Love Hina " Exchange Student "
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. But I do own my character.
I am going to try a new method of writing, in my other story " Knight in Shining Armor " I used something like:
Keitaro: Blah
Now I'm going to try:
" Blah " replies Keitaro.
This is for the people who suggested if you don't like it blame them. Or give credit to them. :) If you do.
Thoughts will be like this
This is kinda of a self insertion story, if you don't like that please don't flame me.
Anyway I've spent enough time rambling. Here we go...
Keitaro woke up and opened his eyes and shut them up instantly because of the beams of
sunlight. " Ugh, what time is it? " He looks over to read 8:30 " Only 8:30? " He sat up and
rubbed his eyes and reached for his glasses to put them on. " Isn't something supposed to
happen today? Oh yeah that exchange student, boy I pity him. " He got up and went downstairs
to eat his breakfast when he made a realization. He was going to have to tell the girls about this.
A job he wished he didn't have. " Crap " he whispered. " Oh well gotta do it " And so off he went.
Keitaro arrived to the dining table and took his seat. Waiting for everyone to be seated before he made his little announcement. Once everybody sat down he stood up and began. " Everyone
I have a little announcement to make. " " What is it? " replied an anxious Shinobu. " We uh, well
will have a new resident coming today. He is going to stay here. " " He? It's a guy? " said an intrigued Shinobu. " Yes. " " Why can't he stay in the dorms at the University? " asked Naru "Well uh the thing is they're full at the moment. Another thing is he is an exchange student so he doesn't speak Japanese too well. He knows a bit but he doesn't know it fully so... yeah. " " At least he is trying to learn it. He's probably a little worried so let's make him feel welcome. " said Shinobu. " Well he better not be a pervert like you Keitaro. " answered Motoko." My thoughts exactly. " Naru responded. " Anyway when does he arrive? " " He should arrive about noon. "answered Keitaro. After this everything proceeded normally or as normal as things can in the Hinata household.
At about 11:00 something happened however. Keitaro was walking to his room after studying in the main room. For a little rest when he turned the corner and bumped into Naru which made her drop her books. Keitaro dove to catch them which mind you he failed in but when he turned to face her he saw right up her kimono. Keitaro all of a sudden got a nosebleed and muttered apologies. Naru noticed this and immediately jumped backwards mindful to keep the kimono down. " Pervert! " yelled an... well let's just say not happy Naru. Which promptly punched him into the sky. " Stupid pervert. " I was just dressing in good attire for our new guest when Keitaro 'accidentally' bumped into me and then had the nerve to look up my kimono.
Keitaro arrived back in town at the airport which if you think about it was ironic. He got up and looked up at the clock. It read 11:55. " Well just in time. " He waited patiently for flight 607 from America to Japan. When it arrived he waited until he saw a boy who looked about 6' tall. Had brown hair and average build. He looked about 21. " Hello are you Zachary? " " Uh Yes" he replied nervously. " Well I'm Keitaro, the landlord of the place you're staying. Nice to meet you. " " Hello I am Zachary but, you can call me Zach.Nice to meet you too. " They shake hands and Keitaro walked with him to baggage claim. " Uh, Zach can I tell you something? "
" Sure " "Well I didn't tell you this but uh it is an all girls dorm except for me. " At this statement Zach looked a little worried and somehow a little happy. " All girl dormitory? Well this'll be a bit strange. Anything else you didn't tell me? " " Kinda, I have a question. " " Shoot. " "You aren't a pervert are you? " " Excuse me? " replied a surprised Zach. " I am most certainly not. " "Good I hoped not because the girls hate perverts. Anyway let's get going. You need help with those? " " No I'm good. "
They arrive at the Hinata residence via bus and walk up to the front door...
Bum Bum Bum Cliffhanger.
Please if critical be constructive this is my first story doing this format.
Thanks. :-)