of the green-eyed blossom will save one boy, one prophecy, and the life of all theses children.
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===================== Part One: Green Eyes ====================
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Chapter two: That was Her life...
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* At three in the morning all that could be heard was the silent cries of the children that lived in the institution. Each and every one of them having nightmares of the past, the present, and the future. Haunted with their gifts, they were stolen from their families. Taken away to a place where they could be helped with control, but never have a life of their own. They were known as the lost ones. The children who could move thing by thought, control the elements, or can sense thing before they pass. But there is one who is special, one who can do even more. They, who the children named the shadow, called the girl, Green eyes. She had come from a powerful family of sorcerers. At the age five all, but her mother were kill by the shadow. And this is where I will begin.
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* A little girl stood there in the middle of the hall, staring at the door her mother went throw. She was scared of this place that was once was her home. Something was different in the air, something unpleasant. The house was too quite, usual you could hear small children running around and screaming their heads off. Women and men of all ages would be walking here and there, in-groups or by themselves. Okay... so the house was more like a mansion filled with family and friends. The girl loved it here; she was never alone. Now though, she was and it scared her more then anything. She looked down the hall and saw something or someone. "Hello? Is... Is anyone there?" She said in a small voice.
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* An eerie laughter filled the air along with a woman's scream. "MOMMY!!" The little girl yelled and ran to the door her mother had gone though. Before she could reach it, the door swung open. Death surrounded her, with their back hooded robes. Carrying her mother, they looked down at her. She could feel them smiling, coldly at her, the smell mold clung to them.
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*"What a beautiful daughter you have," he said to the women in his arms. The women looked at her daughter's innocent green eyes. She could see how scared she was. 'No,' she thought, 'She must be strong; we must be strong!'
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*"Run Sakura! Run from the shadow!" She screamed. With out hesitation, the little girl did what she was told. It took a few minutes, but they finally grabbed her.
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*"Take them away," said the same man who spoke earlier.
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* Sakura and her mother stood in front of a large table, fill with strange-looking people. A man with short black hair and reddish brown eyes smirked at them. He looked older then her mother by a few years, but still the youngest among the others. "What's your name, young one," he asked Sakura, but gazed at her mother, and licked his lips. Sakura looked at him with frighten eyes and tighten her hold on her mother's hand. When she didn't answer, he shifted his eye on her and with a stern voice he asked her again.
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"Don't make me ask you again," he said somewhat angry, after a few minutes of waiting.
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"Sakura," she whispered, too afraid to speak louder then that. The man smiled, 'she is beautiful, like her mother,' he thought to himself. Sakura had the same green eyes and angelic face as her mother, but had auburn locks instead of ebony like her mother. Both the mother and daughter had a mystique about them, although Sakura seem to be even more powerful then her mother.
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"This one is strong," he said and looked at the people who surround him. They all nodded, feeling the velvety power that the girl gave off.
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Sakura frowned and looked at the floor. She didn't like all these people staring at her, like she was some animal at the zoo. She didn't like this place either; there was just something not quite right. Most of the people she saw seemed happy in the outside, but in the inside she could feel that they were sad and angry. "What about the mother? What are we going to do about her?" One of them asked.
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"Yes. The child is young, easy to train, but the mother would become a risk sooner or later," another person replied. Sakura gasped, 'Oh please don't take mommy away from me,' she chanted in her thoughts.
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"Easy," said a man with black hair, "take her to my bedroom chambers." The men smirked and the women gave him a little nodded as they got up to leave. But before they reached the door, the black haired man sat back down.
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"Leave the child with me; I would like to talk to her a little more." He said looking straight at her. She gave a small cry as two men ripped her mother away from her. 'Don't worry my love, be brave...' her mother thought as she was dragged out of the room.
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Sakura sat down on a sofa in the man's office, her eyes pricking with tears that she tried to blink away. "My name is Mr. Han," he said softly, "do you know why you're here, Sakura?" He asked not expected her to know, but when she nodded, it surprised him.
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"Then by all means, tell me," he said trying hard not to show it.
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"I'm here because you need me... to be here," came her reply as she walked to the middle of the room. Mr. Han smirked as he gazed down at her, "And why is that?"
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"Because...," she said in her childlike voice, "I can see you future." He looked at her confused and watched her as she started to breathe deeply. Sakura's eyes became glossy and clouded over.
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"Sakura?" he asked worriedly and started to walk toward her, but stopped when she started to glow. Standing stiff she started to float off the ground as a visible wind engulf her.
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"Guards!" he yelled, not know what was happening, and didn't know what else to do. Three muscular men run in to the room. When they saw her each of them stared at her with amazement and fear.
