Musings of A Junior
The Story of Love Hina, told from the point of view of Motoko's Groupie (the three girls from Raika Highschool who keep following Motoko around). For those not familiar with their names, they are:
Kikuko Onoue (the dark haired girl with a sharp voice; also the narrator of this fanfic)
Sachiyo Matsumoto (The short haired girl)
Emi Ichikawa (The girl with two buns on her hair)
Love Hina is property of Ken Akamatsu and licensed by Bandai Entertainment
1 week after Graduation Day
"Thank you!" I said to Miss Haruka Urashima, who was running the Teahouse we were having tea in, as she served our tea, then went back to the counter. We dropped by to see Motoko and talk to her about her inn's manager, Keitaro Urashima, who turned out to be that same guy Motoko blasted back at the overpass months ago.
"So what did you want to see me for?" asked Motoko. Before we could have a serious discussion with her though, Emi and Sachiyo got carried away...
"Oh! To be able to talk with the magnificent Motoko like this!" cried Emi.
"What a wonderful day for me!" said Sachiyo.
Motoko got very displeased, then suddenly got up. "I have to go now..." she said.
"No! No! Wait Motoko!" my two classmates pleaded. Motoko stopped.
"Forgive us for dragging you out here, but we asked to see you because we were very concerned about you." I flatly said. "We wanted to warn you about something."
"What do you mean? Warn me?" asked Motoko.
"Yes, ma'am. We don't mean to be nosy, but it's just that we've noticed you've changed a lot lately." I told her.
"What?" she asked in surprise.
I confronted her. "Until recently, nothing could disturb your concentration, your sense of inner calm. Your aura was like that of a wide smoothly flowing river. But lately, we couldn't help but notice that you've begun to lose that calmness. Don't you think that living under the same roof with a man might have some something to do with it?" I said. Motoko didn't answer but just faced away from me and sighed, and that worried me.
"Motoko, is that true?" asked Emi worriedly.
"So that Urashima guy is causing you problems?" asked Sachiyo.
"Um, no. That's not the case at all. Look, I appreciate your concerns but I have no problem, certainly not with a weakling like him." said Motoko. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have some things to take care of." Then she got up and left for the Hinata Inn.
"Oh wow, she's gone. And it was so cool just to be with her" said Emi wistfully.
"Yeah" Sachiyo agreed.
"I admit I might have been hard on her there, but it bothers me she's living with that Urashima guy. I mean, you know what he did back just after Motoko got back from Training Camp right?" I said.
"Yeah! That jerk! And he still has the nerve to be in the same roof with Motoko?" said Sachiyo.
"Hmmph! I hope Motoko punishes him for his crimes!" said Emi.
"Well, there's nothing more we can do here though. Anyway it's getting late and our parents might be worried about us. We'd better get going girls!" I said.
"Okay!" said Emi and Sachiyo.
"Miss Haruka, check please!" I called to Haruka.
1 Month later
"Hey! Over here!" I called to Emi and Sachiyo, who just arrived at the station where I was waiting.
"Hey Kikuko! There you are!" said Emi.
"Sorry to have kept you waiting" said Sachiyo.
"At least we didn't miss the train. Oh there it is." I said, as the train finally arrived. We were going out to town for some fun at the amusement park, but we had no idea was in store for us that moment.
"So you got the tickets?" asked Sachiyo, as we started boaring the train.
"Yeah right here" I said. As I walked the aisle of the train looking for a seat, I noticed a tall girl with long black hair in a rather lovely dress. I thought it was just my imagination, but as I looked closely, it was Motoko! "Motoko? Is that you?" I said, getting her attention. Needless to say my companions just couldn't hold back their enthusiasm.
"Wow! Fancy seeing you dressed like that! You look so adorable!" said Emi cheerfully.
"Amazing! You look just like a princess!" said Sachiyo. I couldn't agree with her more. Sachiyo rambled on, "Your ususal masculine outfits are nice, but you look great in feminine clothes!" I didn't notice at first, but as I turned to one side, it dawned on me - right next to Motoko was that guy Urashima! And she's in a dress right at this moment while near him? What in the world is going on here?
