Author: Well since I got one review from my friend and one from someone else I'm making the next chapter. Sorry I was mean to all of you it's just... (Cry) I didn't get any reviews and I thought the story was great but I understand. Its only two chapters after all, you need to get into the story before you review ok so here is chapter 3.

Naraku, being only male, just had to check her up and down and he noticed...she was well endowed. He also noticed that she was very lovely, possibly lovelier than Kikyo. Her white kimono and deep blue obi brought out the color in her eyes. God, she had beautiful eyes, they were almost enchanting the way they glimmered in the moonlight. They also reflected her feelings quite well, right now; they showed fear as she looked upon the Hanyou standing in front of her. Although Naraku at the time was wearing his Baboon pelt so she could not see his face although she was quite aware it was just a pelt.

"Have you come to raid this village demon?" Ame said in a remarkably calm voice, but Naraku sensed her fear and made a light chuckle, thinking it was cute how she was trying to stand up to him. The chuckle sent shivers down her spine.

"And what would you do with that information, Girl?" Naraku spoke up, "are you planning to stop me if I were?"

"First of all", her voice rose a bit, "My name is Ame, not Girl. And second, the soldiers would stop you if you were to attack this village." She had to smile at the bold remark she just made.

"As you can see before me I think the... 'Soldiers' were no problem" Ames smile disappeared from her face. Purple smoke started to form at Naraku's feet.

"It is getting late, wouldn't you agree? I think I will deal with this village tomorrow." The miasma completely covered Naraku and the area around him. Ame covered her eyes to keep the smoke out of them when the smoke cleared, she saw Naraku high above her in a cloud of Miasma riding out in the distance. The last thing she heard him say was, "I shall see you again tomorrow... Ame-san"

That night, Ame told every man in the village about the demons attack tomorrow; but everyone just thought she was insane and didn't take her warning seriously. She went back to the inn and thought she would never be so happy to see Suzume. Ame told her the whole thing from the screams to his departure.

"You should tell the Warlord about it, he could help."

"Your right, I should." Ame saw the warlord at the table he was before, discussing plans for a battle in the future and other matters. She ran up to him.

"Kousen- Mikoto, (war lord) there was a demon that said he would attack the village tomorrow, you must do something!"

"Relax woman," the warlord replied, "My troops will arrive here in three days then we will deal with this demon you speak of."

"Three days! By then it will be too late, he's coming tomorrow!"

"Mind your mouth, woman! You forget your talking to a warlord!" Ame felt like screaming, why wouldn't anyone listen to her? Instead, she just ran out of the inn.

"If no one will listen, then I'll just have to deal with him myself!" She said to herself. She went back to her cabin and got a bow and some arrows that had been in there for no real purpose and headed out in the direction Naraku went.

Naraku was lying in a cave, still thinking what he should do tomorrow. "I should just kill the woman, just as I did Kikyo, and then destroy the village." He was quiet for a moment.

"Although I also wonder how she might taste," An evil smile appeared on his face, "I think I will see how she is and then decide if I should kill her or keep her... she was very beautiful after all. Unlike those whores I met when I was a bandit."

Then, he turned to look out of the cave.

"It's the scent of that woman; I should go see what she wants." He spoke in a joking manner

Ame was getting weary she had been walking for an hour now and she was very tired

... Almost there, Ame and then you will destroy that demon! ...

Her feet were getting really sore; she would rub them now and then but that didn't seem to help. She started to drag her feet and eventually tripped and fell down on the soft grass. She couldn't keep her eyes open anymore and so, fell into a peaceful slumber.

Naraku was following the girls scent but it was hard for him to tell exactly were it was coming from (being a Hanyou and all.) He would breathe in the scent periodically just to smell the sweet aroma. It smelled wonderful like fresh spring rain, which would make sense, Ame was the Japanese word for Rain after all. He breathed the scent in happily every time and never got tired of the smell, it was a wonderful scent.

He eventually noticed it was getting stronger, signalizing that she was close at hand. After he passed a large tree, he saw a mound of white on the ground. Knowing it was her, he walked closer and closer to the sleeping beauty until he was only a foot away

"So...she's asleep" He said quietly, not wanting to wake her up. He just stood there for a moment staring at her now that she was up close he saw how beautiful she really was he stared in awe not wanting to look away from this... Mitsukai (Angel). Her hair fell over her smooth fair skin, her expression while sleeping was so peaceful and had a certain grace to it. Kikyo could not compare, her expression though kind, was always serious and she lacked grace (which many Mikos did.)

Her face wasn't nearly as gentle looking as Ame's. For Naraku looking at Ame so frail looking and helpless got him aroused he started to imagine in appropriate things about the Jinteki (human.) So he gently picked the Shojo (maiden) up in his arms and looked at her one last time before they both disappeared in a cloud of miasma.

Author: So did you like it? I thought that was my best chapter yet, please remember to send reviews and tell me what you think ok!