Ok yea, im sorry and all that ive been BUSY WITH MY LIFE and I haven't been able to put my story up and all that but whoever gave me this review can die:
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Final Fantasy Unlimited
Chapeter 1: Beginnings
Pov: 3rd person
Lisa, Ai, Yu and choby sat inside the ghost train. Ai was sleeping of Lisa's lap and Yu was looking out the window at the weird surroundings. "Hey, Lisa? Do you think that omega will attack us again?" Yu asked "I don't think so Yu, but we have to stay on our toes, you know?" Lisa smiled at him then thought "at least I hope not this time. If only Kaze were here, then I wouldn't worry about it so much." She looked down at the kids, both now sleeping "I have to protect these kids, even with my life"
The train stopped and Lisa woke up the kids. They clamored out of the train, choby walking behind them, cheerful as ever "well now, lets start climbing everyone!" Lisa said, still smiling "awww...Lisa how can you still be awake after that train ride?" Ai said, she yawned and started climbing up the long stairs to the bright light at the top. "well...I...ah, haha!" Lisa laughed and Ai got frustrated again "there you go with that creepy laugh again, we really need you to stop that Lisa." Yu smiled behind them, he was happy that they were getting closer to finding their parents "hey, Lisa, your still looking for your boyfriend too, right? What are you going to do when we find our parents? You gonna keep looking all by yourself?" Yu asked. "well..." Lisa trailed off, they were almost to the top of the stairs "don't worry about me, just keep your mind set on looking for your parents. I'll be okay, don't worry about me."
POV: Spica
Spica sat in her room and looked out. She was wearing a dress that was all white. Down the front were little leaves and flowers, all still white but outlined in green. The dress wasn't the problem really, it was her hair that she couldn't stand. It was down, almost to her dark brown hair back now, and her crown was holding back some of the hair. She HATED having it down, since it was so long, she loked it up and off her face. She sighed and stared out the window at the long rolling hills and streams. She sighed again then wondered if she would ever escape from this place. She looked out a little closer to the castle this time. Near the mountains that surrounded the castle like a barrier, there was an old mine. She looked out towards it, squinting into the sun. she noticed a man coming out of it, he was tall with red-brown hair. A black cape with black pants was all she could make of him. But when she saw his arm she gasped.
The magun, he had the magun. She immeditly knew who it was and closed the curtins. He wasn't supposed to ever come back here. Now her captors would steal the magun and finally be able to get into the ruins of her ansestors, to unlock it's ultimate power. When she closed the curtins, the door to her room swung open and hit the wall. A lady, about 35, was standing there. She grabbed Spica's arm and dragged her down the hall toward the throne room. "her ladyship wants a word with the princess before she leaves on her campagin." Spica had no choice but to come with her. She was afraid that she may never get to go back home, or see her family, or her lover ever again. Tears welled up in her eyes, but she pushed them back. She had to be strong if she ever wanted to leave this awful place.
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There ya go! Yup that's the first chapter, and thanks for reviewing! Heehee, the next chapter will be up soon, I promise! - till next we meet!