"Hey! Please don't tell me you're dressed that way to impress men, not to mention this idiot right here!" I berated Motoko, pointing out Urashima. Emi and Sachyio didn't seem all that concerned though.
"Motoko, mind if I take a picture with you?" asked Emi gleefully.
"Oh me too!" said Sachyio.
"No! I want it to be just the two of us!" snapped Emi.
"No fair! Me too!" Sachiyo answered back. Oh God what has gotten into those two? Don't they see the underlying problem here?
"Forget it!" said Emi.
"Shut up! SHUT UP!" yelled Motoko, catching us by surprise. As the train came to a stop and the doors opened, Motoko took off running through the nearest exit, with Urashima in pursuit. The doors closed shortly after and the train moved on.
"Oh geez, she ran off." said Emi.
"You scared her off!" said Sachiyo.
"No you did!" said Emi back to her.
"Alright enough you two!" I snapped. This has gone too far. "Look, didn't you notice that Urashima guy was with her? I'm starting to get the feeling something strange is going on."
"Huh? Oh that was him!?!? Eeew!" said Emi.
"Oh so that's who the guy was. Eeech!" said Sachiyo. (Sigh) They never even noticed?
"Okay girls, this looks to me like a crisis situation. If you as me, I think she's losing it, thanks to him." I said flatly.
"Hmm, maybe you're right" said Sachiyo.
"Yeah I guess so. So what are you going to do about it?" asked Emi.
"As soon as we can we have to talk to her." I said. "But for now, let's not worry about it too much. We are going out for some fun right?"
"Yeah! You're right!" they said.
-TBC
A/N: To zan118, thanks for the little comments, but no, it's not going to be a Motoko/Keitaro fic. It will still follow the original LH story (i.e. Keitaro/Naru), just from the POV of Motoko's Groupie, though it will tend to focus a lot on Motoko since the trio almost only show up when Motoko's around (with an exception being in the Spring Special). Perhaps I might make a side story resulting in Motoko and Keitaro getting together in the future if I find it interesting enough.
The Story of Love Hina, told from the point of view of Motoko's Groupie (the three girls from Raika Highschool who keep following Motoko around). For those not familiar with their names, they are:
Kikuko Onoue (the dark haired girl with a sharp voice; also the narrator of this fanfic)
Sachiyo Matsumoto (The short haired girl)
Emi Ichikawa (The girl with two buns on her hair)
Love Hina is property of Ken Akamatsu and licensed by Bandai Entertainment
1 week after Graduation Day
"Thank you!" I said to Miss Haruka Urashima, who was running the Teahouse we were having tea in, as she served our tea, then went back to the counter. We dropped by to see Motoko and talk to her about her inn's manager, Keitaro Urashima, who turned out to be that same guy Motoko blasted back at the overpass months ago.
"So what did you want to see me for?" asked Motoko. Before we could have a serious discussion with her though, Emi and Sachiyo got carried away...
"Oh! To be able to talk with the magnificent Motoko like this!" cried Emi.
"What a wonderful day for me!" said Sachiyo.
Motoko got very displeased, then suddenly got up. "I have to go now..." she said.
"No! No! Wait Motoko!" my two classmates pleaded. Motoko stopped.
"Forgive us for dragging you out here, but we asked to see you because we were very concerned about you." I flatly said. "We wanted to warn you about something."
"What do you mean? Warn me?" asked Motoko.
"Yes, ma'am. We don't mean to be nosy, but it's just that we've noticed you've changed a lot lately." I told her.
"What?" she asked in surprise.
I confronted her. "Until recently, nothing could disturb your concentration, your sense of inner calm. Your aura was like that of a wide smoothly flowing river. But lately, we couldn't help but notice that you've begun to lose that calmness. Don't you think that living under the same roof with a man might have some something to do with it?" I said. Motoko didn't answer but just faced away from me and sighed, and that worried me.
"Motoko, is that true?" asked Emi worriedly.
"So that Urashima guy is causing you problems?" asked Sachiyo.