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"There's a boy...," Sakura said in a different echoy voice, "one with the power over the elements... When amber meets emerald and sapphire unites with amethyst..." Screams could be heard, along with yelling and voice whispering something. Sakura could see flashes of the future. She saw people bleeding, fighting and some were running away. But above all else, she saw a cherry tree filled with blossoms. A boy about sixteen stood there with his amber eyes gazing at a girl in his arms. "When the light of the blossom fades, will be you undoing," she added before some thing horrible flash before her eyes.
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"NO," Sakura screamed, tears flowing down her cheeks. Mr. Han walked quickly toward her, with his eyes filled with anger. As he was about to grab her, a blinding pink light filled the room, knocking him and the three guards to the floor with its icy dampness.
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Then just as quickly as the light came, it disappeared. When Mr. Han got up, he saw Sakura unconscious on the ground. "Take her to her room. She has just proven her worth to me," he told the guards and grinned evilly at her. 'I thought her mother was special, but it seems that the girl is more valuable... I will never let her go...'
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======================== Five years later.... ========================
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Even in the fog, Sakura knew the path by heart. She didn't need eyes to see where she was going. This was the only place besides her room, were she could find peace and joy. In the five years she has been here, this was the only spot where she could be alone with her thoughts. Off in the distances she could see the lovely cherry tree, standing proudly and wonderful in the fog. When she finally reached it, she was welcomed by the sweet scent of its blossom. Sakura sighed as she sat down on the dewy grass. Slowly she opened a small book that she had been carrying and started to write in it.
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'Dear diary, I know it's been ages since I had written to you, but I have been oh so busy. My tutors have been getting me ready for a major test. They said that if I pass; I would be able to use my gifts outside the walls of the institution. Isn't that great?!? I will be able to see normal people who aren't like me. I'm so happy, but... I'm scared too! I've been having that dream again, the one with the boy and girl. I wished I could help them, but what can I do? I'm not like the other when it comes to magic. Sure I can summon the elements, but my true power lies in my visions. Maybe mom would know what to do... I haven't seen her in a long time. I hope Mr. Han will be nice this year and let me see her. After all, today is my birthday. I'm ten to day and I am one of the youngest members of the advanced class. But that's only because I am the only one who has tutors who make sure that I learn all I can...,' Sakura wrote.
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"Sakura," someone in front of her whispered. She looked up to see a woman with long black hair and deep green eyes.
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"Mom?!?" she yelled out and jumped up happily. The women looked at Sakura with a small smile of her face and opened her arms. Sakura ran to her mother and hugged her. They both laughed as their eyes sparkled with joy and happiness.
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"Oh... Little one how I missed you," her mother whispered in her ear before she pulled away to see Sakura better.
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The sun was about to set when Sakura and her mother sat on the swing on the playground. "Mom?... Have you ever had a dream that was so real, that deep down inside you know it's not a dream, but... Something that is going to happen?" Sakura asked, looking at her hands. Her mother sat there and looked sadly at her daughter.
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"...Yes... I too, have dreams that are overwhelming with truth and are so horrible that it burns my soul. It is part of the curse of our green eyes.... But you must learn how to use it," her mother said. Sakura gazed at her mother as the last remaining sunlight hit her face. Her mother looked older then she was and her once bright green eyes were starting to dull in color.
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"It's getting late we should head back before people start wondering where we are."
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"Yah, besides I got to start studying for the most importuned test of my life," Sakura told her mother as they started walking toured the distend building.
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"The most important test of your life," the women asked and chuckled.
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"Yes," the little girl exclaimed, "If I pass it then I get to leave this place and do all kinds of cool stuff. "
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"Leave the institute?"
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"Yah, they said something about finding others like me and..."
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"No!" her mother whispered more to herself then to Sakura, "No! No, no! God pleases No!" She stopped and pulled her daughter into a hug. Sakura was confused and tired to ask her mother what was wrong, but the women said nothing for along time.
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"....Sakura.... Something is going to happen and... ," her mother said slowly after minuets passed by, "There isn't much time..."
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"Time for what? I don't understand!"
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"Sakura listen to me very closely... Having green eyes is both our curse and blessing. There are not only going to use you to kidnap, but kill others like you. I can't let that happen because it will slowly kill you inside. We must escape...."
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Sakura lay on her bed, her mind was filled with thoughts of what might happen in the next few days. If what her mother said was true, then she must escape. But how was the question, no one in the history of the institution ever escaped. Which in her case wasn't good. It had all types of barriers that kept you inside and others outside, there was no way to just leave.
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R + R, tell me what you liked and dislike about it. Please no flames!! They're not nice and they can hurt an author's feeling after working so hard on a chapter. If I get a lot of reviews I'll update with another chapter, but don't get your hopes up; I still have a lot to write. Well good-bye! Kariangel100
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*The Sweet Waters*
* By: kariangel100 *
* Rated: PG-13 *
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Summery: Children of all age have been mysteriously disappearing for centuries, abducted by the mysterious shadow. Each and every one of them has a gift, a small link in common. The sweet water and the light of the green-eyed blossom will save one boy, one prophecy, and the life of all theses children.
