My first fanfic guys so please review and if you think I can improve it please give me ideas on how.

Chapter One:Intro

Beep! beep! beep!

A thin, but slightly muscled arm reached out and turned off the alarm clock.Ah, I don't feel like going to work today she thought, but got out of bed

anyway.

"Girl get out of bed and take a shower!" her dad yelled.

She hated his voice and she hated him. He liked to hurt her.

"I'm up and getting my clothes so chill," she yelled back at him while getting out a black t-shirt that said ditch him on it and a pair of blue jeans. Most girls wouldn't dare yell at her dad,but she wasn't going to show him that he scared her.

"Don't yell at me," her dad said.

She ignored him and walked into the bathroom to take a shower.

Koenma's Office

"What is it now?" Yusuke yelled grumpily. He was still mad that he had to get up at noon on the weekend.

"Well I have another mission for you so sit down and listen," Koenma said.

"Ok were listening Koenma, so spit it out so we can get going,"Yusuke said.

"Yeah I'm tired Koenma," Kuwabara complained.

"Shut up idiot," Hiei said while glaring at Kuwabara.

"You want to start something shrimp?" Kuwabara yelled.

"You guys quiet down we need to find out the mission," Kurama said calmly inturpting the two.

Everyone quieted down and looked at Koenma.

"Thank you Kurama," Koenma said "now your mission is to bring this demon girl to me," he held up a picture of a demon girl with white hair, ears,tail, and she had scarlet eyes that looked like they could see right into your soul. She was also tan and thin, but you could tell she exercised alot.

"She's pretty," Kuwabara said starting to drool.

"Ahem, she is abused by her father and can't escape his grasp therefore you four will help her get away." Koenma finished.

"So your saying her dad is a sicko who likes to beat up his own daughter and we're supposed to bring her here so he can't get to her?" Yusuke asked.

"Yes," Koenma answered.

"What a jerk, I Kazuma(sp)Kuwabara shall save the lovely lady," Kuwabara stated fiercly.

Yusuke rolled his eyes.

"It wouldn't be that easy if her dad was home because he's a powerful demon,but sorces tell me he's leaving the house for two days so those would be the days to get her," Koenma said "Oh and if you have problems getting her to come Kurama is the one to deal with her since he is the most fit for the job got it,"

"hn," Hiei said.

"Yes, but what do you mean Kurama is the most fit for the job what about the rest of us?"Yusuke yelled.

"Simple Kuwabara and you would scare her off by being perverted and Hiei would lose patience and end up knocking her out which means Kurama is the most fit for the job," Koenma stated.

"Whatever, how do we find her?"Yusuke asked.

"Her address is 20155 s. River Road it's six miles away from Yuskue's house, that's were she is most of the time,"Koenma answered "now go and get her and I"ll put a portal by her house so you can get here faster,"and with that Koenma began stamping papers.

They all left for the girl's house with Hiei muttering about saving weak demon girls.

I know that they're probably outta character, but I"m doing the best I can at that, so bare with me. Oh and I won't be able to update until next weekend not counting Saturday and Sunday because I have practice during the week,but I will put more up next weekend.

bye,fire03.