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" Exchange Student "
All I wanted was one good review so... Thanks.
Anyway here it goes.
" You sure you're ready? " asked Keitaro. " Why wouldn't I be? " replied Zach. " Well the girls are a little crazy. Can you take a lot of pain? " Zach looked at him a lot more worried now. " Why? " He asked suspiciously " Like I said they are a little crazy. " Zach was by now worried by those comments. " Yes, I can to a certain degree. " Keitaro had to be a little worried for the young man because the girls casually beat him up past a certain degree. "Well shall we? " asked Keitaro. " Sure " replied the worried young man.
Zach walked in second out of politeness and was immediately jumped on by Su. " Umph! " " I warned you. " said Keitaro " Excuse me but what are you doing? " Zach asked calmly. " Seeing if you are fun to jump on. " Zach saw what he meant when Keitaro said the girls were a little crazy. " You are better than keitaro! " said Su. " Uh, Thanks? " replied a confused
Zach. " So are you the new tenant? " asked Motoko. " Uh yes. What is your name? " " My name is Motoko. " I am pleased to meet you Motoko sama " Sama? " " That is the correct term isn't it? "asked a worried Zach. " Normally we use san Zach. Sama is very polite and we are used to not being so polite. " replied Keitaro." Well these are beautiful young ladies, they deserve politeness. As do you Keitaro. " said Zach. " Your friend is very polite unlike you
Keitaro. " said an impressed Motoko. " Yes, he is. Hello I am Naru. " said Naru. After everybody had met the exchange student Keitaro wondered exactly where he would sleep. " Well now we need to figure out where you will sleep. " " You didn't figure it out yet Urashima? " asked Naru. " Uh he'll take my bed. " " I couldn't take your bed. " said Zach. " Nonsense I'd feel bad if you didn't. " " I'll sleep on the couch. If someone wants to sit there just wake me up I won't mind. That is if no one minds. " The girls said they didn't mind but they all looked at Keitaro waiting for him to interject but he never did.
Later in Keitaro's room...
Keitaro had invited Zach to study with him when he decided to ask Naru something and just had to look inside her room without permission and saw her changing. Naru as usual noticed this and yelled and jumped into his room and without thinking punched him halfway to America... The long way. Zach being the gentleman he is was covering his eyes and muttering apologies. Since
she hadn't changed yet. She was surprised by this and quickly finished changing and went back into the room and explained what had just happened because Zach was wide eyed that she had just killed him or so he thought. She also explained she hated perverts and was glad he was not one. After which she left.
Later still...
Zach was lying on the couch thinking. Man she was violent hope I don't tick her off. Poor Keitaro deserved it he didn't quit looking. Still she was beautiful. Though I also liked Motoko. Hehe it was going to be a long school year.
End Chapter
How was it?
Good?
Bad?
Just having fun with it. :-)
Still thinking about pairings.
Anyway Till next time we meet.
" Exchange Student "
All I wanted was one good review so... Thanks.
Anyway here it goes.
" You sure you're ready? " asked Keitaro. " Why wouldn't I be? " replied Zach. " Well the girls are a little crazy. Can you take a lot of pain? " Zach looked at him a lot more worried now. " Why? " He asked suspiciously " Like I said they are a little crazy. " Zach was by now worried by those comments. " Yes, I can to a certain degree. " Keitaro had to be a little worried for the young man because the girls casually beat him up past a certain degree. "Well shall we? " asked Keitaro. " Sure " replied the worried young man.
Zach walked in second out of politeness and was immediately jumped on by Su. " Umph! " " I warned you. " said Keitaro " Excuse me but what are you doing? " Zach asked calmly. " Seeing if you are fun to jump on. " Zach saw what he meant when Keitaro said the girls were a little crazy. " You are better than keitaro! " said Su. " Uh, Thanks? " replied a confused
Zach. " So are you the new tenant? " asked Motoko. " Uh yes. What is your name? " " My name is Motoko. " I am pleased to meet you Motoko sama " Sama? " " That is the correct term isn't it? "asked a worried Zach. " Normally we use san Zach. Sama is very polite and we are used to not being so polite. " replied Keitaro." Well these are beautiful young ladies, they deserve politeness. As do you Keitaro. " said Zach. " Your friend is very polite unlike you
Keitaro. " said an impressed Motoko. " Yes, he is. Hello I am Naru. " said Naru. After everybody had met the exchange student Keitaro wondered exactly where he would sleep. " Well now we need to figure out where you will sleep. " " You didn't figure it out yet Urashima? " asked Naru. " Uh he'll take my bed. " " I couldn't take your bed. " said Zach. " Nonsense I'd feel bad if you didn't. " " I'll sleep on the couch. If someone wants to sit there just wake me up I won't mind. That is if no one minds. " The girls said they didn't mind but they all looked at Keitaro waiting for him to interject but he never did.
Later in Keitaro's room...
Keitaro had invited Zach to study with him when he decided to ask Naru something and just had to look inside her room without permission and saw her changing. Naru as usual noticed this and yelled and jumped into his room and without thinking punched him halfway to America... The long way. Zach being the gentleman he is was covering his eyes and muttering apologies. Since
she hadn't changed yet. She was surprised by this and quickly finished changing and went back into the room and explained what had just happened because Zach was wide eyed that she had just killed him or so he thought. She also explained she hated perverts and was glad he was not one. After which she left.
Later still...
Zach was lying on the couch thinking. Man she was violent hope I don't tick her off. Poor Keitaro deserved it he didn't quit looking. Still she was beautiful. Though I also liked Motoko. Hehe it was going to be a long school year.
End Chapter
How was it?
Good?
Bad?
Just having fun with it. :-)
Still thinking about pairings.
Anyway Till next time we meet.