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===================== Part One: Green Eyes ====================
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Chapter two: That was Her life...
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* At three in the morning all that could be heard was the silent cries of the children that lived in the institution. Each and every one of them having nightmares of the past, the present, and the future. Haunted with their gifts, they were stolen from their families. Taken away to a place where they could be helped with control, but never have a life of their own. They were known as the lost ones. The children who could move thing by thought, control the elements, or can sense thing before they pass. But there is one who is special, one who can do even more. They, who the children named the shadow, called the girl, Green eyes. She had come from a powerful family of sorcerers. At the age five all, but her mother were kill by the shadow. And this is where I will begin.
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* A little girl stood there in the middle of the hall, staring at the door her mother went throw. She was scared of this place that was once was her home. Something was different in the air, something unpleasant. The house was too quite, usual you could hear small children running around and screaming their heads off. Women and men of all ages would be walking here and there, in-groups or by themselves. Okay... so the house was more like a mansion filled with family and friends. The girl loved it here; she was never alone. Now though, she was and it scared her more then anything. She looked down the hall and saw something or someone. "Hello? Is... Is anyone there?" She said in a small voice.
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* An eerie laughter filled the air along with a woman's scream. "MOMMY!!" The little girl yelled and ran to the door her mother had gone though. Before she could reach it, the door swung open. Death surrounded her, with their back hooded robes. Carrying her mother, they looked down at her. She could feel them smiling, coldly at her, the smell mold clung to them.
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*"What a beautiful daughter you have," he said to the women in his arms. The women looked at her daughter's innocent green eyes. She could see how scared she was. 'No,' she thought, 'She must be strong; we must be strong!'
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*"Run Sakura! Run from the shadow!" She screamed. With out hesitation, the little girl did what she was told. It took a few minutes, but they finally grabbed her.
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*"Take them away," said the same man who spoke earlier.
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* Sakura and her mother stood in front of a large table, fill with strange-looking people. A man with short black hair and reddish brown eyes smirked at them. He looked older then her mother by a few years, but still the youngest among the others. "What's your name, young one," he asked Sakura, but gazed at her mother, and licked his lips. Sakura looked at him with frighten eyes and tighten her hold on her mother's hand. When she didn't answer, he shifted his eye on her and with a stern voice he asked her again.
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"Don't make me ask you again," he said somewhat angry, after a few minutes of waiting.
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"Sakura," she whispered, too afraid to speak louder then that. The man smiled, 'she is beautiful, like her mother,' he thought to himself. Sakura had the same green eyes and angelic face as her mother, but had auburn locks instead of ebony like her mother. Both the mother and daughter had a mystique about them, although Sakura seem to be even more powerful then her mother.
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"This one is strong," he said and looked at the people who surround him. They all nodded, feeling the velvety power that the girl gave off.
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Sakura frowned and looked at the floor. She didn't like all these people staring at her, like she was some animal at the zoo. She didn't like this place either; there was just something not quite right. Most of the people she saw seemed happy in the outside, but in the inside she could feel that they were sad and angry. "What about the mother? What are we going to do about her?" One of them asked.
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"Yes. The child is young, easy to train, but the mother would become a risk sooner or later," another person replied. Sakura gasped, 'Oh please don't take mommy away from me,' she chanted in her thoughts.
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"Easy," said a man with black hair, "take her to my bedroom chambers." The men smirked and the women gave him a little nodded as they got up to leave. But before they reached the door, the black haired man sat back down.
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"Leave the child with me; I would like to talk to her a little more." He said looking straight at her. She gave a small cry as two men ripped her mother away from her. 'Don't worry my love, be brave...' her mother thought as she was dragged out of the room.
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Sakura sat down on a sofa in the man's office, her eyes pricking with tears that she tried to blink away. "My name is Mr. Han," he said softly, "do you know why you're here, Sakura?" He asked not expected her to know, but when she nodded, it surprised him.
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"Then by all means, tell me," he said trying hard not to show it.
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"I'm here because you need me... to be here," came her reply as she walked to the middle of the room. Mr. Han smirked as he gazed down at her, "And why is that?"
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"Because...," she said in her childlike voice, "I can see you future." He looked at her confused and watched her as she started to breathe deeply. Sakura's eyes became glossy and clouded over.
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"Sakura?" he asked worriedly and started to walk toward her, but stopped when she started to glow. Standing stiff she started to float off the ground as a visible wind engulf her.
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"Guards!" he yelled, not know what was happening, and didn't know what else to do. Three muscular men run in to the room. When they saw her each of them stared at her with amazement and fear.