"Um, no. That's not the case at all. Look, I appreciate your concerns but I have no problem, certainly not with a weakling like him." said Motoko. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have some things to take care of." Then she got up and left for the Hinata Inn.
"Oh wow, she's gone. And it was so cool just to be with her" said Emi wistfully.
"Yeah" Sachiyo agreed.
"I admit I might have been hard on her there, but it bothers me she's living with that Urashima guy. I mean, you know what he did back just after Motoko got back from Training Camp right?" I said.
"Yeah! That jerk! And he still has the nerve to be in the same roof with Motoko?" said Sachiyo.
"Hmmph! I hope Motoko punishes him for his crimes!" said Emi.
"Well, there's nothing more we can do here though. Anyway it's getting late and our parents might be worried about us. We'd better get going girls!" I said.
"Okay!" said Emi and Sachiyo.
"Miss Haruka, check please!" I called to Haruka.
1 Month later
"Hey! Over here!" I called to Emi and Sachiyo, who just arrived at the station where I was waiting.
"Hey Kikuko! There you are!" said Emi.
"Sorry to have kept you waiting" said Sachiyo.
"At least we didn't miss the train. Oh there it is." I said, as the train finally arrived. We were going out to town for some fun at the amusement park, but we had no idea was in store for us that moment.
"So you got the tickets?" asked Sachiyo, as we started boaring the train.
"Yeah right here" I said. As I walked the aisle of the train looking for a seat, I noticed a tall girl with long black hair in a rather lovely dress. I thought it was just my imagination, but as I looked closely, it was Motoko! "Motoko? Is that you?" I said, getting her attention. Needless to say my companions just couldn't hold back their enthusiasm.
"Wow! Fancy seeing you dressed like that! You look so adorable!" said Emi cheerfully.
"Amazing! You look just like a princess!" said Sachiyo. I couldn't agree with her more. Sachiyo rambled on, "Your ususal masculine outfits are nice, but you look great in feminine clothes!" I didn't notice at first, but as I turned to one side, it dawned on me - right next to Motoko was that guy Urashima! And she's in a dress right at this moment while near him? What in the world is going on here?
"Hey! Please don't tell me you're dressed that way to impress men, not to mention this idiot right here!" I berated Motoko, pointing out Urashima. Emi and Sachyio didn't seem all that concerned though.
"Motoko, mind if I take a picture with you?" asked Emi gleefully.
"Oh me too!" said Sachyio.
"No! I want it to be just the two of us!" snapped Emi.
"No fair! Me too!" Sachiyo answered back. Oh God what has gotten into those two? Don't they see the underlying problem here?
"Forget it!" said Emi.
"Shut up! SHUT UP!" yelled Motoko, catching us by surprise. As the train came to a stop and the doors opened, Motoko took off running through the nearest exit, with Urashima in pursuit. The doors closed shortly after and the train moved on.
"Oh geez, she ran off." said Emi.
"You scared her off!" said Sachiyo.
"No you did!" said Emi back to her.
"Alright enough you two!" I snapped. This has gone too far. "Look, didn't you notice that Urashima guy was with her? I'm starting to get the feeling something strange is going on."
"Huh? Oh that was him!?!? Eeew!" said Emi.
"Oh so that's who the guy was. Eeech!" said Sachiyo. (Sigh) They never even noticed?
"Okay girls, this looks to me like a crisis situation. If you as me, I think she's losing it, thanks to him." I said flatly.
"Hmm, maybe you're right" said Sachiyo.
"Yeah I guess so. So what are you going to do about it?" asked Emi.
"As soon as we can we have to talk to her." I said. "But for now, let's not worry about it too much. We are going out for some fun right?"
"Yeah! You're right!" they said.
-TBC
A/N: To zan118, thanks for the little comments, but no, it's not going to be a Motoko/Keitaro fic. It will still follow the original LH story (i.e. Keitaro/Naru), just from the POV of Motoko's Groupie, though it will tend to focus a lot on Motoko since the trio almost only show up when Motoko's around (with an exception being in the Spring Special). Perhaps I might make a side story resulting in Motoko and Keitaro getting together in the future if I find it interesting enough.