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"There's a boy...," Sakura said in a different echoy voice, "one with the power over the elements... When amber meets emerald and sapphire unites with amethyst..." Screams could be heard, along with yelling and voice whispering something. Sakura could see flashes of the future. She saw people bleeding, fighting and some were running away. But above all else, she saw a cherry tree filled with blossoms. A boy about sixteen stood there with his amber eyes gazing at a girl in his arms. "When the light of the blossom fades, will be you undoing," she added before some thing horrible flash before her eyes.
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"NO," Sakura screamed, tears flowing down her cheeks. Mr. Han walked quickly toward her, with his eyes filled with anger. As he was about to grab her, a blinding pink light filled the room, knocking him and the three guards to the floor with its icy dampness.
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Then just as quickly as the light came, it disappeared. When Mr. Han got up, he saw Sakura unconscious on the ground. "Take her to her room. She has just proven her worth to me," he told the guards and grinned evilly at her. 'I thought her mother was special, but it seems that the girl is more valuable... I will never let her go...'
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======================== Five years later.... ========================
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Even in the fog, Sakura knew the path by heart. She didn't need eyes to see where she was going. This was the only place besides her room, were she could find peace and joy. In the five years she has been here, this was the only spot where she could be alone with her thoughts. Off in the distances she could see the lovely cherry tree, standing proudly and wonderful in the fog. When she finally reached it, she was welcomed by the sweet scent of its blossom. Sakura sighed as she sat down on the dewy grass. Slowly she opened a small book that she had been carrying and started to write in it.
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'Dear diary, I know it's been ages since I had written to you, but I have been oh so busy. My tutors have been getting me ready for a major test. They said that if I pass; I would be able to use my gifts outside the walls of the institution. Isn't that great?!? I will be able to see normal people who aren't like me. I'm so happy, but... I'm scared too! I've been having that dream again, the one with the boy and girl. I wished I could help them, but what can I do? I'm not like the other when it comes to magic. Sure I can summon the elements, but my true power lies in my visions. Maybe mom would know what to do... I haven't seen her in a long time. I hope Mr. Han will be nice this year and let me see her. After all, today is my birthday. I'm ten to day and I am one of the youngest members of the advanced class. But that's only because I am the only one who has tutors who make sure that I learn all I can...,' Sakura wrote.
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"Sakura," someone in front of her whispered. She looked up to see a woman with long black hair and deep green eyes.
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"Mom?!?" she yelled out and jumped up happily. The women looked at Sakura with a small smile of her face and opened her arms. Sakura ran to her mother and hugged her. They both laughed as their eyes sparkled with joy and happiness.
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"Oh... Little one how I missed you," her mother whispered in her ear before she pulled away to see Sakura better.
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The sun was about to set when Sakura and her mother sat on the swing on the playground. "Mom?... Have you ever had a dream that was so real, that deep down inside you know it's not a dream, but... Something that is going to happen?" Sakura asked, looking at her hands. Her mother sat there and looked sadly at her daughter.
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"...Yes... I too, have dreams that are overwhelming with truth and are so horrible that it burns my soul. It is part of the curse of our green eyes.... But you must learn how to use it," her mother said. Sakura gazed at her mother as the last remaining sunlight hit her face. Her mother looked older then she was and her once bright green eyes were starting to dull in color.
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"It's getting late we should head back before people start wondering where we are."
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"Yah, besides I got to start studying for the most importuned test of my life," Sakura told her mother as they started walking toured the distend building.
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"The most important test of your life," the women asked and chuckled.
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"Yes," the little girl exclaimed, "If I pass it then I get to leave this place and do all kinds of cool stuff. "
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"Leave the institute?"
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"Yah, they said something about finding others like me and..."
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"No!" her mother whispered more to herself then to Sakura, "No! No, no! God pleases No!" She stopped and pulled her daughter into a hug. Sakura was confused and tired to ask her mother what was wrong, but the women said nothing for along time.
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"....Sakura.... Something is going to happen and... ," her mother said slowly after minuets passed by, "There isn't much time..."
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"Time for what? I don't understand!"
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"Sakura listen to me very closely... Having green eyes is both our curse and blessing. There are not only going to use you to kidnap, but kill others like you. I can't let that happen because it will slowly kill you inside. We must escape...."
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Sakura lay on her bed, her mind was filled with thoughts of what might happen in the next few days. If what her mother said was true, then she must escape. But how was the question, no one in the history of the institution ever escaped. Which in her case wasn't good. It had all types of barriers that kept you inside and others outside, there was no way to just leave.
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R + R, tell me what you liked and dislike about it. Please no flames!! They're not nice and they can hurt an author's feeling after working so hard on a chapter. If I get a lot of reviews I'll update with another chapter, but don't get your hopes up; I still have a lot to write. Well good-bye! Kariangel100